Confucius said, "I look forward to water."
"Look at the water?" The disciples all looked at the teacher with puzzled eyes.
Yan Hui said, "A teacher must observe when he meets water. There must be some truth in this. Can you tell us? "
Confucius stared at the blue waves of Surabaya and said meaningfully: "Water is the milk that feeds all things, which seems to have virtue. Water has no certain shape, whether it is square or long, it will flow downwards, smooth and gentle, and looks affectionate. Water passes through rocks and gouges through stone walls. It is never afraid and seems ambitious. When everything enters the water, it will clean the dirt. It seems to be good at teaching ... From this perspective, water is a real gentleman! "
The disciples were all surprised to hear the teacher's brave words. Who would have thought that from this ordinary flowing water, the teacher could see such a profound truth!
Selected from Confucius Youchun, Volume 12, Six-year Primary School Chinese, Jiangsu Education Edition.
Comments:
In the face of the common green waves of running water, Confucius can find such a profound truth from it, and skillfully use running water to teach his disciples the truth of being a man: to be a real gentleman like water; Have virtue, support all beings, and never stop; Affectionate, modest and smooth; Ambitious and fearless; But also good at educating others and cleaning the dirt from people's hearts. ...
Confucius did not preach condescendingly, but meditated on the water, taking water as a metaphor to make people think deeply. Confucius' great personality and superb educational art can be seen here.
I. Navigation stations
The main content of the text and the guidance of the full text
Spring is a beautiful season, with pink and green, green grass and rippling spring breeze, showing a vibrant scene everywhere. The river also rose, and there was an explosion of microwaves. Swallows in the south skim the water and fly far and far in the blink of an eye. The warm sunshine shines on the earth, and everything seems to be full of vitality. How pleasant it is to play by the river in the suburbs at this time! One day more than two thousand years ago, Confucius, a great scholar and educator, came to the Surabaya River with his disciples. In the embrace of nature, they are talking, singing and enjoying the beauty of nature and life.
The article "Confucius' Spring Tour" starts with the description of the scenery, and depicts a beautiful and splendid spring scene along the Surabaya River for us. It seems that readers are there, enjoying the tour with Confucius and his disciples on the banks of Surabaya River, listening to Confucius' teachings to his disciples and lamenting the affinity between them.
The natural paragraph of the article *** 17 can be understood in four parts-
The first part is 1 and 2 natural paragraphs, written in the beautiful spring, Confucius and his disciples went to visit the beautiful Surabaya.
The second part is the third to ninth natural paragraphs. Confucius stared at the blue waves of Surabaya and saw profound truth from it.
The third part is the natural section of 10. Confucius and his disciples are singing by the river.
The fourth part is the natural passage from 1 1 to 17. Confucius was very excited to hear disciples Luz and Yan Hui talk about their ambitions.
This article describes the scenery along the Surabaya River very beautifully, and tells the story of Confucius and his disciples playing happily by the river, which gives people beautiful enjoyment and intellectual enlightenment. We can use these words to remember the clues of the article-
Spring scenery in Surabaya —— Understanding water —— Riverside entertainment —— Talking about ambition
Second, the boutique house
Appreciation and comments on wonderful paragraphs of the text
The sun shines on the earth. The river in Surabaya is pink and green, and the breezy spring breeze is like a beautiful piano, accompanied by the arrival of spring. What a great mother nature is! The vast earth is her broad mind, the dense forest is her flowing long hair, the warm sunshine is her bright eyes, and the warm breeze is her sweet whisper. ...
appreciate
I believe that after reading this part of the content, students will be intoxicated by the profound aesthetic feeling infiltrated by this text. The first and second sentences are about the spring scenery along Surabaya. Although there are not many words, there is a faint color of Surabaya River in spring. You see-
The sun is shining, and the eyes are bright and brilliant. Peach blossoms are in full bloom and are as red as clouds. Willow is green, swaying its gentle posture. The tender grass is so green that it forces your eyes. This scene really makes readers shine. Spring breeze blows gently, it is soft, it must be like a soft little hand touching your face. The spring breeze is beautiful, as beautiful as melodious piano music ... such a beautiful spring scenery makes nature more beautiful. In three or four sentences, write nature to the great mother in the form of a total score. Always write the third sentence, and write the fourth sentence in detail. Writing from the ground to the air compares the earth to the bosom of a great mother, the forest to her long hair, the sunshine to her bright eyes, and the slight spring breeze to her gentle whisper. These metaphors are very vivid, expressing her praise and love for nature. Finally, end this passage with ellipsis, leaving readers with endless aftertaste and rich imagination space. This passage depicts the background of Confucius and his disciples' travels and gives people a beautiful artistic conception. Confucius stared at the blue waves of Surabaya and said meaningfully: "Water is the milk that feeds all things, which seems to have virtue. Water has no certain shape, whether it is square or long, it will flow downwards, smooth and gentle, and looks affectionate. Water passes through rocks and gouges through stone walls. It is never afraid and seems ambitious. When everything enters the water, it will clean the dirt. It seems to be good at teaching ... From this perspective, water is a real gentleman! "
appreciate
The romantic spring scenery in Surabaya is pleasing to the eye, but Confucius' mood is not calm. The mighty Surabaya held up his feelings of flying, and in the puzzled eyes and curious inquiries of his disciples, Confucius' great theory full of wisdom and spirituality came into being. He said meaningfully. What's the meaning? A gentleman is a title of respect for a person with noble personality. In Confucius' eyes, water is a gentleman and a true gentleman. In the eyes of Confucius, water has all the qualities of a gentleman. Water seems to have virtue. Look at it. It keeps flowing, has no fixed shape, flows downwards, is gentle and sincere, and is really like a gentleman's quiet temperament. And the water that penetrates the rock and chisels through the stone wall seems to have a strong side, ambition and perseverance. Water can also wash away the filth of everything and return everything to truth, goodness and beauty, much like a gentleman's demeanor that teaches people to seek truth, goodness and beauty. After listing many characteristics of water, use "from this point of view"
Make a summary and draw the conclusion that water is a true gentleman. The ancients once said, "The benevolent enjoys Leshan, while the wise enjoys water." From this passage of Confucius, we can feel his keen insight and great wisdom in life. So why did Confucius tell his disciples about it? Confucius is a teacher who is good at education. Here, he inspired his disciples to become gentlemen through his understanding of ordinary water. Although it is not direct indoctrination and preaching, this subtle effect will have a far-reaching impact.
Third, the golden finger expression method tips
Concentrate on writing in a series of activities
When flowers are in full bloom and willows are green and pink in spring, people go out for a walk and enjoy themselves. The ancients called it a "spring outing", but today people call it a "spring outing", which has similar meaning. In the course of this tour, with the change of time and the transfer of places, many different scenes will be presented. For example, this song "Confucius' Spring Tour" contains descriptions of spring scenery in Surabaya, Confucius' views on water, teachers and students sitting around the shore of Surabaya, playing the piano and singing, and three people talking about their ambitions. A series of activities of the characters constitute a dynamic picture. The author did not write every scene in a series of activities of the characters with general strength, and some wrote it in detail, such as Confucius' observation of water and his ambition; Some of them are briefly summarized, such as the piano duet between teachers and students in Surabaya, which makes the article appear ups and downs, patchwork and focused, and makes readers deeply touched and impressed by Confucius and his disciples' spring outing activities. What does this expression inspire our classmates? We will experience many activities in our study and life, some of which are rich in content, not limited to one link, and may be composed of multiple stages or relatively independent small units. If you want to use these activities as writing content, how should you deal with the materials and make a layout after the exercises? We can learn from the methods used in the structure of this paper and describe some important links in detail. For example, this part of Confucius' macro view of water in Confucius' Spring Tour is very specific. First, Confucius' meditation on water aroused the disciples' curiosity, then wrote the disciples' inquiries, then wrote Confucius' profound answers, and finally wrote the disciples' reactions after listening. Although it is only a part of the whole article, the cause and effect of the matter are complete and clear. If an article has such a specific link, how can it not impress readers? And the part of Confucius listening to Lutz and Yan Hui talking about ambition in Confucius has the same effect. It is precisely because of these tangible pictures that readers enter the artistic conception described in the article.
A comprehensive introduction to the series of activities, and a detailed description of some links are emphasized, so that the article will not fall into the general straightforward description, nor into the tedious details, but give people a feeling of proper tailoring and rhythmic writing. So what do you need to pay attention to when completing such exercises? First of all, we should give a general introduction to the series of activities, which can explain the 1 natural section of Confucius' spring outing. Secondly, both summary and key points should be part of a series of activities and cannot be separated from other irrelevant contents.
Fourth, the educational park.
Innovation and practice
1, our classmates must have had a spring outing or an autumn outing. After learning this book, you must be deeply impressed by the key parts. Can you choose a link from your own activity experience to write specifically?
2. There are many images of teachers in our texts this semester, such as Anne Sullivan in Helen Keller's Teacher, Flaubert in Mo Bosang's Teacher and Confucius in Spring outing. What about their education methods? Do you like it? Say what you think-