1, original:
The swing in the yard, the hanging curtain, and the inscription on the gorgeous door in my spare time. The walls of the wall are like flowers after rain, and the outside of the door is like a breeze floating in the wind.
Explanation:
In the courtyard, the swing swings, the heavy curtains hang low, and I write poems on the gorgeous doors in my spare time. The beauty in the wall is like a flower after the rain, and the wanderer outside is like a poplar floating in the wind.
Appreciate:
Yan's writing is gloomy and frustrated. In addition to sincere feelings, his artistic expression is also unique. That is, he expresses his feelings gracefully and tries to avoid diarrhea. This word fully embodies this feature and is a romantic word known for its profound implication. This word wins with its profundity and implication. Liaoyuan Huang's "Selected Poems on Starting a prairie" analyzes this word: "After the first two sentences, I feel that the courtyard is deep and the door is closed. People in the wall are like flowers after the rain; Outside the door, like the wind behind the catkins.
There is no news in the last two sentences, and the last two sentences are repeated. Ma Shang is affectionate, but what about people? "However, these hints, the author did not tell the truth, but left enough imagination for readers.
2. Original text:
Can be white or yellow, no one is fragrant. A small heart can hold a lot of incense.
Explanation:
Orchid petals are white and yellow, plain and beautiful, but no one appreciates them, but they exude a fragrance. Its heart is not big, but it contains a lot of fragrance.
Appreciate:
"White and yellow", blue petals are white and yellow, plain and beautiful; "No one is fragrant", praising the "fragrance" of orchids from a personalized point of view, and advancing from formal beauty to inner beauty. The metaphor of "holding a lot of incense" is endless and can contribute a lot to people. This poem about orchids focuses on two characteristics of orchids: color and fragrance. The whole poem uses the quiet, pure and lasting fragrance of orchids to write the unique character of orchids and the interest of literati, which is a good structure in poetry about objects.
3. Original text:
Acacia bitter years destroy old youth is limited, so I hope my husband's success can be rewarded as soon as possible. I am a self-evident, pure and pure orchid, which is in bud and ready to be presented to you.
Explanation:
Acacia bitter years destroy people's old age, limited youth, how I hope my husband will return as soon as he becomes famous. I call myself a naive orchid, just in bud, I hope you can pick it early.
Appreciate:
Women compare themselves to two kinds of herbs, Hui and Lan, and compare themselves to delicate flowers in bud. If you don't pick it in time, you will miss the opportunity and the delicate cymbidium will wither like autumn grass. This is to hope that the man will come to get married as soon as possible and don't miss the opportunity. Don Du Qiuniang's "Witchcraft": "Flowers can be folded straight and must be folded, so don't wait for no flowers to be folded." It is similar to these two sentences.
In art, this poem is mainly manifested in the following aspects: first, it uses metaphors to vividly image; Secondly, psychological description is full of emotion; Third, the level is clear and the structure is rigorous; Fourth, ask questions at the end to enhance the effect.