Comments on the correction of primary school students' compositions (1)
The beginning of the composition:
1. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate. It uses the description of the environment to set off the character's mood, which is very artistic. . 2. The beginning is concise and to the point. 3. The beginning of the article is novel and has the effect of taking the lead. So that readers can have an impression of the characters as soon as they meet them. 4. The beginning of the article is engaging and attracts readers. ...the combination of points and aspects makes the article vivid, specific and appropriately detailed. 5. The language of the article is vivid and rich, and it is highly readable. 6. The beginning is extraordinary and attracts readers. 7. The beginning is touching and has real feelings. 8. The beginning of the article is very clear and plays the role of leading the whole article. 9. The article selection is novel and arouses readers’ desire to read on.
2. Composition process: 1. Describe with full passion... 2. Highlight the key points, appropriate details, and specific content. 3. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid. 4. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life, and makes people feel warm when reading it. 5. ...tells it to us in a relaxed and pleasant tone, which is endlessly memorable. 6. The narrative is natural and vivid, the structure is compact, the connection is natural and coherent, and the center is prominent. 7. When describing scenery, the language is concise and accurate, and the associations are vivid and emotional, and the scenes are naturally integrated. 8. By enriching the character's language and actions, it brings out the character's ideological quality. 9. The article is both narrative and lyrical. 10. Make full use of a combination of dynamic and static writing, supplemented by metaphors, personification and other techniques. 11. The young author observes carefully and narrates in an orderly manner. 12. The use of some exquisite words adds a lot of interest to the article. 13. The article is clear, graceful, smooth and coherent, especially the characters' language is humorous. 14. The imagination of the article is reasonable. 15. Through the description of vivid and vivid language, the readers feel as if they are in a dream. 16. The article has clear clues, prominent themes, and closely revolves around... 17. The detailed description is quite original. Very knowledgeable. 18. The careful and delicate description of the characters' language, expressions, movements, etc. is a major feature of this article. 19. The description is delicate, the flavor of life is strong, and the words and sentences are accurate and expressive. 20. The language is accurate, clear and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific. 21. The examples are described vividly and concretely, and the words and deeds of the characters are consistent with their respective identities. 22. The article comes from life, so although the language is not very beautiful, it is real and interesting, and the writing is emotional and reasonable. 23. The article is... written in detail. 24. The language is lively, lively, and full of interest. 25. Use a lot of spoken language in daily life to make the article more natural and friendly.
3. The ending of the composition: 1. The ending just points out the center. The language is simple but profound and thought-provoking. 2. Switch on and off with feelings and end with feelings. This will make the article coherent and coherent, and at the same time make the theme of the article loop back and forth, making it highly contagious. 3. The praise for the characters at the end is sincere and touching. 4. The implicit ending of the article not only highlights the topic, but also is thought-provoking. 5. Concentrate your emotions at the end, which not only reflects the beginning but also summarizes the entire text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go. 6. The vivid depiction of details can effectively reveal the inner world of the characters. This is the success of this article. 7. The article ends with..., it is concise and concise, but its meaning is endless. 8. The sentence that reveals the central point at the end of the article is really a clear-cut and summary sentence, short and powerful. 9. The ending is full of expectations and enthusiasm. The words are finished but the meaning is still unfinished. 10. The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read, and can't bear to put it down. 11. Although it is a small matter, the author describes it vividly and vividly, and the indispensable highlight at the end better highlights the theme of the article. 12. Although the story is ordinary, the emotions are sincere, abundant and touching. 13. The ending of the article is unconventional and gives people a feeling of wanting to stop. 14. The ending ends with..., which is implicit, meaningful and meaningful.
4. General comments: 1. The article is complex but not chaotic, and can be detailed and focused. 2. The article renders the atmosphere of... fully and appropriately, and depicts the focus of the article delicately and vividly. 3. ... is realistic and contains simple and profound philosophy. It is inspiring and exciting to read. 4. This article is full of passion, and you can feel the author's love for... from between the lines. The full text is clear in level and the sentences are fluent. 5. The case description is vivid, specific, interesting, and consistent with the previous metaphor... Finally, the author uses a few words to express his emotions towards..., which is touching. 6. The article is coherent and forms a complete image. 7. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can capture the main characteristics of things, the length is short and concise, and it is worth reading. 8. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable. 9. The article is detailed, well-organized, and the content is vivid and concrete. It can be regarded as an excellent article. 10. The close-ups are unique and full of interest. The full text is full of childlike innocence and fun, and makes you feel cordial when reading it.
11. The article can use fresh and interesting language to describe... The words between the lines are full of the true childishness of childhood, and the laughter is endless. It can be regarded as a masterpiece.
12. Appropriate detail and the coexistence of reality and fiction are the two major features of this article. The content is richer and more vivid.
13. The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and tactful, simple but not vulgar. It is worth reading.
14. The language of the full text is vivid and accurate, and the plot is exciting and twists and turns, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile. 15. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.
16. The full text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.
17. Pay attention to observing specific things and develop appropriate imagination. This is the success of this article.
18. The article blends emotions into the scene, expresses emotion while depicting the scene, and is good at using metaphors to make the article vivid and concrete. 19. The article content is novel, the structure is reasonable, smooth and coherent, and natural and accessible.
20. This article is based on real life, the material is appropriate, very innovative, the paragraphs are clear, the transition is natural, full of interest, and highly readable. 21. The language of the whole text is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it can be regarded as a relatively successful work.