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Autumn has come, and the cicada called Haw on campus has stopped chirping. The leaves on that big tree grow very thick in summer, and it seems that they can't hold back their feelings and want to explore. One by one, they have escaped from their mother's arms and jumped down. The rolling heat wave in summer has also turned into the coolness in autumn, and the dazzling light in summer has also turned into soft light.
A gust of autumn wind blew the grass hat yellow. Blow away the hair on the tree. But you can clearly see the tall and straight pine trees on the hillside, still standing on the mountain in that green dress, adding a little vitality to this autumn. There is still so much rain in early autumn, and it is always a trickle, but the air after the rain is so fresh and smells of earth.
In the evening, the afterglow of sunset makes the hillside golden, as if covered with a layer of gold. The branches are swaying in the breeze, like a layer of gold in the sunset. It's beautiful.
At night, the moonlight shines on trees and grass ... the night is very quiet, and occasionally a few insects can be heard. The sound of autumn, the color of autumn will never end.
The teacher commented that this is an article about scenery, which uses a lot of metaphors and personification, which is a highlight of this article. The little author is a careful and considerate child. In his works, autumn night and autumn rain make people feel the beauty and magic of autumn.
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Miss Xia left quietly, and Miss Qiu came quietly, put on beautiful clothes and went to the field. You see, the endless fields feel the news of autumn for the first time. In the field, sorghum is ripe and red, like a burning flame. A gust of autumn wind blows, and leaves flutter in the wind, like countless flags; When the soybean is ripe, the full beans swell into long and narrow pods and jump out of the pods, as if welcoming the arrival of autumn. The rice is ripe, shining golden in the autumn sun. The breeze blows, and the rice comes and goes, just like the waves of the sea. Farmers' uncles are very busy in the fields. They are carrying a cart full of broken gold rice home, with happy smiles on their faces, and some people are singing!
Autumn is a season of colorful leaves. Look! Leaves are colorful, including brown, yellow and light green ... even a leaf has several colors. They attract people's attention like burning flames, colorful carpets, beautiful watercolors and beautiful silk. The shapes of fallen leaves are also different, such as circle, ellipse, triangle, fan, rectangle ... they are different in size. The big one is like a cattail leaf fan, the small one is like a small shell and the small one is like a flower needle. The edges of fallen leaves are also varied, jagged and rough to the touch; It feels curved and smooth; Some have small thorns on them, and some feel a little pricked. Veins are also various, some like rivers on maps, some like fishbones, some are clear, and some are vague and dazzling. Autumn is a colorful season. From a distance, Qiuju's sisters are like a market, gathering in groups of three or five. White as snow, yellow as gold and red as fire are all pleasing to the eye and refreshing. An intoxicating autumn wind is blowing, and chrysanthemums are swaying and dancing, as if welcoming distinguished guests. Red chrysanthemums are like clusters of burning flames. I was inside, stroking and watching. The stems of those red chrysanthemums are dark green, slightly bent and look very arrogant. Of course, the most striking thing is its petals. Against the backdrop of several palm-shaped green leaves, it is a little, winding and beautiful. The disk hung slightly, much like a shy girl, with her head down, her face flushed and silent. The most interesting thing is "Huanglong plays pearls over golden pagoda", which was made by uncles and aunts with their own skillful hands. I saw two dragons bared their teeth and glared at each other, fighting for a dragon ball. Huang Ju on the Dragon Ball is like a forest of dragons.
Autumn is beautiful, it brings happiness, laughter and happiness to people ... Although the plants and trees wither in autumn, it is not an end, a recession or a depression, but a preparation for a better new life.
Teacher's comment: This is an article about autumn scenery. The language of the article is fresh and lively, and the description can firmly grasp the main features of autumn scenery. By using metaphor and personification rhetoric, it vividly depicts a colorful harvest picture and deeply expresses the author's love for autumn.
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The breeze is rippling and autumn is cool. In the shallow cold, I sat quietly in the corner of late autumn, overlooking the rich colors of distant mountains, staring at the maple red and orange of the canyon, holding a bunch of ponds in my hand, stroking a bunch of chrysanthemum petals, sucking the breath of late autumn and feeling the poetic meaning brought by autumn rhyme. -inscription
Autumn leaves are always so elegant and unrestrained. The wind blows the leaves and leaves, and where I pass, there is no trace of attachment and disappointment, so I left without hesitation. I often think that the departure of leaves is the pursuit of the wind? Or is the tree gone?
"Since ancient times, autumn has been sad and lonely. I say autumn is better than spring."
Autumn wind is always unrestrained. Different from the warmth and softness of spring breeze, the freshness and comfort of Xia Feng, and the chilly winter. He flaunted, like a runaway wild horse, running on the vast Yuan Ye.
"The autumn wind is bleak, the weather is cold, and the vegetation shakes the frost." "The ancient road is sparse, the sun sets, and heartbroken people are at the end of the world." "Affection has been sad since ancient times, more comparable, and it is a cold autumn festival." "Don't be idle, always write your mind at night." "Lonely west wing, such as hook. Lonely phoenix tree deep courtyard locks clear autumn. " In the works of many literati, autumn is beautiful and sad, with countless depression and loneliness, endless grievances and sadness.
Trees in autumn are so lonely. He doesn't go with the wind like a leaf, nor does he fall for the pursuit of the wind. He is so lonely, but he is so unruly. When all the leaves floated away, he still stood alone, so beautiful and so aloof.
Autumn rain is so casual and confusing. Like a naughty girl, sometimes gentle, sometimes provocative, sometimes quiet, sometimes naive, sometimes deep. Another example is a little song, which starts with a quiet process and ends with a struggle.
If the bleak autumn wind touches the memory, the dead leaves flying all over the sky are scattered all over the place, and my heart is inevitably disappointed.
Fall the sadness of autumn and pick up the rhyme of autumn.
The teacher commented that this is a landscape essay. With the theme of "Autumn Rhyme", the author described the sad mood in autumn with delicate brushstrokes. The language of the full text is fluent, the narrative is coherent, the metaphor and personification rhetoric are used properly, and the content is complete and substantial.