Close? Keys? Words: 350 words in the fourth grade of primary school
Words: 350 words composition
This article applies to: the fourth grade of primary school.
Composition source:
This composition is about 350 words in the fourth grade of primary school. The topic is: Sun, are you a painter? ",welcome everyone to contribute enthusiastically. Sun, are you a painter? You paint the sea dark blue, like a blue gem; You paint the grass green; You paint the flowers red; Two children are playing on the grass, but you have painted their faces black.
Sun, are you a painter? Teacher's comment: The little author's poem is very creative and wonderful, which shows the novelty of the little author's imagination and is well written!
Poetic language is warm and lively, full of childlike innocence. "Two children are playing on the grass, but you have painted their faces black. Sun, are you a painter? " The second half of the poem is so wonderful that the children are tanned by the sun. The little author asks if the sun is a painter. What a poetic imagination! This article is a poem, but not in the form of a poem, such as "Sun, are you a painter?" You paint the sea dark blue, like a blue gem. "You can change it into the sun. Are you a painter?" You painted the sea dark blue, like a blue gem. "You painted the sea dark blue" was changed to "You painted the sea dark blue". "You painted the flowers red" was changed to "You painted the flowers red". "But you painted their faces black" was changed to "But you painted their faces black". (China famous teacher: Teacher Wang) 2010-7-1616: 25: 00