?Hold up the moral sky
Li Hanrong said in the essay "Tears Tonight": "When I look up at the sky in the silent mountain forest, I find that the sky tonight is missing. A few moral stars, even though they are still vast, have lost their former beauty."
Nietzsche once pointed at the busy traffic on the street and said: "The world is a moral world, but people are not moral people."
The language of the two of them expounds the same message. The direction of the world and the movement of the great wheel of the times require a moral fulcrum. Therefore, everyone should hold up a moral sky and work together to create a great era of great change.
In life, people should use morality as the yardstick of conscience and the guideline for action. Why do we burst into tears every time we watch "Moving China"? It's because we see brilliant figures whose minds are like a vast sea, containing the moral water of the world. It is precisely because of this morality that the rocket of Qian Xuesen who returned to China is more high-spirited, the writing style of Ji Xianlin, who is tolerant and humble, is more touching, and the Kung Fu movies of Jackie Chan, who generously devotes himself to charity, are more exciting. It can be seen from this that morality not only brings little sunshine and drops of nectar to the world, but also allows people with morality to stand at the highest ideological level. Qian Zhongshu also said: "A writer must first convince people with his morality. Only in this way can his works be qualified to be placed on high bookshelves." Therefore, everyone in life needs to be supported by morality. A piece of blue sky rises, a piece of never-ending splendor.
If this is the case for a person, then does a country need this moral sky?
The answer is yes. The three kingdoms of the Central Plains were in a powerful state. Sun Quan was wise, Cao Cao was talented, and Liu Bei was virtuous. However, among the Qing Dynasty bamboos and silks, it is precisely because of the word "virtue" that the most praised and famous one will be remembered for generations. Because of virtue, the Five Tiger Generals were willing to sacrifice their lives, and the people of Shu were also willing to go through life and death with them. Look at modern times, look at Germany after World War II. This country has such high morals that gave it enough courage to bear the sins of World War II. When the German Chancellor kneeled down in front of the world, we saw a Germany with a booming economy. Morality allows a country to stand tall, not only in its economy, but also in its confidence to stand in the world.
However, I just sigh that under today’s sky, the sparkle of the past is indeed missing. The Zhou Laohu incident the year before last caused a great uproar and seemed to have become a scar that revealed the lack of social morality. Later, Sanlu’s tainted milk powder, the 70-yard car case in Hangzhou, the university president’s fake thesis... I couldn’t help but ask, is morality really so unworthy of mentioning in the face of materialistic desires?
Of course not! Morality always resides in everyone's heart. Don't lose the conscience in your heart. The moral sky is still as bright as a blue sky!
Comments: 53 points
Comments: This article is consistent with the meaning of the topic and has a prominent center - the title is the center. The main part discusses "individual" and "country" from two different perspectives. hold up the moral sky". Appropriate quotations and a large number of factual enumerations enrich the content of the article. The arguments are based on both ancient and modern times, both at home and abroad. It can be seen that the candidates have a wide range of knowledge. The structure is complete and the transitional sentences are brief and appropriate. The language is fluent and has some literary talent.
However, the words "joining hands...the great era" in the third paragraph should be deleted - it dilutes the center (theme); why "the German Chancellor publicly confessed his crime" in the sixth paragraph is "moral" - A little more elaboration is appropriate.
Understanding and mastering the questions
1. Pay close attention to the key word in the question - "morality"
Correctly understanding and grasping the word "morality" is the key to writing. When grading, you must determine whether the essay is written within the scope of "ethics." If yes, it meets the requirements of the question; if no, it does not meet the requirements of the question.
Morality: It is one of the social ideologies and the norms and norms for people’s common life and behavior. ("Cihai")
According to the interpretation of the word "morality" in "Cihai", we must achieve the following points to grasp the word "morality".
(1) Grasp the connotation of the word "moral".
Any principles and norms that have been widely understood by the public and have formed a common consciousness in society can be included in the scope of "morality".
For example: emphasizing the spirit of holism for the nation, the whole, and the country; emphasizing the principle of benevolence and interpersonal harmony; emphasizing and advocating human relations and human values; cultivating and practicing, knowing and doing Unification; pursuit of spiritual realm, pursuit of noble moral ideal personality; socialist concept of honor and disgrace with "Eight Honors and Eight Disgraces" as the main content...
(2) Grasp the connotation of "morality".
Judging from the connotation of the word "morality", it must have three basic elements at the same time:
First, "the same" refers to universal, ordinary, Popularity is not something that a few people identify as; second, "consciousness" refers to the systematic views and opinions on the world and society formed on a certain economic basis; third, "norms and norms", standards refer to are the principles on which speech, action, thought, etc. are based. Norms refer to the behavioral standards of a group that are formally set by the organization or formed informally. For example: "Respect the old and love the young", this is a moral.
Because it has the element of "unity" - it has been known to people for thousands of years, everyone thinks it is good and right, and should be done by everyone; it can also have "unanimous" elements. "Consciousness" element - it expresses people's cognition and attitude towards the old and young; of course, it also has certain "norms and norms" characteristics.
(3) Grasp the particularity of “morality”.
Morality is relative and may have certain particularities in a certain field.
For example: "Respecting teachers and respecting morality" affirms the moral role model played by teachers, which is also a very important content in traditional Chinese morality. Education in the primary stage of socialism is brand new. In order to realize the requirements of educational reform and education facing society, teachers should put forward higher-level moral requirements for themselves and establish higher moral prestige and morality in front of students and even the entire society. image, improve one's own qualities, and become a model and model for the whole society. At the same time, teachers' moral behavior must be supervised by students and society. Teachers must regard strict self-discipline and setting an example as their own virtues. Therefore, teachers' morality must contain "compulsion" and "self-control". In addition, teachers' ethics should also adhere to the effect of practice and training students as the standard for evaluating and testing teachers' moral behavior.
To determine whether a composition is written within the scope of "morality", judge based on the above three points.
2. Pay close attention to the prompts in the stem of the question
The prompts in the stem of this question include two sentences:
The most wonderful thing in the world is the bright starry sky above my head and the moral principles in my heart.
——Kant
Even if morality is dressed in ragged clothes, it should be respected.
——Schiller
Since the writing requirements do not clearly require "comprehensive understanding" or "self-selected perspective", candidates can choose any one sentence to write, or two. Write the content of the sentence, or you can choose content other than two sentences to write. There is only one principle - the composition must be within the scope of "morality". ?
3. Grasp and understand the question requirements
The question requirements for this question are: write an article about your experience related to "morality" in your life or your views on it. Views on "morality", with your own title and style, no less than 800 words.
The requirement of "Talk about your experiences related to 'morality' in your life or your views on 'morality'" clearly requires candidates to express their true feelings. Anything that is hypocritical does not meet the requirements. Of course, candidates can write in the first person or not, and they can write realistically or fictionally. The principle is that plagiarism is not allowed and it must be an expression of one’s true feelings and one’s true views on “morality”. As for whether the experiences are true or false, it is not appropriate to be critical. As long as the views are true and the experiences are true, that's fine.
"Draft your own title" means to draw up the title yourself according to the needs of the article, so as to avoid inconsistencies in the title of the article. "Self-defined style" should pay attention to the style of writing, which should meet the requirements of the style, and there should be no "four different" styles. You can write poetry.
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