In the Northern Song Dynasty, there was a Chen Sheren in Bianjing who happened to get an old collection of Du Fu's poems. He was a treasure. However, due to the poor preservation of this book, many words in the poem have fallen off. Once, Mr. Chen read the poem "Send a Captain Cai" and found that the word "bird" was missing behind the sentence "one bird is light, one gun is urgent".
One day, when he was chatting with some poetry friends, he raised this question, hoping that everyone could make up the most appropriate word. Someone wrote the word "disease", which is considered to be the best performance of Cai Shu's brisk and fast dancing skills. Some people think it's not good because the word "sick" in the previous sentence and the word "urgent" in the next sentence are "as light as a bird's body" However, Chen Sheren thinks that the word "degree" is too blunt to show the characteristics of being as light as a bird. Some people even put forward the words "down", "up" and "down", but everyone was not satisfied.
Later, Sheren Chen found a relatively complete collection of Du Fu's poems elsewhere, and when he turned to Poems to Dutch Cai, it turned out that "one bird is too light". It is appropriate to describe the Dutchman Cai as jumping high and fast, like a bird flying in front of his eyes.
2. The branches of red apricots are in spring.
There is a saying in Song Qi's "The Jade Building is Spring in the East" in the Song Dynasty: "The branches of red apricots are full of spring". Later critics praised the word "Noisy", and Liu Tiren's "The Meaning of Seven Fu Tang" said: "The branches of red apricots are full of spring" because this word vividly expresses the vivid scenery of spring.
3. The original sentence of Lu Xun's poem: Seeing that his peers have become new ghosts, he angrily seeks poetry under the sword.
Change sentence: endure to see peers become new ghosts, and look for poetry in anger.
This is a poem written by Mr. Lu Xun in memory of the young revolutionaries. The author changed the word "eye" to "forbearance" and wrote repressed resentment. Changing "edge" into "cluster" strengthens the harsh white terror and struggle environment in degree and atmosphere.
4. There is a saying in Zhang Xian's "Fairy": "Clouds break through the moon."
The word "Nong" comes out completely, and the author Zhang Xian emphasizes its role in creating artistic conception, thus making the whole sentence vivid, lively and fresh, melting feelings into it, personifying the scenery, thus creating an aesthetic realm with ambiguous artistic conception and blending scenes, and achieving the purpose of "one word warning can make the whole sentence strange" and "one word environment full"
5. In the Tang Dynasty, Ren Fan spent the night at Jinjinfeng Temple in Taizhou, and wrote a poem on the temple wall, "The new autumn is extremely cool, and the crane turns truffles and drops clothes. The front peak reflects the moon and the river, and the monk opens the Cuiwei Bamboo Building. " After walking for dozens of miles, he felt that "half river" was more appropriate and realistic than "one river". He hurried back to the temple to revise it, only to find that it was early.