Online Comments on Water Atoms - The Melancholy Earl from Internet Literature

My understanding of water atoms began with his work "Shaving". At that time, I was just getting involved in online literature, and I always liked to hang out under the banyan tree when I had nothing to do. This new-style poem, which even had a completely new title, naturally aroused my strong interest in it!

"Nietzsche said that butterflies are destined to pursue love. Look, those flowers are blushing..." The beginning of the poem is very interesting, and the colloquial poetic mood seems to bring them closer at once. distance between. "Twilight/on the eleventh floor/the imagination of an afternoon/is what/was wasted by time into some/inconspicuous paragraphs..." Dusk, eleventh floor, afternoon, time...it is these unique and rare things Thinking images create the graceful beauty and uncanny creativity of poetry!

"Plant it, plant it/Mom said/Planting a tree is as simple as the rising sun..." The poem seems to wander between fairy tales and reality. The author looks at love from a child's perspective, The short and exquisite vivid artistic conception seems to be something that can only be expressed in the innocent way of a child.

"I gradually understood that/in the morning when the notes were in full bloom/I picked up/the cold shovel/and removed/your budding shadow..." In this "coldness", the poet My heart seems to have been taken away too. The cold shave is not just the shadow and sadness, but a desperate and unwilling heart.

“It’s just/I clearly saw/that my tears/drowned my entire spring…” The poem does not contain too many shouts and complaints, as if a pot of tea mist drifted in during an ordinary walk, Wandering around in the wandering. However, it is full of infinite melancholy and melancholy. The artistic conception cannot be achieved in a day. Perhaps it is these rare poetic artistic conceptions that made Atom on the Water become a representative figure of the new graceful school of Internet poetry. At the same time, it also created Atom on the Water. It has a unique status in online literature and is famous for its melancholy!

From "The Shave" to "The Years", and then from "The Years" to "The Peach Blossoms" and then to "Lipstick", Shui Atom's poems have also experienced from immature and superficial to concise and meaningful. The process, perhaps like more poets, must go through some growth experiences before they can gradually move towards perfection. Quoting the author's poem "Then I saw the frost leaves were very red, as red as February flowers." This was originally a prayer and wish for love (perhaps not only). If used here, it may be able to gain another meaning for So, let’s wait and see together...

Among the few prose works written by Atom on the Water, the one that impressed me the most is "Random Thoughts under the Moon", "In the Lamp Again" Looking at the moon, I was suddenly hurt." This sentence has shocked me countless times. It has special significance in the whole text and even in the author's prose works. I think it should be irreplaceable. There are not many essays on Atoms on the Water, but almost all of them can be regarded as classics, with poetic language, light thoughts, delicate brushwork, and an artistic conception full of infinite melancholy and tension... People can always put it down and cherish it. From "Moonlight Thoughts" to "Temple Blue", from "Thin Green" to "Traveling in Confusion", atoms on the water can always bring us surprises and unique artistic enjoyment!

If I have to use two words to describe the novels of Atoms on the Water, one is "decadent", and the other is still melancholy. The novels of Atoms on the Water are always stubbornly shrouded in a shadow of tragedy. , a helpless pain! The representative work is of course "The Bell is Ringing". The author used his unique black humor to sarcastically, ridicule, sarcastically and criticize life until he was completely naked. Perhaps, this novel is not favored by more people because it is filled with corruption and decadence, corruption and helplessness, but I stubbornly like it! The sharpness and depth shown by Atomic Water in the novel always make people feel a little scared. His maturity, sophistication, and humorous language skills are enough to put many well-known writers nowadays to shame.

From "The Passing of Dreams" to "Lights", to "Poisonous Flowers", and then to "Gege is Dead", the novels of Atomic Water have gradually changed from the selection of materials to the style of language. Be bold and rebellious, reaching the most sensitive pain points of the city. In his own words: I am just using the most hesitant and helpless words, and injecting a hormone called hormone, to slowly explain the city and love to people.

I think this is the clearest explanation!

Throughout the works of Atoms on the Water, whether they are poems, essays, or novels, they all have a unique and distinctive feature, that is, they always contain a tangible and intangible melancholy tone, which is exactly what they are. It is this melancholic tone, perhaps, that creates its personality and characteristics!