1. The teacher told you that the content of today's exercise is "fairy tales".
Second, the teacher provides you with some practice requirements:
1, a fairy tale sequel. We can continue to make up stories we have read.
2. Write your own fairy tales. Choose several animals, or several items, take them as the protagonists, imagine what might happen between them and write a story.
Third, the teacher solves the problem for you.
The continuation of fairy tales can also be called continuation or supplement, which is based on providing incomplete story materials, or supplementing the beginning and end of the story, or supplementing the middle part of the story, or continuing the story, so that the story is complete, the context is clear, and the beginning and the end are complete.
Fourth, the teacher helps you classify the compositions that continue to write stories.
Teacher Wu: Generally speaking, writing stories can be divided into the following categories:
1. Continue to write idiom stories. For example, the new version of Smith and the new version of The Tortoise and Rabbit Race Biography, we can also learn the story of Smith.
2. Continue to write fairy tales. Such as "The New Pony Crossing the River" and "The New Story of the Crow Drinking Water".
3. Continue to write literary stories. Such as "new journey to the west" and "The New Story of Pig Eight Rings".
The teacher will continue to write stories with you.
To continue writing idiom stories, fairy tales or literary stories, we should grasp the following points:
1, the continued story should be familiar to everyone. Although the previous story is not written, we all know that it can be clear at a glance by looking at the sequel behind.
2. To continue writing a story, you must read the material and grasp the center. For example, there are many ways to write Post-Smith, but it must conform to the animal characteristics of the article Smith: the tiger is fierce and the fox is cunning. You can't make up such a story that a fox and a tiger live in a foreign house, eat steak, become sons and live a happy life. Because it goes against the characteristics of primitive animals. Any design is allowed as long as it does not violate the characteristics of the continuation material.
3. Make a variety of ideas according to the materials provided, and after comparison and screening, choose the best idea (referring to the one with fresh theme, clever idea, familiar materials and easy writing) to write.
In the sequel, you can change the character's characteristics. For example, people who used to be bad are getting better now. If you think like this, you can write more innovative articles.
5. Continuing to write a story can change the time, place and environment of the story and give a new story a new development environment. Of course, there are many ways to write a new story based on the existing story, which can have different endings, such as continuing to write "Smith", writing that the tiger continues to be deceived, or writing that the tiger learned the last lesson and stopped listening to the fox's rhetoric.
6. according to the center and content of the article, continue to develop the composition form of its plot, that is, continue to write. However, it needs to be reasonably imagined according to the plot of the original text. Never deviate from the original content and central idea. The continuation of fairy tales should be consistent with the original in theme, language and characters.
7, continue to write a story, we must boldly and reasonably imagine. Continuation depends on imagination. Imagination should be bold, novel, but reasonable. How do we do this? When writing, you should pay attention to using your usual life experience and the knowledge accumulated by reading newspapers. When you continue to write, you should pay attention to the accumulation and harvest of reading at ordinary times and integrate into your own life experience, so that the imaginary composition you write will be easy, reasonable, innovative and have your own personality.
8. Continue to write a story, you must be able to change the angle, change the order, change the writing, and write it unexpectedly. A reasonable story. Continued stories can be written, edited, fairy tales or science fiction stories; Can be written in the third person, can also be written in the first person, as the protagonist of the story.
9. In the continuation part, we should pay attention to the paragraph structure and make it clear.
Please enjoy the wonderful exercises.
The new crow drinks water.
Since the crow drank the bottle of water, he was very happy and proud, and often boasted about his cleverness in front of everyone.
One day, it flew around, tired and thirsty, and kept nagging: "I'm so thirsty, so thirsty." Suddenly, it saw a well in front of it and thought, "Great, there is water to drink."
The crow stopped at the well and looked down. The water in the well is very clear. I really want to drink a well water to quench my thirst, but how to drink it? I see. Last time, in the old way. All right, give it a try.
Outside the well, the crow found many pebbles. It took one and threw it into the well. "Ding-dong", the water made a small splash, and another shot was made, "Ding-dong", and the water made another small splash. In this way, the crow was so tired that he flew up and down, sweating all over, but the water didn't rise at all. It thought, "Hey, why can't the last method work?" "Ha ha ....." Just as it was wondering, there was an old man's laughter. It turned out that a farmer wearing a straw hat witnessed the incident. I saw the farmer throw the bucket into the well and lift it again. A bucket full of water was lifted up. When the crow saw the water, he couldn't help drinking it.
The farmer smiled and said to the crow, "the water in the bottle has been replaced by the water in the well, and the situation has changed." You can't solve new problems in the old way. "
The crow nodded in shame and thought a little.
Example 2:
After the crow drinks water,
Since Grandpa Crow threw pebbles into the bottle and sang water, his wisdom has won unanimous recognition from the animals. Today, this family invited Grandpa Crow to dinner, and tomorrow that family will visit Grandpa Crow to study the scheme that can make him smart. Even the animal society invited grandpa crow as a consultant. Walking into the crow's house, there are piles of gifts everywhere, all from animals. The crow family won many honors.
One day, father crow took the little crow out to play. For a moment, the earth seemed to be scorched. They are thirsty. Suddenly, not far away, there are two bottles. There is almost no water in them, and the bottle mouth is very small. Seeing a straw in a pile of stones next to the bottle, the little crow went over and picked it up, put it in the bottle and sang water with relish. Father crow saw it and said angrily, "Look at your grandfather. He drinks water by throwing stones. He is famous for his popularity and drinking spicy food all day. Why not learn? " He picked up a pebble and threw it into a bottle to demonstrate. The little crow said confidently, "I'm not!" " You can't imitate everything, you must be innovative. You are tired and dirty when you throw pebbles into a bottle to drink water. And I drink water through a straw, which is clean and relaxed. Just drink water, this method is good! "
Father crow bowed his head. ...
Continue to write "fill in the blanks"
King Qi likes to listen to people blow one after another. Mr. Nan Guo, who was originally mixed in the blowing team, heard the news and had to sneak away. Mr. Nan Guo fled, thinking, "It's really not good for me to go on like this. I must learn to play the pole and start over. "
In order to learn to play the flute, Mr. Nan Guo asked around and finally found a famous flute player and worshipped him as a teacher. The master is very strict with him, and Teacher Nan Guo studies very hard. People learn it once, and he learns it three or four times. I'm still practicing hard when I'm asleep. After a long effort, he finally learned to play the flute.
One day, Mr. Nan Guo was playing the bamboo flute. A very learned old man passed by and was surprised to hear this wonderful voice. He asked Mr. Nan Guo, "You play so well, why don't you join Qi Wang's blowing team?" Mr. Nanguo is embarrassed to talk about his previous situation. The old man said, "It doesn't matter, as long as you play well now." So, Mr. Nan Guo went to the King of Qi to admit his previous mistakes and asked to join the Blowing Team. King Qi Jin forgave him and let him play a song first.
After blowing, the king of Qi nodded and cheered, and was put into the blowing team.
Continue to write four "Smith"
The new story of tiger and fox
Last time, the fox pretended to be a tiger and scared away all the animals. The tiger knew that he had been taken in by the fox and ruined his reputation. He vowed to catch the fox and eat it one day.
One day, the tiger and the fox met in a narrow way. The tiger whispered, "Fox, I caught you this time. Are you speechless? " The fox knows that no matter how hard he struggles, he cannot escape. If he does it again, the tiger won't buy it. As soon as he rolled his eyes, the fox said unconvinced, "I didn't find you because I was looking for food." If I find you, I will definitely run away. "
The tiger listened and said unhappily, "What, you can run past me?"
"Of course, I used to be a long-distance running champion, and even kangaroos are not as good as me!"
"In this case, let's race, from this mountain to that mountain, you must win, I won't eat you. If you lose, hey hey, I'm sorry! "
So the tiger and the fox began to run. In order to save his reputation, the tiger ran as fast as an arrow and turned red. The fox ran slowly on purpose, the tiger ran away, and the fox ran into the forest.
By the time the tiger found himself cheated, there was no shadow of the fox.
A new edition of Smith
Everyone already knows Smith's story. That time, the tiger was humiliated, which made him afraid to go out for several days. He is afraid of being laughed at by all animals. He gnashed his teeth and said, "Hum, fox, wait and see."
What's more, the fox was elated and thought, well, what a tiger king and paper tiger. Why don't I find another chance to fool him and show off again?
After a few days, the tiger couldn't stay in the hole. It's really a narrow road for him to go out for a walk. He met a fox at the foot of the mountain. When the tiger saw it, he was overjoyed: "Haha, here comes my chance for revenge!" " "The fox was scared to death when he saw the tiger's posture, but after all, the fox was an old hand at deceiving people and soon calmed down. He was all smiles and said, "Hello, Tiger King! Seeing him like this, the tiger was very angry and asked angrily, "Why did you lie to me last time?" "Let me ... Hum, what's bothering you?"
The fox blinked and said, "you are wrong, your majesty." Last time, I didn't lie to you I, I, I am sent by God, but yes, I am here to serve your old man and catch fleas for you. " The fox's glib tongue fooled the tiger. The tiger asked again, "So last time you swept my prestige, were you serving me?" "Well, well, actually I'm making you famous!" The fox rolled his eyes and said, "You don't know yet, your name has been written!" " Even primary school students know! "When he spoke, the fox stole a look at the tiger. He saw the tiger's face lit up and said, "Your Majesty, I'm here to serve you. If you don't believe me, I'll catch fleas for you now, okay? "The tiger completely believed the fox and thought that it would be good for him to help me catch fleas. Let the fox jump on his back. The fox rode on the tiger's back and pretended to scratch around. After a while, the fox said, "alas, your majesty, you have many fleas, but they are all hidden in your fur." You must move to expose them so that I can help you catch them! The tiger believed it and came over. As he walked, he thought, it seems that the fox really convinced me.
The tiger walked and walked, and unconsciously walked a long way. At this time, the fox sat on the tiger's back, touched the tiger's ass and patted the tiger's head, looking very proud. Words like "you can't touch a tiger's ass" and "it's hard to ride a tiger" are useless to him.
The tiger was quite satisfied with the fox, but he didn't know that behind the tree, in the grass and in the tree, many pairs of small animals were staring at them and talking about it. The tiger wanted revenge, but he was cheated by the fox. The fox once again showed himself in the name of the tiger.
After the fox and the tiger
Without eating the fox, the tiger had to go back hungry. On the way, it heard two rabbits whispering. One said, "That stupid tiger is stupid enough to listen to the fox." "Exactly." Another rabbit said, "the fox scared away all the animals by the tiger's prestige." How can we be afraid of foxes? " Because there was a tiger behind the fox, we were scared and ran away. The tiger realized that he had been taken in by the fox and vowed to cut him to pieces if he met the fox again.
The next day, the tiger was about to go out looking for food. He saw the fox who cheated him from a distance, so he rushed up angrily and prepared to eat the fox. Seeing this, the fox knew that he could not escape, and hurriedly got into the trap. At this time, the tiger has appeared in front of him and said angrily, "Fox, you lied to me yesterday. It's strange that I don't eat it! " The fox listened and said, "Brother Hu, don't be angry. I really didn't lie to you yesterday. " "Even so, I will eat you!" Say that finish, just stretch out your front paws. When the fox saw it, he quickly said, "Brother Hu, I don't think you are the king of beasts, but my big brother." "Who said that!" The tiger said loudly that it was just one of my eldest brothers. You don't believe me, I'll take you to ask. "The tiger listened to the thought, who is so bold? I want to teach him a lesson. So I followed the fox. They came to a pool, and the fox said, "That big brother is in the water. "The tiger quickly looked into the water and saw a beast that looked just like him. It had a big mouth, sharp teeth and looked fierce. The tiger growled at the "beast" in the water: "What are you? How dare you say that I am not the king of beasts, but brother fox? ! "At this time, the tiger saw the" beast "with its teeth bared, as if to pounce on it, thinking that it was better to strike first, and quickly rushed to the" beast ". With a bang, the tiger fell into the water and struggled painfully.
In this way, the fox escaped from the tiger for the second time.
Clever handling of foxes
The tiger has been serving the fox since then, providing some small animals to the fox every day.
The residents in the forest dare not make any noise in their eyes, but are anxious in their hearts. However, a clever little white rabbit vowed to kill the hateful fox.
Once, the tiger jumped out of a clever rabbit while catching prey for a fox. He bowed to the tiger and said, "Dear Mr. Tiger, can you listen to me for a few words?" You were cheated by the fox ... "Before the words were finished, the tiger became angry:" What? Do you dare to say that Fox King's bad works? King Fox was sent by the Emperor of Heaven. See how I punish you for being a disloyal guy! " The tiger waved its paws and was about to start work when the rabbit loudly said, "Don't be busy! Dear Mr. Hu, please hear me out! When I finish eating, it's not too late to eat again! " The tiger released its paw and said, "Come on!"
The rabbit said unhurriedly, "Dear Mr. Tiger, the fox is not sent by any celestial emperor." That time, you walked behind the fox. We are not afraid of it, but of you! The tiger was surprised: "Is this true?" The rabbit replied, "It's true. If you don't believe it, you can try it. " After that, he told me the plan he had thought of. The tiger listened, thought about it, and nodded in agreement.
The tiger went back to the fox's place and cried and said to the fox, "my king fox!" Those damn little animals call me your servant, and I'm a despicable thing! You can take it out on me! " The fox was furious and said, "What, they dare to scold you? I want to settle accounts with them! " Hearing this, the tiger cried again: "Oh dear! My king! Just ask the Emperor of Heaven to kill all those hateful little animals! Otherwise, I will die and can't be your servant. " Hearing this, the fox was anxious, but because of his face, he had to bite the bullet and say, "That … that's all right! I will take it out on you! " With that, he slipped away.
The tiger followed quietly, observing the movement. After a while, a cow ran head-on, startled the fox and turned to run back. When the tiger saw it, he roared, jumped in front of the fox, grabbed the fox and said, "You damn guy, you lied to me so hard, I'll make you pieces!" " "Said, and swallowed the fox.
Mr. Dong Guo can't fight wolves.
At that time, if the old farmer hadn't designed the evil wolf, Mr. Dong Guo almost died. Since then, Mr. Dong Guo seems to understand something. In addition to reading poetry books every day, he collects medicine and practices medicine, helps his neighbors, and will never show mercy again.
Another day, Mr. Dong Guo rode a donkey and carried a bag up the mountain to collect medicine. Halfway up the mountain, a wolf suddenly jumped out of the Artemisia grass.
When the wolf met Mr. Dong Guo, the enemy was even more jealous when he met him. The wolf is no longer the miserable wolf who was chased by the hunter, but shows a fierce face and says, "Old Dongguo, go, I'll get even with you!" " Last time you shot my partner, now you are at large. I want revenge! "Mr. Dong Guo knew that the wolf would not let him go, so he pretended to be pitiful and said," Mr. Wolf, I came to make amends to you specially today. "The wolf said," I don't listen to your explanation. I must eat you to eliminate my hatred! " "Mr. Dong Guo said quietly and slowly," Don't worry, Mr. Wolf, I brought you many gifts. " Then he unhurriedly untied his pocket and shook off all the rabbits and pheasants inside.
Mr. Dong Guo respectfully put the hare and pheasant in front of the wolf. The wolf looked at the game in front of him and then at Mr. Dong Guo. He thinks that Mr. Dong Guo never skates, and the food is real. Why not let the wolf drool? The wolf thought, I can't be cheated by old man Dong Guo this time. So it said uneasily, "it's not too late to eat you after I eat these things." The wolf felt reasonable after listening to it, so he wolfed it down. Before he had eaten half of it, he felt uncomfortable in his stomach. After a while, he kicked his paws, cocked his tail and lay flat on the ground.
It turns out that Mr. Dong Guo has spilled antiperspirant on the rabbit just in case. The greedy wolf doesn't know this. Looking at the unconscious wolf, Mr. Dong Guo thought: We must hurry back to the village and ask some young people to find it and kill it. Otherwise, it will hurt people again when it wakes up. So he ran to the village. People soon came to the village and killed the wolf on the spot.
Looking at the dead wolf, Mr. Dong Guo took a long breath.
Mr. Dong Guo and the Wolf (continued)
Mr. Dong Guo has hated wolves since he was deceived by them, and threatened to kill all the wolves in the world. To this end, he specially invited a group of experts to kill wolves, and he himself put down his books and learned the good martial arts of killing wolves. How many years have passed, and I don't know how many wolves died at his hands.
One day, Mr. Dong Guo went back to his hometown for a holiday and passed by a forest. He habitually looked carefully for the traces of wolves in the forest. Over the years, he has developed a sharper sense of smell than wolves. As long as the wolf moves, he can't escape his nose and eyes.
But today, he searched for a long time, but he didn't smell the wolf, let alone see its shadow. "It seems that there will be no wolves." Mr. Dong Guo said to himself. Indeed, in recent years, he has met fewer and fewer wolves.
Just as Mr. Dong Guo was about to leave, suddenly a wolf came out of the Woods. Strange to say, the wolf stumbled at Mr. Dong Guo's feet when he saw that people were not running. Mr. Dong Guo thought, "Is it true that wolves have become famous in recent years, and they will become such bears when they see me?" A closer look shows that the wolf is sallow and emaciated, with a gaunt appearance. I turned out to be hungry. Mr. Dong Guo let out a cry of excitement and said, "Good! Today, you take the initiative to die, but I don't skin you with your muscles! " Say that finish, he took out a knife covered with countless wolf blood.
Mr. Dong Guo was about to start work when the wolf suddenly spoke with a faint look: "Sir, if you want to kill me, I can't resist at all." But, I want to know, I have no problem with you. Why did you kill me? "
"Ha ha ha ..." Mr. Dong Guo sneered for a while, and then said, "This question is very simple, just because you are a wolf, a fierce wolf!"
"Hum," the Wolf's smile is more gloomy. "Speaking of cruelty, we wolves are much worse than you humans!"
"What?" Mr. Dong Guo flew into a rage. "You bastard, very close to death, how dare you a dirty lie? ! "
"Isn't it? We wolves have indeed killed many people, but how many wolves have you killed? Yes, you, Mr. Dong Guo, were deceived by a wolf and your life was threatened, but you should know that the poor wolf was also killed by hunters. Wolf eating people is just a kind of self-defense and self-protection. Are we wolves going to be slaughtered without resistance? How unfair this world is! "
Mr. Dong Guo has never met a wolf since he became a wolf. Let's be fair to himself. But when you think about it, what the wolf said is also reasonable. He was speechless for a moment.
The wolf then complained sadly, "You often say that the earth is your only home, but have you ever thought that the earth should also be the home of our animals?" You are self-righteous. In your human eyes, everything that affects your survival is harmful and must be removed. How overbearing and selfish you are! But we animals must survive! Have you thought about us? You see, in today's world, many species are on the verge of extinction, but people are overcrowded. In the final analysis, are we wolves cruel or people cruel? "
Asked by the wolf, Mr. Dong Guo was suddenly speechless. He involuntarily slowly put down the knife in his hand.
The wolf is still telling angrily: "if you humans still go your own way, you will get what you deserve one day!" " Now, you can do it. "The Wolf turned his neck and closed his eyes.
With a clash, Mr. Dong Guo's knife fell to the ground. He found some dry steamed buns from his bag, put them beside the wolf, and then walked out of the Woods without looking back.
It is said that Mr. Dong Guo never killed wolves again. Baidu Maps