1. Write the scenery. To write beautiful lyric prose, it is inseparable from scene description. In other words, the main part of lyric prose is composed of natural scenes and social scenes, only focusing on differences. The article "Morning" describes the growth process of "morning" from "dawn dew" to "sunny", thus praising the "morning" spirit of "day after day, year after year". Urban Music is a scene about the labor of subway workers. In a hot summer, sweat flowed on their bodies, the veins stood out on their bare arms, the hammer danced in their hands, hammer after hammer ... The hammer hit the ground and issued a "bang! Bang bang! " Sound. This voice "played the most beautiful music in this city." Obviously, the former focuses on the description of natural scenery, while the latter focuses on the description of social scenery. As we are familiar with Zhu Ziqing's famous lyric prose "Spring", it mainly focuses on the construction of several natural scenes; The article "Happiness" written by a classmate captures the social picture of "Happiness is in the sweat of workers", "Happiness is in the pursuit of the willing", "Happiness is in the dedication of selfless people" and "Happiness is in our great era" in the main part to express his feelings. Of course, more lyric prose often takes the form of combining natural scenes with social scenes. This close combination of reality and movement will make the article more expressive.
2. things. We say that the writing of lyric prose, one is to borrow scenery to express emotion, the other is to borrow things to express emotion. In order to make students understand the characteristics of this lyric way more easily and clearly, we must first understand the similarities and differences between objects and scenery and the description of objects. First of all, talk about the similarities between scenery and objects. They should not only grasp the characteristics of scenery or objects to describe, but also express the author's feelings in the description. The difference is that the content of scenery writing is more important than the scene, involving a wider range, and people, things, scenery and things related to "characteristics" can be organically connected in series; The content of things is relatively simple, generally involving animals, plants, things, mainly describing a specific thing, resulting in feelings. Next, I will talk about the difference between lyricism and description. The object is mainly used to describe the characteristics of the object. In addition to the description, you can alternately add some explanatory and narrative words. The method is flexible, and the main purpose of writing is to express feelings and hint at a certain spiritual quality. The description of writing is to grasp the "personality characteristics" of something, tell it straight, and introduce it in an orderly way. As far as its writing purpose is concerned, it mainly introduces the structure and function of the object and spreads some knowledge. As far as writing is concerned, there are usually two forms of "form" and "meaning": one is from form to spirit. That is, the whole article is composed of things and people, which are naturally connected and integrated. Mao Dun's Praise of Poplar was written in the most difficult years in War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression. The author thinks of the indomitable and heroic anti-Japanese soldiers and civilians from the "tenacious growth and straight upward" poplar. "Poplar" became a symbol of "anti-Japanese soldiers and civilians"; Praise of Poplar has also become one of the representative works of lyric prose. Second, both form and spirit. That is, the whole article takes "things" as the center, while "God" is included in the description of "shape". "Love Lotus" begins with a description of the noble image of lotus and ends with the metaphorical meaning of lotus. It is through the praise and praise of the lotus that the author shows his noble personality of leading an honest and clean life, does not go with the flow, despises and hates the worldly pursuit of fame and fortune. "Mud is not stained, but it is not evil." We are also familiar with this beautiful sentence about lotus.
3. prose. Lyricism is inseparable from scenery and objects, and prose refers to the diverse structural forms of lyric prose. When writing, it is also important to choose the appropriate serial structure. Roaming series of travel notes is a common form in lyric prose, and writing is often connected with travel notes in series. Experience of traveling to Jiuzhaigou. "I" went to Jiuzhaigou to play and came to Jiuzhaigou, which coincided with the continuous drizzle. No one appreciates the scenery in Jiuzhaigou, and I am very depressed. I didn't expect to go to Sichuan, but I was deeply infected by the optimistic and open-minded attitude of Sichuanese. "Yes, isn't this the most beautiful natural scenery!" "I" can't help but sigh from the heart. Image series. By describing and portraying a specific image in a specific environment, the image is given a certain symbolic meaning, thus expressing the author's praise. Gorky's Haiyan left a deep impression on us. By describing the marine environment before the storm, the performance of other seabirds and the vivid image of Haiyan, the author expressed his admiration for the proletarian revolutionary pioneers. Emotional tandem. Lyric prose often has an emotional theme running through the whole article in the writing process. The author of Our Secret does not write the little secrets around him, but eulogizes the big secrets of our nation. "Wan Li Great Wall, West Lake ..." Famous mountains and beautiful waters, this is our secret; "Yuanmingyuan, Dunhuang …" History and culture, this is our secret. The mysterious China has given birth to countless secrets. This is our secret. The article is full of love for the Chinese nation. Of course, there are other ways, such as history series, memory series, Lenovo series and so on. I won't give examples here.