Teaching Scheme of Mulan Poetry (2)

Second lesson

First, the analysis of the second part

1. What role do the first two sentences of this part play in the front and back paragraphs of the poem? How expressive is it?

"If Wan Li goes to Rongji and flies through Shan Ye" is a highly vivid summary of the Mercedes-Benz journey described in the previous paragraph, indicating that galloping on the battlefield leads to the description of battlefield life and fighting, which plays a connecting role in the first and second paragraphs of the poem. These two poems describe the distance of the road, exaggerating the magnificent gesture of Mulan riding a galloping steed and Wan Li going to the battlefield, crossing the pass and flying over the mountains.

2. What rhetorical methods are used in the last four sentences? How expressive is it?

"New moon breath spreads golden bells, cold light spreads iron clothes", and there are two confrontations: the chilly north wind spreads the sound of playing, and soldiers camp in the army; The cold moonlight shines on the bright armor, and the sentry is on duty at night; In the harsh environment, it shows Mulan's hard life on the battlefield, thus showing Mulan's courage and strength.

The words "The general died in hundreds of battles, and the strong man returned in ten years" are dual, intertextual and interpenetrating: the soldiers went out for ten years and experienced hundreds of fierce battles, some died in the battlefield, and some returned in triumph; Write down the number of battles, the length of time and the intensity of the battle, which shows that Mulan has been fighting fiercely for a long time, being brave and good at fighting, and returning home in triumph.

The second and third part of the analysis.

1. What rhetorical method is used in this part to describe Mulan's meeting with the son of heaven? How expressive is it?

"Twelve turns to reward a hundred strong men" is exaggerated, dual and complementary, which shows that the son of heaven has made many contributions to Mulan and rewarded her handsomely, and also "asked her what she wanted", which means to appoint her as a senior official. This effectively sets off "Hua Mulan is willing to travel thousands of miles to send her son back to her hometown", showing the pure character and noble quality of Hua Mulan, who cherishes her hometown farming life and does not admire splendor.

2. What rhetorical devices are used in this part to describe Mulan's return to her hometown? How expressive is it?

"Ye Niang smells women, Guo Bi helps each other; As soon as Sister A heard that Sister Mei was coming, she had to cut her red makeup. When I heard that my sister was coming, I sharpened my knife to pigs and sheep. " I vividly wrote a family member's actions in line with the age, identity and gender characteristics because of Mulan's return by using the rhetorical method of parallelism, which was full of rich flavor of life and cordial meaning. It shows that Mulan's triumph brought joy to the whole family.

"Open my East Pavilion door, sit on my West Pavilion bed, take off my wartime robe, wear my old clothes, arrange clouds for the window, and make up the mirror yellow flowers". With the rhetorical method of parallelism, this paper expounds Mulan's series of dressing and dressing actions with the characteristics of young women, showing Mulan's happy and excited mood of returning from a long victory.

"When I went out to see my partner, my partner was surprised and busy: I didn't know that Mulan was a woman after traveling together for twelve years", which showed my partner's surprise and admiration when I saw "Mulan was a woman", and set off Mulan's caution and vigilance during her long-term military service. The story of Mulan joining the army ended in a comedy climax.

3. Analyze the fourth part. This part is sung by the poet after the end of the poem story. What rhetorical methods are used? What kind of feelings are reflected?

This part compares a pair of rabbits, which is very interesting; "When two rabbits walk on the ground, I can tell whether I am a male or a female" and "I" have the meaning of speaking on behalf of Mulan, which embodies the very cordial and loving feelings for Mulan and praises Mulan's caution and vigilance that she was not found to be a girl during her twelve years in the army.

If some students classify these four poems as Mulan's own, they think that Mulan shines with humor and wisdom in this rabbit metaphor, which embodies the feelings of joy and pride, and should also be affirmed. )

4. Summarize the image of Mulan.

Mulan is not only a girl, but also a hero. She is hardworking, kind, simple and filial. When the country needed it, she stepped forward, galloped on the battlefield, and served the country wholeheartedly, showing a deep understanding of righteousness, courage, determination, loyalty and heroism. Twelve years in the army, with strong perseverance and prudence, she never revealed that she was a daughter. After her triumphant return, she is not greedy for wealth, but willing to live a simple and stable farm life. She is a symbol of the outstanding working women in ancient northern China.

5. Analyze whether the detailed description of this poem is appropriate. What is this poem written in detail? Sketch what? Why do poets deal with subjects like this?

This poem describes in detail Mulan's reasons for joining the army, her preparations before departure, her homesickness during the journey, her triumphant return to her hometown, and a brief description of her life and fighting on the battlefield. Therefore, the reason why the theme is handled so carefully is because this poem does not focus on how Mulan won, but on how Mulan, a young girl, deeply understands the righteousness and replaces her father to join the army, with pure character and noble quality. Therefore, the whole story of joining the army is locked in the poem, which shows her inner world, expresses her thoughts and feelings and depicts the heroic image of this fleshy girl. In content, it highlights Mulan's children's modality, enriches Mulan's heroic character and makes the characters real and touching. Structurally, the details are properly handled, which makes the whole poem concise and compact. It is very appropriate to deal with the subject matter carefully according to the characteristics of the characters and the theme of the poem. Long journey, bitter life, many battles, long time and fierce situation.

Third, there are metaphors, thimbles and exaggerations.

7. Summarize the theme of this poem

Praise the heroic image of Mulan, praise the heroic spirit of working women in northern China, and express the ancient people's desire for a peaceful and stable life.

8. Students read the whole poem aloud. Seek proper priorities and read out the momentum and feelings.

(Designer of the teaching plan: Tian Kejun of Tianjin Jingu Senior High School, slightly changed)

design principle

1. This poem takes Mulan as the core of the story. In the development of the story, rhetorical devices such as parallelism, duality and exaggeration are used to portray the characters, and Mulan is portrayed as an ancient heroine. Textbooks organize parallelism and duality in poems after class. Guide students to buckle the development of stories, analyze the expressive force of many characters in poems, unify this practice in character analysis, and deeply understand Mulan.

This poem is well described. This is analyzed separately, so as not to affect the concentration of the analysis characters.

The language of this poem is full of folk songs, vigorous and lively, which guides students to pay attention to reading and reciting.

blackboard-writing design

The blackboard says 1:

Magnolia lily

1, the mother asked the woman to explain why she resolutely joined the army instead of her father.

Pappy paved the road, rushed to buy it, and hurried out.

2, many times set off a family and cut the long journey of Mercedes-Benz.

3. Exaggerated antithesis permeates each other in the long and fierce battle and wins one after another.

Exaggeration leads to success and retreat, but there is no praise for wealth and prosperity.

The climax of the comedy is over.

5. Shuangtu is cautious, alert, humorous and kind, and good at praise.

Blackboard 2:

Mulan Poem

1, the mother asked the woman to explain why she resolutely joined the army instead of her father.

2. Pepe buys repeatedly to prepare for the distant battlefield of Mercedes-Benz.

3. Exaggerated antithesis permeates each other in the long and fierce battle and wins one after another.

4, exaggerated parallelism, retired relatives and friends, surprised makeup

5. Shuangtu is cautious, alert, humorous and kind, and good at praise.