Two pages of excerpts from Bing Xin's poems and appreciation.

1

Paper boat-send it to mom

I never refuse to throw away a piece of paper,

Save it forever.-Save it,

Folding into a very small boat,

Throw it into the sea from the boat.

Some were blown into the window of the ship by the wind,

Some are wet by the waves and stick to the bow.

I am still not discouraged, folding every day,

I always hope that a person can only flow where I want him to go.

Mom, if you see a small white boat in your dream,

Don't be surprised that it dreams for no reason.

This was folded by your beloved daughter in tears.

Wan Shui Qian Shan begged him to take her love and sorrow home.

Make an appreciative comment

This poem is divided into three parts.

The first section, writing action: I refuse to throw away a piece of paper,/keep it forever-keep it. Two "keep it" in succession not only formed a poetic sense, but also strengthened the poet's persistent feelings. They were piled up in a boat/and then thrown into the sea from the boat. In line with the previous two sentences, this "one by one" naturally refers to small ships.

In the second part, I wrote my will. The first two sentences: some were blown to the window of the ship by the wind, and some were wet by the waves and stuck to the bow. At first glance, what seems to be written is the ruthless interference of the natural environment, but it is actually an expression of the poet's inner pain. She knew that she would be separated from her relatives in Wan Li and could not get together for a short time. But she firmly believes that the love between mother and daughter can not be separated by wind and waves, nor can Qian Shan be separated by thousands of waters.

The third section, writing dreams. When people miss them deeply, they often pin their hopes on their dreams. In poems such as Spring Water of Stars, Bing Xin has written dreams in many places, such as "When I first woke up, I caught a glimpse of her in the clouds below the mountain." Another example is; "The dream is not finished-it's getting late outside the window,/I met Yi in front of the hall!" However, I feel the harmonious heartbeat of the sacred unicorn. Bing Xin believes that she misses her mother and her mother misses her. The boat she folded will surely drift into her mother's dream. She just hopes that mom won't be surprised that she fell asleep for no reason. Because it was folded by your beloved daughter with tears, Qian Shan, please let it bring her love and sadness home.

After reading Paper Boat, who will not be moved by the poet's devotion to his mother?

2

Sixteen stars:

Young man!

For the memory of the future,

Draw your present picture carefully.

[Appreciation]

This poem is very popular and easy to read. The poet warned us to grasp the present, study hard and work down to earth. Only by "painting your present picture with your heart" can your future career be brilliant and the road of life be broad. Only by "recalling the past" can we "not regret wasting our time and not be ashamed of doing nothing"! Only in this way can you proudly say that my life is full and meaningful. A "caution", with implicit words, infinite care and exhortation, can penetrate the paper.

98 stars:

Young man!

Believe in yourself!

Only you are real,

Only you can create yourself.

[Appreciation]

This poem mainly warns young people to build up self-confidence. They should believe in themselves, overcome themselves, surpass themselves, and not be afraid of the hardships on the road of life and the wind, frost, rain and snow in life. Don't flinch when you encounter a little difficulty, don't be discouraged when you are frustrated, don't be depressed when you are wronged, and don't be depressed when you are hit. Or the international song sings well, "there has never been a savior, it's all up to us."

"Star" 1 10:

Young man!

Compared with the elderly,

I know you're bored,

It's gentle.

[Appreciation]

This is a philosophical poem urging young people to establish a correct outlook on life and life. Young people should correctly treat difficulties and setbacks, that is, they should correctly treat "boredom" in life. In order to live, study and work, we must get along with people. In getting along with others, we are bound to encounter difficulties and setbacks, so we are bound to be "bored". We cannot avoid it. Be brave and optimistic to meet them. The ancients once said: "If Heaven wants to be the great task of Sri Lankan people, it must first suffer its ambition, work its bones and muscles, starve its body, and do its best, so be patient and get what it can't." This is a fact. Only in difficulties and setbacks can you increase your wisdom and talent. A saint said, "Difficulties are a fortune in life. Sometimes, when you look back on the past, you will inevitably feel worried and painful. Every day that young people face is brand new. Generally speaking, young people have no burden of life, no family drag, not too many chores, and there will be no great crisis of survival. Therefore, even if it is a little annoying, it is "gentle" compared with the elderly.