1. How to write an ancient prose about scenery
The selected texts for the sixth unit of the second volume of the eighth grade edition of the People's Education Press are mainly ancient prose about scenery and travel.
Some express broad-mindedness, some reveal contentment, and some express leisurely feelings. The sceneries recorded are different, and the writing moods are different, but they are all famous poems that express emotions and express feelings through scenery. We can learn some techniques of describing scenery from them. This article focuses on "Travel Notes of Manjing" as an example.
1. Grasp the characteristics of the scenery to write the scene (seasonal) When writing the scenery, we must grasp the characteristics of the scenery to write. We usually hear this sentence a lot, but its real scope of application should refer to the description of natural scenery. How to grasp the characteristics of the scenery when writing, the main thing is to have a position before writing, and figure out when the natural scenery you want to write about is? Where is the scene? What are the characteristics? Then write around this feature, and naturally capture the characteristics of the scenery. For example, the second paragraph of "Manjing Travels" describes the scenery of Manjing in early spring in detail. When it was written, it was able to well capture the seasonal characteristics of "early spring", that is, "suddenly warm and cold" , "revival of all things", among which, "slightly moist" in "slightly moist soil", if you think about it carefully, it is indeed a wonderful use, because in early spring, the earth's atmosphere rises, the temperature gradually warms up, and the soil in the late winter Some of the remaining "ice" also slowly melted, and the soil paste naturally became "slightly moist". The use of this word expresses the characteristics of "suddenly warm and then cold" in early spring; for another example, "ice" In the sentence "Pi Jie Jie", the first word is "ice skin". Although this word refers to the surface of ice, the author uses the word "ice skin" and uses "skin" to describe "ice", which also implies the ice formation. The ice is not thick. In early spring, the night temperature is low, so it is understandable to freeze. However, the ice must not be very thick. The author uses the word "skin" to describe it, which is very accurate, and also captures the concept of "suddenly warm and then cold". "The climate characteristics of early spring, plus the word "beginning to resolve" to modify it, capture this feature very well. At the same time, these two sentences, "the soil paste is slightly moist" and "the ice skin begins to resolve" originally It also embodies the characteristics of "revival of all things"; look at the author's sentences about water, "The color of the waves is bright, the scales are layered, and the bottom is crystal clear." In these sentences, in early spring, the ice surface melts and the water waves begin to glow. , reproduces the recovery of water. In addition, when water freezes in winter, various suspended matter in the water begins to settle. When the ice melts in early spring, the water will naturally become "clear to the bottom"; look at the sentence written by Willow, "will The sentence "Shu Wei Shu" vividly depicts the state of the willow tree when it has just sprouted, and this state is also a unique scene in early spring. There is also "a shallow mane". The author uses "mane" to compare the wheat seedlings and describe its shape. The writing is realistic and the word "inch" also reflects the characteristics of "early spring".
It can be seen that when we write about natural scenery, we first locate the characteristics of the scenery before writing, so that we can better grasp the characteristics of the natural scenery to write. When writing about natural scenery, On the one hand, it can be considered in terms of seasonal aspects; on the other hand, it can also be written based on unique climate characteristics, such as the state of various scenery under "rainy days", "sunshine", "snow", "wind"... Use their shapes to embody these characteristics. 2. Pay attention to the order when describing scenes. You need to pay attention to a certain order when writing notes. The same goes for describing scenes. How to determine the order of describing scenes? We can write according to the order of observation by the observer. This is simple, consistent with ordinary people's thinking, and easier to grasp.
For example, in the second paragraph of "Travel Notes on Manjing", after the author "arrived at Manjing", the first thing that caught his eye should of course be the full view of Manjing that the author could see. Therefore, When the author was writing, he first used the words "high willows and embankments, slightly moist soil, and a vast sky as far as the eye can see" to briefly outline the whole picture. The following description of the scenery is a close-up of a partial scenery, and also follows certain rules. In order, when you come to the embankment, you will naturally see water. Therefore, the author starts from the "ice surface" and continues to look into the distance. The water in the distance then follows the "mountains", and the author then writes "mountains". However, this "mountains" "After all, it is far away, so the author can still only describe it as a whole. Even if we traveled with the author at that time, after seeing the mountains, we naturally turned our eyes back to ourselves. Therefore, the author also wrote about the "wicker branches" and "wheat fields" around us. "When you see something nearby, you can naturally see other tourists. These are a very natural observation process. When writing, follow the logic of ordinary people's observation so that readers can read clearly and not be confused.
When writing about natural scenery, we must pay attention to the order of writing. When we write, we can first present a picture of the scene we want to write in our mind, and then Write in the order of observation. Another thing to note is that when writing, the distant scenery must be described as a whole, and the nearby scenery can be described in detail, so that it is logical. 3. Link the natural scenery with the activities of the characters. There are almost no articles about describing the scenery simply about the natural scenery. In this way, the scenery is written for the sake of describing the scenery. The scenery may be written to express emotions, or to set off the narrative, etc.
If the purpose of describing scenery is to be lyrical, the writing should be linked to the activities of the characters. Simply describing natural scenery is not suitable to be lyrical. Let’s first look at two examples: The second paragraph of "Manjing Travels" is in After giving a detailed description of the early spring scenery in Manjing, he wrote: "Although there are not many tourists, there are still people drinking tea from the spring, singing with lei, and wearing red clothes.
"Although there are only a few strokes, it depicts a harmonious scene of character activities in early spring, making people feel the warm scene of spring and bright scenery.
Another example is the description in "The Drunkard Pavilion" which is even more vivid. , after the author describes the morning and dusk in the mountains and the four seasons in the mountains in the second paragraph, he then describes the scene in the third paragraph. This scene revolves around the "Prefect's Banquet" and describes "Chu" respectively. The four scenes of "People Touring", "Prefect's Banquet", "All the Guests Rejoicing" and "Prefect Drunk" well reflect the scene of prosperous people's livelihood, which lays the foundation for the following description of the prefect's "having fun with the people". From It can be seen that when writing about natural scenery, it is conducive to the development of lyricism when it is linked to the activities of characters. Of course, sometimes we can also see that people are not described in the best works of describing scenery. For example, there is no description of character activities in Liu Zongyuan's "Little Rock Pond" The scene, but it does not mean that he did not mention people when writing, such as "Surrounded by bamboo trees, lonely and no one, desolate and cold..." In one sentence, he wrote "no one", which also mentioned people. , just because there is no one, so I don’t write it in detail, and this is exactly what the author needs to express his emotions. 2. How to write an ancient essay about scenery
Unit 6 of the second volume of the eighth grade edition of the People’s Education Press. The selected texts are mainly ancient prose that describes scenery and travel.
Some express broad-mindedness, some reveal contentment, and some express leisurely feelings. The different scenery and different writing moods. However, they are all famous works that express emotions and use scenes to describe emotions. We can learn some techniques of describing scenes from them. This article focuses on "Manjing Travels" as an example.
1. Grasp the characteristics of the scenery to describe the scenery ( Seasonal) When writing about scenery, we should grasp the characteristics of the scenery to write. We usually hear this sentence a lot, but its real scope of application should refer to the description of natural scenery. How to grasp the characteristics of the scenery when writing, the main thing is to have a idea before writing. Position yourself and figure out when the natural scenery you want to write is? Where is it? What are its characteristics? Then write around this characteristic, and you will naturally capture the characteristics of the scenery. The second paragraph gives a detailed description of the scenery of early spring in Manjing. When it was written, it was able to well capture the seasonal characteristics of "early spring", that is, "warmth returns to cold" and "all things revive". Among them, " A "slightly moist soil paste" is a "slightly moist" one. If you think about it carefully, it is indeed a wonderful use, because in early spring, the earth's atmosphere rises, the temperature gradually warms up, and some of the remaining "ice" in the soil in late winter slowly also slowly disappears. After melting, the soil paste will naturally become "slightly moist". The use of this word expresses the characteristics of "suddenly warm and then cold" in early spring; for another example, in the sentence "the ice skin begins to unravel", first " Although the word "ice skin" refers to the surface of ice, the author uses the word "ice skin" and uses "skin" to describe "ice", which also implies that the ice is not thick. In early spring, at night The temperature is low, so there is nothing wrong with ice forming, but the ice must not be very thick. The author uses the word "skin" to describe it, which is very accurate, and also captures the climate characteristics of early spring, which is "suddenly warm but then cold". In addition, The word "beginning to resolve" to modify it captures this feature very well. At the same time, these two sentences, "the earth is slightly moistened by the paste" and "the ice skin begins to resolve" also embody the characteristics of "revival of all things" ; Look at the author's sentences about water, "The waves are bright, the scales are layered, and the bottom is crystal clear." In these sentences, in early spring, the ice melts and the water waves begin to shine brightly, reproducing the recovery of water and the winter. When the water freezes, various suspended matter in the water begins to settle. When the ice melts in early spring, the water naturally becomes "clear to the bottom"; look at the sentence about wicker, the sentence "will be comfortable but not comfortable" vividly describes It shows the state of willow branches when they have just sprouted, and this state is also a unique scene in early spring. There is also "shallow hyena". The author uses "hyena" to compare the wheat seedlings and writes its shape realistically, writing "inch" The word "early spring" also reflects the characteristics of "early spring".
It can be seen that when we write about natural scenery, we first locate the characteristics of the scenery before writing, so that we can better grasp the characteristics of the natural scenery to write. When writing about natural scenery, On the one hand, it can be considered in terms of seasonal aspects; on the other hand, it can also be written based on unique climate characteristics, such as the state of various scenery under "rainy days", "sunshine", "snow", "wind"... Use their shapes to embody these characteristics. 2. Pay attention to the order when describing scenes. Note that you need to pay attention to a certain order when describing scenes. The same goes for describing scenes. How to determine the order of describing scenes? We can write according to the order of observation by the observer. This is simple, consistent with ordinary people's thinking, and easier to grasp.
For example, in the second paragraph of "Travel Notes on Manjing", after the author "arrived at Manjing", the first thing that caught his eye should of course be the full view of Manjing that the author could see. Therefore, , when the author was writing, he first used the words "high willows and embankments, slightly moist soil, and a vast sky as far as the eye can see" to briefly outline the whole picture. The following description of the scenery is a close-up of a partial scenery, and also follows certain rules. In sequence, when you come to the embankment, you will naturally see water. Therefore, the author starts from the "ice surface" and continues to look into the distance. The water in the distance follows the "mountain", and the author then writes "mountains". However, this "mountain" "After all, it is far away, so the author can still only describe it as a whole. Even if we traveled with the author at that time, after seeing the mountains, we naturally turned our eyes back to ourselves. Therefore, the author also wrote about the "wicker branches" and "wheat fields" around us. "When you see something nearby, you can naturally see other tourists. These are a very natural observation process. When writing, follow the logic of ordinary people's observation so that readers can read clearly and not be confused.
When writing about natural scenery, we must pay attention to the order of writing. When writing, we can first present a picture of the scene we want to write in our mind, and then write it in the order of observation. Another thing to note is that when writing, the distant scenery must be described as a whole, and the nearby scenery can be described in detail, so that it is logical. 3. Link the natural scenery with the activities of the characters to describe the scenery. Almost no articles simply describe the natural scenery. This is to describe the scenery for the sake of describing the scenery. The description of the scenery may be lyrical, or to set off the narrative, etc.
If the purpose of describing scenery is to be lyrical, the writing should be linked to the activities of the characters. Simply describing natural scenery is not suitable to be lyrical. Let’s first look at two examples: The second paragraph of "Manjing Travels" is in After carefully describing the scene of early spring in Manjing, he wrote: "Although there are not many tourists, there are always people drinking tea from the spring, singing lei, and riding in red clothes." Although there are only a few strokes, it depicts an early spring. The harmonious scenes of character activities make people feel the warm scene of spring and scenery.
The description in "The Drunkard's Pavilion" is even more vivid. After the author has given the morning and dusk in the mountains and the scenery of the four seasons in the second paragraph, he immediately follows it in the second paragraph. The scene is described in three paragraphs. This scene revolves around the "Prefect's Banquet" and describes the four scenes of "Chu people's tour", "Prefect's banquet", "celebration of guests" and "Prefect's drunkenness" respectively, which well reflects the The scene of prosperous people's livelihood laid the foundation for the eunuch's "having fun with the people" described below. It can be seen that when writing about natural scenery, it is conducive to the development of lyricism when it is linked to the activities of characters. Of course, sometimes we can also see that people are not described in the best works of describing scenery. For example, there is no description of character activities in Liu Zongyuan's "Little Rock Pond" The scene, but it does not mean that he did not mention people when writing. For example, "Surrounded by bamboo trees on all sides, lonely and no one, desolate and cold..." He wrote "no one" in one sentence, which also mentioned People are not written in detail just because there is no one, and this is exactly what the author needs for lyrical purposes. 3. Write a self-written classical Chinese essay with lyrical narrative description within 100 words
Long Song Xing
Stars turn around, only three weeks fall, and this year is about to pass. Looking back and looking into the distance, we can see that the luxurious and wealthy family in the past is now covered with wormwood.
The Five Hegemons were in trouble in the Spring and Autumn Period, and the Seven Hegemons united the world. The emperor's affairs will not be reversed once they are gone. In the Central Plains competition, how many people can return it? But Wei Han sealed his bones and cried to the sky.
The beauty in pink and white has a pitiful life. Lotus steps quietly, gold echoes and jade responds. King Wu built a platform to travel to the West, Emperor Wu hid Gillian in his golden house, flying swallows danced lightly on their palms, real people cried and their daughters were red. Sigh that this man has passed away! The willow trees in Zhangtai have withered, and everyone is reduced to dust.
The towering Mingtang, located in the sun of the river, is the palace of heaven, and the whole world comes to visit. Once they move eastward, nothing but grass and millet will grow. The high temple and Zhuque cannot bear the snow of thousands of years!
The young man is arrogant and arrogant in his behavior. Look at what's going on with Qiong Lin now? The sky is full of crows! It's a pity that there are wealthy people among the clouds. It's a pleasure to climb the stairs and bathe in the king's style. Asking the sky with a smile, who has sex with you?
The sky is long and the wild goose is alone, the frost is cold and the moon is cold. The longer the pavilion becomes, the shorter the pavilion. Who can be worthy of it through the ages? He smiled and said: After a hundred lifetimes, look back and see again! 4. Write a composition in classical Chinese. Use simplified Chinese characters for 500 words to describe the scene.
Modern writing: In late autumn, the desolation of all things makes people feel sad. But the scenery of Bashan has a unique charm in late autumn. Just arrived at Bashan, follow the ancient road and go up the road to reach the top of the mountain. In the middle, the scenery of mountains and rivers is intoxicating, especially in the morning and evening, when the colorful glow surrounds the mountains like colorful neon clothes. When the morning light gradually shines into the clouds and mist, the shapes of the steep rocks and precipitous mountains in the mountains are revealed. The sounds of birds and animals can gradually be heard in the mountains, and only then do the handsome mountains wake up. The autumn wind travels through the mountains, blowing the mist and glow, just like the jade hands of a beautiful woman washing the colorful clothes in the mountains and pulling away the sand and fog in the mountains. After the fog dissipated, I saw the bleak autumn leaves dyeing the mountains and fields golden yellow. I admire the beauty of Bashan in autumn, but I can’t help but feel sad when I think that even though the mountains are so beautiful, they have finally entered the withering season. I looked at the autumn scenery in the mountains again, and saw that the cold autumn water sensed my sadness and incorporated it into my heart, and the bleak trees caught my sadness and frowned. It turns out that this is what people call autumn sadness. Although the mountains are beautiful, people often feel sad for the beautiful things that are about to pass away, so people feel sad for autumn. This feeling is integrated into the autumn scenery. Therefore, the desolation of autumn and the sorrow of autumn are revealed again. Only now do I understand that in this world, the most easily infected thing is not other things, but human emotions. Whether it is mountains or hard rocks, emotions can penetrate into it, and it is stronger than water.
Classical Chinese: In late autumn, everything becomes desolate and worries arise. However, the scenery of Bashan Mountain (if you want to write other mountains, change the name yourself) has a unique charm. When I first arrived at Bashan, I followed the ancient road and reached the top. The scenery of the mountains is intoxicating, and at dawn and dusk, the clouds are surrounded by colorful neon clothes. As the morning light gradually fades into the clouds and mist, the shape of steep rocks and mountains gradually appears. Then I heard the sounds of birds and beasts in the mountains, and Junshan woke up. The autumn wind walks in the mountains, blowing the mist and blowing the clouds, like a beautiful woman's jade hands wearing colorful clothes. The fog disperses and the clouds disappear, and you can see the fallen trees in autumn dyeing the beautiful mountains into gold. I feel the autumn scenery of Bashan, but when I recall it, although it is a fantastic scenery, it has already faded into the season, and sadness arises from this. The next time I looked at the autumn scenery in the mountains, I felt sad when I saw the cold water, and the slender trees raised their eyebrows with sadness.
This is what is called the sadness of autumn. Although the mountains are beautiful, most people are saddened by the perishable beauty, so they are sad for autumn. This feeling is integrated into the autumn colors, so the desolation of autumn and the sadness of autumn are present. I began to realize what thing in the world is most susceptible to contamination by other things. This thing is called love. Even though the mountains are made of solid rocks, they can still seep through them and are stronger than water. 5. How Yueyang Tower cleverly combines narrative, scene description, lyricism and discussion
From the second paragraph, the style of the article rises and the words are passionate. First of all, he said, "The beauty of Baling is located in Dongting Lake" and set the scope of the description below. A few general words describe the spectacular scene of Dongting Lake. After the change of "but", a new artistic conception is introduced, from simply describing the scenery to using the blending of scenes to describe the "emotion of viewing things" of the "immigrant scholar", thus forming the main body of the full text.
The third and fourth paragraphs are two parallel paragraphs, running in parallel, one sad and one happy, one dark and one bright, like two different streams of emotion, conveying the mutual interaction between scene and emotion. A completely opposite life situation.
The fifth paragraph is the focus of the whole article. It starts with "域夫" and has both lyrical and argumentative meanings. After enumerating the two situations of sadness and happiness, the author's writing style suddenly became exciting, expressing a higher ideal state beyond the two, which is "not to be happy with things, not to be sad with oneself".
"Hey! Weisi people, who can I return to?" The conclusion is "like resentment, like admiration, like crying, like complaining." It is sad and generous, and deeply affectionate, which makes people sigh. The writing time is indicated at the end of the article, which corresponds to the beginning of the article.
Extended information
"The Story of Yueyang Tower" is famous because of its lofty ideological realm. Ouyang Xiu, another writer of the same period, said in an inscription written for him that he had been determined to be world-famous since he was a child, and often recited to himself: "A scholar should worry about the world's worries first, and rejoice after the world's happiness." It can be seen that what is said at the end of "Yueyang Tower", "Be worried about the world's worries first, and be happy after the world's happiness" is the criterion for Fan Zhongyan's life behavior.