Write about the beautiful scenery you have visited.

Guilin is full of scenic spots, among which the landscape of Lijiang River is a model. Hearing the story that "Guilin's landscape is the best in the world and Yangshuo is the best in Guilin", we chose the route from Yangshuo to Guilin and swam the Lijiang River against the current. Soon after the ship sailed out, I saw a new moon hanging from a peak in the distance. The sun was shining through the clouds, and the river was sparkling, which reflected the mountains. It was doubtful that I had arrived in a fairyland. If the mountains in the north are heroic and heavy, then the mountains in Guilin are charming and beautiful. Yunv Mountain Tingting Yuli, cleverly combing the clouds; Wangfu Cliff is gazing into the distance, waiting with deep affection; The extremely eager students, the carp jumping off the dragon gate, the hovering snails and the camels in the oasis all have different shapes and changes, which make the tourists dizzying. The nine horses of "Painting Mountain", under the guidance and narration of the tour guide, make the mountains in Guilin superb to the extreme, so that visitors can truly appreciate the magic and beauty of Guilin's landscape.

If the mountains in Guilin are "more secluded in Tonamiyama", then the water in Guilin is clear, transparent and green. Looking down, the river is rippling, the jade pagoda is slightly blue, and the water color is crystal clear. In addition, the bamboo forests on both sides of the strait are graceful, and the mountains and rivers set each other off. What do you think of it is a long landscape painting, which reveals the spirit of agility in a dignified way. It is really "sailing on the blue waves, people are in Traveling in a pictorial world". Standing at the bow of the boat and looking over the railing, the Lijiang River [1] is full of smoke and waves, which makes people wonder where they are going. In the cycle of history, I seem to see the place where Liu Sanjie sang songs in the past. Hundreds of years of old trees are flourishing, fishing boats are swimming happily in the water, people are working hard in the fields, spreading the hope of harvest, and looking closer, foreign friends with blond hair and blue eyes also come for an outing. Although I can't appreciate the idyllic scenery of "the smoke of every household is thick", I can see that a modern Guilin is thriving.

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After visiting the Lijiang River, we were busy feeling the beauty of grotesque rocks in Guilin, mentioning caves, such as reed flute cave [2] and Qixingyan [3], which were both scenic spots developed earlier. With the psychology of exploration, we went to Fengyuyan in Lipu County for seclusion. The whole cave spans Jiuchong Mountain, and the scenery is very special. When we entered the cave, we carefully followed the footsteps of history. We followed suit and vaguely heard the dripping sound of lava. At first, it was drop by drop, and gradually, it became a roaring land. It seemed that countless urchins were frolicking in the game, and the branches and leaves of the jungle collided with each other in the wind. Occasionally, some water drops drip into the underground river, and there is a distant and empty ancient music. Let's keep going. Sometimes the water is gurgling, but sometimes the waterfalls are blowing on my face. In the "boom" sound of the water, I realized Li Bai's artistic conception of "flying down 3 feet, and it is suspected that the Milky Way has set for nine days", and the emotion surge up with it. I don't know how many twists and turns, we came to the resplendent Crystal Palace. After the artificial transformation of the ancient cave, many gorgeous colors were added, like the colorful Penglai Wonderland. With color, the shape of the rock is lifelike: the golden hoop of Qingtian seems to be telling the bumpy journey of learning from the West; Yang Guifei slowly lifted the stone curtain and watched the dancing of the group, which was charming and colorful, and could not help but remind people of the prosperity of the Tang Dynasty. In the dinosaur kingdom, the dinosaurs' "Ow

Ow" are strange in appearance, which shows their power. Looking at these ingenious masterpieces, we can't help but admire the greatness of nature. It is this drop of water that has gone through thousands of years, tasted the eternal vicissitudes, and carved such a magical landscape. How broad and profound it is! And these rocks, which have been honed for thousands of years and sealed for a long time, are finally known to the world today. What perseverance is this! Compared with this, "dripping water wears away the stone" is just a short moment in the long river of history. Tracing back to the source of history, Guilin's landscape is explaining a philosophy to every visitor: persistence will create eternity. Yes, everything in the world has not experienced thousands of years of baptism to achieve today's glory and glory? Perseverance is the sword to defeat any challenge. After swimming in Guilin, we have no reason to give up easily. Friend, if you are free, you might as well visit Guilin!

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The place where Guilin's landscape poetry has been sung for generations is Du Xiufeng, located in the city center. The author of this swan song is called Wang Zhenggong. Wang Zhenggong, to be fair, can't be compared with those literary giants in terms of official position and literary name. However, a swan song is enough to make the old man of honest and frank among the cultural celebrities. This Ningbo-born old man, named after his life, thought that the official was honest and clean, and he was not afraid of offending powerful people. Therefore, although he entered the officialdom from his twenties and served as an official for decades, he also made considerable achievements, but he did not see any progress. He changed jobs many times, all of which were flat and slightly increased, and he never rose to the top. When he was in his 6s, he served as a judge in Chaozhou. He once built the Xiangzi Bridge on the Hanjiang River to facilitate communication, which was praised by local people. Later, in the sixth year of Qingyuan (12), at the age of 68, I went to Guangnan West Road in Guilin to mention something about the magistrate of prison power, which was a slight promotion. Wang Zhenggong

When Wang Zhenggong first arrived in Guilin, he was already an old man and a new official, just following the rules. According to reason, he won't have any passion. Soon, in the first year of Jiatai (121), it coincided with the year-to-year competition (the year after having obtained the provincial examination). That year, after having obtained the provincial examination for Guangxi students, * * * won 11 candidates. Wang Zhenggong has heard for a long time that Guilin students often make good achievements in the imperial examinations, which makes people dare not underestimate. The results of this provincial examination also made him happy for the students, so he, as a local official, hosted a banquet for the students in the government in accordance with the convention of Luming banquet. Drink with students and talk about studying hard and serving the court, and it is indispensable to make poems to encourage each other. Wang Zhenggong wrote two poems of seven laws: Ancient Guizhou with a hundred peaks, which has always been difficult for people. I crown * * * should be a letter to the sage, who is not a Taoist art flow. Economic talent is far-reaching, and vertical and horizontal rituals and music are opposite. The three kings and eight handsome men have a rural show, and they are steadily at the top of Tianjin. Guilin's landscape is the best in the world, and the jade is green and clear. Morale is not inspiring, and the literary field is like a battlefield. Tiger and leopard watch the enemy in the nine passes, and Wan Li is in the drama. The old eyes are rubbed and refreshed, and the gentlemen are the south of the fight. The poem "Guilin's landscape is the best in the world" spread all over China from this wine table and was sung for a long time.

Reading through the whole poem, we know that the author's original intention is not to praise Guilin's landscape, but to hope that the students will make further progress in their studies, so that they will be as beautiful as Guilin's landscape in their studies. This famous saying may be Wang Zhenggong's original creation, but it is also handy to quote other people's sentences. In short, it is a seamless application, reflecting the author's talent in writing poetry. It can also be seen from this poem that this famous saying originally came from an imperial examination poem, which shows that as early as the Song Dynasty, the values of seeking fame in the Chinese imperial examination had been deeply rooted in Guilin. Wang Zhenggong's poems on the table are full of vigor and vitality, and he is impressed by the performers. A man named Zhang Ciliang carved these two poems by Wang Zhenggong above the reading rock at the southern foot of Duxiufeng. I'm afraid it's also to echo the name of Reading Rock. Shortly after the poem was written, there was a case in which Xing 'an county magistrate indulged his son and killed a county official. As a local official, Wang Zhenggong enforced the law impartially and sent the criminal to the neighboring road for confession, thus offending the Xing 'an county magistrate and violating the hidden rules of officialdom, and was falsely accused of dismissing the official. Later, although the case was ascertained, Wang Zhenggong was able to restore his reputation, but there was no official to do, and he was old. He was sent by the court to Wuyishan, Fujian Province as a temple, and he was in charge of the worship, so he retired to the second line and died there. Perhaps because Wang Zhenggong was dismissed from office, the parties deliberately covered the stone carving above the reading rock with mud in order to get rid of the relationship; Perhaps for a long time, the rain seeping from the cliff wall was mixed with the sediment between the rock cracks, which covered the stone carving. In a word, Wang Zhenggong's poems, which were carved on Du Xiufeng's reading rock, soon disappeared from the light of day and were even forgotten by people. Fortunately, the influence of famous sayings is amazing. The poems written by Wang Zhenggong at the Luming Banquet were brought to Lin 'an, the capital city, by the students at the dinner, and spread to all directions from Lin 'an. With the passage of time, coupled with the different cultural upbringing and artistic taste of the eulogists, the whole poem was omitted or forgotten by the eulogists, leaving only the sentence "Guilin's landscape is the best in the world", which has been circulated for thousands of years without being < P > extinct in the world. In 1983, when two young Guilin archaeologists were sorting out the stone carvings on the cliff of Duxiufeng, they found that there was a crack on the cliff above the reading rock and under the grass, which seemed to be not integrated with the stone wall. They gently lifted the humus layer and found an unexpected thing: a well-preserved stone carving. When they cleaned the stone wall, and then used skillful technology to print the stone carving, they found that what was hidden under the humus layer was actually where the famous sentence was buried by the dust of history for almost 8 years!

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Who is Wang Zhenggong, and why do you want to build a statue of him? It turns out that this is related to a world-famous poem. According to the personage of Guilin Museum, the famous phrase "Guilin's landscape is the best in the world" has been debated in academic circles from the late Qing Dynasty to the 198s. Some say that it originated from the inflection of Li Zengbo's poem "Guilin's mountains and rivers are the best in the world" at the end of the Song Dynasty, while others say that it comes from the words in Jin Wuxiang's poems in the Qing Dynasty.

In the mid-198s, cultural relics workers in Guilin conducted a comprehensive investigation and cleaning of the stone carvings of Duxiufeng, and found a cliff stone carving that had never been known since the Ming and Qing Dynasties, on which the words "Guilin's landscape is the best in the world" were engraved word for word. The writer was Wang Zhenggong, a Siming (now Ningbo, Zhejiang) who served as a criminal prison in Guangxi during Qingyuan and Jiatai years in the Southern Song Dynasty and represented the magistrate of jing jiang, thus ending the endless debate for a hundred years. At that time, this assertion only spread in the circle of cultural relics workers and cultural celebrities in Guilin, and it was not until the end of last century that it spread in Guilin tourism, political circles and other relevant departments. Hong Benjian, a professor at the Chinese Department of East China Normal University, said that Wang Zhenggong's poems highlight the beauty of mountains, waters, caves and stones, and establish Guilin's position as a scenic tourist city in China and even in the world.

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People say, "Guilin landscape is the best in the world." We took a wooden boat on the Lijiang River to enjoy the landscape of Guilin. I have seen the magnificent sea and the mirror-like West Lake, but I have never seen such water as Lijiang River. The water in Lijiang River is so quiet that you can't feel it flowing. The water in Lijiang River is so clear that you can see the sand and stones at the bottom of the river. The water in Lijiang River is so green, as if it were a flawless jade. The microwave aroused by the paddle spreads out a series of water lines, which makes you feel that the ship is moving forward and the shore is moving backwards. I have climbed the majestic Mount Tai and visited the fragrant hills with red leaves, but I have never seen the mountains around Guilin. The mountains in Guilin are really strange. They rise up all over the place, disconnected from each other, like old people, elephants, camels, and strange peaks. The mountains in Guilin are really beautiful, like a green barrier, like new bamboo shoots, with bright colors, reaching the reflected water; The mountains in Guilin are really dangerous. The dangerous peaks stand upright and the rocks are rugged. It seems that they will fall if they are not careful. Such mountains are surrounded by such water, and such water reflects such mountains. Coupled with the misty clouds in the air, the green trees and red flowers in the mountains, and the bamboo rafts on the river, you feel like you have entered a continuous picture. It is really "the boat is on the blue waves and people are in Traveling in a pictorial world".

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teaching material analysis

This text grasps the characteristics of Guilin landscape (water: quiet, clear, green mountains: strange, beautiful and dangerous), vividly shows the beauty of Guilin landscape in beautiful and concise language, and expresses the author's love for Guilin landscape. The illustrations in this paper basically reflect the characteristics of Guilin landscape described in the text. In poetic language, the author takes the readers to see the beautiful landscape of Guilin. The text begins with "Guilin's landscape is the best in the world", which not only summarizes the position of Guilin's landscape in the scenic spots of the motherland, but also explains the reasons why the author enjoys Guilin's landscape. At the same time, it aroused our yearning for Guilin's landscape. Then, the outstanding characteristics of the water in Lijiang River and the mountains in Guilin are described by contrast. Finally, the mountains and water in Guilin are linked as a perfect whole and presented to readers. In the second natural section, the author introduces the characteristics of Lijiang River with passionate admiration: quiet, clear and green. After pointing out the characteristics, it specifically describes how the water in Lijiang River is quiet, clear and green. This kind of realism with admiration makes readers and authors alike, just like visiting the Lijiang River in person and boating to watch this beautiful scenery. Then, in the third paragraph, the author described the characteristics of Guilin Mountain in the same way: strangeness, danger and beauty. The second and third paragraphs of the article are realistic in lyrical language, and the readers can really feel the beauty of Lijiang River, the beauty of Guilin mountains and the language of the text "Guilin Landscape" is more beautiful by using parallelism and metaphor! The fourth natural paragraph of the article, comprehensive viewing impression. The mountains and rivers set each other off, the clouds are misty, and green trees, red flowers and bamboo rafts are dotted among them, forming a continuous picture. "Sailing on the blue waves, people are in Traveling in a pictorial world" is the summary of the full text, which echoes the beginning of "Guilin's landscape is the best in the world". What is more difficult to understand in this lesson is the sentence "People are in Traveling in a pictorial world on the blue waves" in the last paragraph. The cruise ship sails on the green river, and the tourists on board are like visiting in a beautiful picture.

teaching suggestions

1. The focus of teaching this lesson is to guide students to feel the unique beauty of the water of Lijiang River and the mountains of Guilin. How to guide it? First of all, we should guide students to correctly understand the meaning of words and expressions. For example, "I have seen the magnificent sea and enjoyed the mirror-like West Lake, but I have never seen the water like the Lijiang River", "I have climbed Mount Tai with majestic peaks and visited the fragrant hills with red leaves, but I have never seen the mountains around Guilin", comparing the water of the sea and West Lake with the water of the Lijiang River, and comparing the mountains of Mount Tai, Xiangshan and Guilin. What is the comparison? Compared with their respective characteristics. The meaning of these two sentences is not to say that the sea and West Lake are not as beautiful as the water of Lijiang River, and Taishan and Xiangshan are not as beautiful as the mountains of Guilin, but that the water of Lijiang River is different from the sea and the West Lake. The mountains in Guilin are different from Mount Tai and Xiangshan, and they have a unique beauty. Secondly, students should be guided to feel the situation described by words by various teaching methods. For example, the magnificent sea, the mirror-like West Lake, the majestic Mount Tai, the fragrant hills with red leaves, the flawless jade, the towering peaks, the green barriers, the newly-born bamboo shoots, the dangerous peaks and the jagged rocks, through playing pictures that can vividly show these words, make students feel as if they are in a dilemma: "Is this the strange peak?" This is the dangerous peak standing upright. You can also find some pictures to show to the students. Third, guide students to read the text with emotion, and guide them to imagine the situation described by words while reading. Second, to guide students to understand that "people are in Traveling in a pictorial world on the blue waves" must be related to the content of the full text. "This mountain is surrounded by this water, and this water reflects this mountain." It means that the strange, beautiful and dangerous Guilin Mountain revolves around the quiet, clear,