Teacher: We all know that poetry needs rhyme, especially modern poetry.
If you use the same word as a vowel in a place that doesn't rhyme, it will be awkward to read.
But it is often ignored, because it is often not a serious injury, but it actually affects the overall aesthetic feeling of poetry.
Rhyme must be homophony, horizontal rhyme and new rhyme.
If there are different rhymes at the end of a sentence, it is limited to the first sentence and the last sentence, and it must also be the case of adjacent rhymes. This will be discussed separately.
1, rhyming, this is easy to understand, that is, rhyming words use different rhyming words.
This kind of situation generally does not occur, because there is a mistake in the level tone, the adjacent rhyme has rhyme, and the level tone and the new rhyme are mixed. Third, we should pay more attention to the fact that most of the numbers are the same when homophones are used, but some words are different, so we must check them after the poem is written.
2, rhyme, commonly known as "rhyme foot." Just to rhyme, I reluctantly chose a word in the rhyme department that is inconsistent, incoherent and irrelevant to the whole sentence. This won't work. This rhyme is easier to appear.
Rhyme is a taboo, and it must not be meaningless, unreasonable and irrelevant.
This question is to examine the changing ability of words and characters. Usually choose a word in the rhyme department. If you can't express it, overthrow it and re-establish the rhyme.
3, heavy rhyme, that is, repeating a word as rhyme, this is also not possible.
In poetry, it can't be reused. Even in words, it is generally not allowed.
4, rhyme, rhyme, reverse the normal words.
For example, "Fengyun, Magnum, Fresh, Generous, Sad, Exquisite, Remnant, Harp" and so on, it is awkward to write them backwards, especially when the meaning of words changes. This situation generally appears among novices and should be avoided.
5. Dumb rhyme means rhyming with some words that can't be read clearly and have no obvious meaning.
Not all flat words are suitable for rhyming. Some words don't look like it, and their voices are not loud. Try not to use them reluctantly, or the whole poem will feel depressed. "If you want to make a good poem, you must first choose rhyme. Those who are dumb and lazy give up cheaply. "
But personally, this is not absolute, and some so-called "dumb rhymes" can better reflect the effect if used properly. This is not absolute, sometimes it is a noisy atmosphere, which can be done.
6. Odd rhyme means rhyming with uncommon words.
In other words, the rhyme used is an uncommon word, and nine out of ten people don't know it, which is not desirable. After all, poetry is for readers.
And find some uncommon words to rhyme, he fell into a misunderstanding and didn't know it. In fact, he didn't know that it was a poetic disease that was displayed. Old Yuan Manmei said: "Dear Du Liren, you don't have to rhyme, you must use it, but you look down on it." . These are easy to understand and rarely come across, so pay attention to the latter.
7. Squeezing rhyme is also called "committing rhyme" and "taking rhyme". It is the words that are the same as the rhyme vowels in the poem that make this sentence difficult to read. However, the overlap related to rhyme is a rhetorical device, not a squeeze rhyme.
For example, the spring breeze is full of peaks, and the rumors are crowded. This is a frequent crime, so pay more attention to it.
8. Polyphony is a word with the same or similar meaning in a poem, which is repeatedly sworn. For example, put the word "worry" first, then put the word "worry"; Bet the word "flower" and then the word "yuan"; Put the word "Xiang" and then put the word "Fang". Personally, I don't think this kind of complex rhyme can be generalized. For example, the appearance of rhymes such as "Xiang" and "Fang" in a poem is not completely invalid.
9. The rhyme of Yin San Yunping is Yin Ping. Please note that it only refers to Yin Ping characters, and the rising tone is not included. In this respect, I personally think there is no need to stick to it, that is to say, it is best to avoid the interactive use of Yin Ping and Yang Ping, but for poetic reasons, it is understandable to really use all Yin Ping characters.
Don't pay too much attention to this statement, just know it.
10, "rhyme" and "rhyme collision", especially "rhyme collision" are the most harmful.
Rhyme. Even the last word of a blank sentence (we call it "white foot" to correspond to "rhyme foot", such as the third sentence of the four-line poem) uses the same word as the vowel of the rhyme foot.
White feet, refers to the previous sentence. The first couplet, the last word is called white feet, which doesn't rhyme. But this word is particular, and it should not be the same as the rhyme of the previous sentence, for example, (far), (cold), and the far word collides with rhyme.
This poem is well written, but we always feel uncomfortable reading it. This is because the word "wash" at the end of the third sentence here has "rhyme collision" As soon as the word "Xi" came out, the word "Xi" behind it was completely suppressed. When I was reading there, I felt relieved that I couldn't understand the rhythm of the word "West".
The rhyme between the first sentence and the third sentence is serious, which reads like a jingle and destroys its aesthetic feeling.
Complaints, cases, all rhyme.
Let's talk about rhyme first: what is rhyme has been explained before. Now let's give an example to illustrate it.
"Phoenix" and "Phoenix" rhyme, which is awkward to read.
The word "Rong Rong" is a reduplication, not a rhyme. You should know this.
The closer the word "squeeze rhyme" is to rhyme, the greater the harm.
Rhyme: The rhyme feet of two adjacent rhyming sentences use homophones as rhyming words. Li Anyun is also known as the "Choir".
Rhyme is harmful to the rhythm of this poem, especially in seven verses. Therefore, poets also pay more attention to the creation of the four wonders. So it is difficult to find examples of "rhyme" in ancient quatrains. Relatively speaking, there are many rhymes in metrical poems.
For example:
Among them, "nest" and "ridicule" rhyme.
The above ten aspects, key points, rhyming, rhyming, rhyming.
No rhyme, repeat rhyme, rhyme backwards.
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