Every time kapok blooms, every time it breaks into a butterfly, it grows in an attempt and shines with life.
Try to grow up in the cold.
The cold wind swept the greenery of the campus. The sunshine in early spring makes the trees on the ground bare. The deciduous kapok tree stretches feebly, languishing and desolate everywhere.
A hearty spring rain washed away the footprints of winter. I bathed in the morning light and strolled in the campus in spring. Suddenly looked up, a touch of reddish came into view, as if lighting up the gray world, which made my heart tremble and I couldn't help but stop. Kapok buds are embedded in dead branches. She woke up in the cold of late spring, trying to face the cold wind and resist the biting cold. The wind came with desolation, and the slender branches shook and groaned. Kapok gritted his teeth and crawled on the branch. The cold wind tore her delicate petals, but she stood up her unyielding backbone. Strive to compete with the test of nature, and strive to straighten up in the gale. Finally, she withstood the erosion of the cold and blossomed a unique beauty in the branches. In the attempt, I saw her grow up, grow into several trees that have been red for a long time, and grow into the first vitality in early spring.
Kapok has blossomed. The leaping life and fiery spirit tell me that we will grow in the attempt.
Try to grow in a cocoon.
Caterpillars wrap themselves in thousands of threads. Waking up from a deep sleep and opening his eyes, endless darkness filled his world. No bright sunshine, no green leaves. Can't see the wind and cloud, can't see the spring flowers and autumn fruits. However, there is a firm light in his eyes. Faced with doomed setbacks, he tried to challenge his own destiny. The pain of metamorphosis troubled his body, and he felt hot pain coming from every corner of his body. He wants to break free, break free from this dark cage, and break free from the shackles of this soul. He shouted silently, trying to hit the thick silkworm chrysalis with his soft head. Once, twice, a hundred times, a thousand times. I understand that caterpillars are constantly striving to strengthen their physique and hone their will. Finally, the fresh air seeped into his heart and he opened his eyes. The sun is shining in the sky. He broke the cocoon and danced lightly
Break a cocoon into a butterfly. Brilliant colors and dancing posture tell me that we will grow in the attempt.
Get out of the cold and get out of the predicament. We need to try. In the attempt, let our hearts become firm and let our lives rebuild their value. In the attempt, we realized the fate. We opened our arms and embraced the blue sky. In the attempt, we grow, grow into kapok that blooms in the cold, grow into a colorful butterfly that breaks through obstacles, and grow into a new round of sunrise.
Grow up by trying. When you shrink back, remember every time kapok blooms, every time it breaks into a butterfly. If you grow up by trying, you will find that your life is full of spring flowers.
Test analysis: This question is close to students' life and their hearts. Students have something to say, but the topic is difficult and the proposition is limited. Pay attention to the examination of the topic. Everyone has his own growth history, and he will encounter countless firsts, but "trying" is not only the first time, but also seeking meaning and initiative to reveal the meaning of his growth. For example, watching TV for the first time and killing fish for the first time may not be meaningful for your own growth; It was my first injection. It was forced, not an attempt. If you don't understand the meaning of "effort", it will appear superficial. Another key word is "growth". Candidates should understand that growth is a process of gradual maturity, maturity of mind, thought and spirit, showing a process from childish to mature. At the same time, the topic requires combining with your own life, so if you try to write about Einstein, Newton and Su Dongpo, you must write about your own life experience. If candidates choose to write argumentative essays, they can cite other people's examples, but in the end, they should implement them themselves and reflect the significance of trying to grow up through their own life experiences. Linking the two keywords is to ask candidates to write their first experience that is helpful for their growth. However, candidates should also pay attention to writing their true feelings. Recalling the most touching and shocking experience in life, we must first move ourselves to move others, and avoid making things up.
It is very important to choose materials with high scores in the exam.
This composition test is not difficult, and the words' try' and' grow' are very suitable for students' real life. Whether it is campus, society or family, students are growing up through constant attempts. It can be said that growth is inseparable from trying, and trying also promotes growth. Almost every student has written this tentative composition from elementary school to junior high school, such as learning to wash clothes for the first time and riding a bike for the first time. From point to point, it is not easy to write this article well, and there will be high school and low material selection. If you only learn things by writing, it will be thin. Candidates show that they have gained some kind of life experience and physical and mental growth through trying, and have really written their true feelings. From writing to understanding, it is a really good article with high intentions.
Structurally speaking, the article must grasp the main line of growth, write the process of growth, describe it properly, pay attention to ups and downs, and be meticulous and appropriate. In a word, only with ingenious arrangement in structure and novel personality in conception can we get high marks. Learning to do one thing is only the growth of skills. If you can write down your feelings, for example, by trying to understand yourself, it is also a process of growth. Life is full of experiments. Only by excavating extraordinary experiences from ordinary attempts, paying attention to life, savoring life and feeling life, is the way of life and composition!