Mom!
Put aside your troubles,
Let me fall into your arms,
Only you are the destination of my soul.
Little flower,
I want to look up, too,
Thank you for your love of dates in spring.
However, deep goodwill,
This finally silenced her.
Mom!
Were you that spring?
Comment on the maternal love in Bing Xin's poems often has dual connotations: one is the infiltration of maternal love into poets; The second is the poet's deep praise for maternal love. These two short poems both embody this dual connotation. They express their children's close attachment to their loving mothers and praise their love. The metaphor is novel and the language is beautiful and touching.
The flower of success,
People only marvel at her present glory!
However, at the beginning, her bud,
Soaked with tears of struggle,
The blood rain of sacrifice is scattered everywhere.
This is a philosophical poem. The poet compares the success of life career to flowers, compares the initial stage of achievement career to the "bud" of flowers, compares the hardships of struggle to the "spring of tears" of cultivating flowers, and compares self-sacrifice to the "blood rain" of nourishing flowers. The image is appropriate and thought-provoking.
Inquiry thinking
There are many praises for "stars" and "springs", but some people disagree. For example, Liang Shiqiu once said:
When I read Bing Xin's poems, my biggest disappointment was that she was completely short of girl writers, but there were almost no long ones. Ms. Bing Xin, whom I know from the stars and springs, is a poet whose temperature is below zero.
The genre of "stars" and "spring water" cannot be elegant in the poetic country after all. This is probably the easiest thing to do. Grab a specious poem, choose a few beautiful words to schedule it, and it becomes a song, and it becomes an episode. This is a poetic style that is the easiest to be lazy and should not be fashionable at all.
Another disadvantage of Stars and Spring Water is that the syntax is too close to prose.
To sum up: Ms. Bing Xin is a prose writer and novel writer, and is not suitable for poetry; The genres of "star" and "spring water" are not worth imitating and become fashionable.