Write down your feelings.
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Everyone who is a beginner in writing is often confused about what to write and how to write. My experience is to write about my feelings, how life touches you, and how you write about feelings, without exaggeration; Prose is like this, and poetry is no exception. I wrote "Every soldier is a tree", which was in the vast Gobi, the endless desert, and there were no trees; The mountain is bare, without green and gray.
In this way, the group poem "Gun Array" was born: climb a mountain/climb another mountain/so I saw the loneliness of the mountain ... lifeless mountains feel lonely. So, will the soldiers guarding the frontier be lonely? There are no flowers in spring and there is no green world on earth. Our soldiers stand guard there and train for life. They dedicated their youth to the military camp and wrote touching poems. In the distant frontier, the soldiers brought green and vitality to the Gobi Desert. Every soldier on the Gobi Desert is a tree!
The lyrics need to be moved, and the narrative needs to be moved. I wrote a poem by Zhang Haidi, The Girl in a Wheelchair, which is lyrical and emotional: The girl in a wheelchair/You are the farthest person in the world/You live by your wings of perseverance//You also live in our spirit/This vast home is as blue as the sea//You are a free person in your new life/You don't give in to fate//The girl who won the battle with the devil/Your name is your song: Heidi.
Because it is moved from the heart, poetry has soul and strength. The poem "The Girl in a Wheelchair" was included in the extracurricular reading of middle school students in Sichuan. The richness of the article comes from the inner world, and the inner richness comes from life. There are many feelings in life that make us feel excited and shine at the moment; Especially when we are in the era of information change, there are many exciting things around us. All kinds of changing scenes, contradictions and focuses are the highlights of our creation and play.
In the spring of 2003, we were troubled by an epidemic. SARS, a respiratory disease, is raging in our land, with hundreds of patients increasing every day. Doctors and nurses are in danger, the hospital has become the source of disease transmission, and everyone is panicked: one SARS patient is hospitalized, and everyone is discharged!
At the critical moment of the motherland, with the cry of patients, the whole army 1200 medical staff went to Xiaotangshan Hospital in Beijing. People see hope in despair! However, will these lovely people come back? As a nurse, I wrote in the first person when I came back.
I can't say: 100% back/fallen comrades in front/that's why we went to the front/... where heroes fell/where warriors came/one, two ... hundreds/we came to Beijing from all directions of the motherland//Please call me a soldier/a white soldier who will never fall/... My relatives released their fears.
After "Wait for Me to Come Back" was published in People's Daily, many newspapers reprinted it, and CCTV recorded it as a score poem and played it many times, which was well received by readers and audiences. There is nothing special about "When I Come Back", if there is, it is that I wrote out the feelings at that time truthfully. Years of creative experience tell me that anything that can touch you will definitely touch others. Write down your feelings, and you'll be half successful.
The refinement and sublimation of art is also based on emotion. Write down your feelings, either realistically or romantically. In a word, all literature is human emotionalism. Always speak with emotion, which is the inevitable and key to success!