Just like people who have just started school, there are many ways to evaluate a brand-new poem. I only learned this recently, because my poem "The Portrait of the Prince" was used in poetry class. Teachers commented on this poem on YouTube. As a poet, here are some comments that I am interested in. I hope they can also help children. Once adults learn poetry, they will have more things to share with us. They learn the names of many poetic styles. For example, the poet Hunter submitted a list of poetic styles to me. In-depth study can make some amazing ideas discussed in more detail than the poet imagined.
I prefer rhyming poems, but if there are no rhyming poems, I will make a completely different effort. Do I really want to read this poem from beginning to end? Are some lines not very useful? How did it end? Does this help? Some poems may become complicated, and some lose interest before a few poems make me lose my attention. So this is what I wanted at first. If words lose their influence, then I will question whether this poem can be edited better.
Punctuation can help those who recite poems, so I will reconsider what the poet chooses to use instead of the better overall style suggested by grammar. I noticed that if I can keep this poem in plain text, the grammatical mistakes can be reduced in a few minutes. So I don't think every comment is worth worrying about. There are other resources to look up words, but these are not as prominent as advertisements, especially poems and general poems.
I know many readers like puns, but reciting them is a nightmare. So I will choose some poems that are easy to recite or remember. This is also important for the length of the poem. I sometimes write ordinary rhythmic hymns in the style of 8-6-8-6 syllables, but now I use computer monitors and web pages, and I know I can write them in longer lines instead of A4 vertical monitors. So I merged the first and second lines, the third and fourth lines, and converted 32 lines into 16 lines. So I check those longer poems to see if they can be customized in this way or replaced with different fonts or font sizes.