It is often said that articles should not follow suit, but should be written as "what the predecessors have not seen, and what the predecessors have not done". In fact, these are all about innovation.
Innovation is the highest value of an article and the highest realm of writing an article. So how should we innovate our usual composition? A new proposition.
Proposition is to determine the title of a composition. A good topic is not only an organic part of a composition, but also can point out, entrust or symbolize the center of the article. Some composition topics can attract attention by themselves. Therefore, the success of an article does not depend entirely on the title of the article, but a good title is undoubtedly very important for a composition.
In order to give people a refreshing feeling, the title of the article must be unconventional and avoid vulgarity. For example, the semi-propositional composition "Love for _ _ _" requires students to fill in the appropriate words on the horizontal lines.
Originally, there were a lot of contents that could be filled in, and the scope was also very wide. You can directly fill in some words to express your address, such as "father", "mother" and "teacher", and you can also fill in some adjectives, such as "greatness" and "sincerity", but these are either common or empty and lack new ideas.
If you have a keen mind and are good at association and imagination, you can produce novel, unique, implicit and meaningful topics such as love without regret, love without death, simple love and love from afar. For example, in recent years, some high-scoring compositions have emerged in college entrance examination compositions, such as the death of the red rabbit, the tears of angels, all of which are the fault of the moon, scales and lyres, and so on. , are also more vivid and novel topics.
Second, choose new materials. Choosing new materials means that the materials for composition should be fresh, unique and different.
From a psychological point of view, everyone has a psychology of "liking the new and hating the old", and it is human nature to be curious about the new. This is reflected in the selection of materials, that is, seeing what has not been seen and seeing what has not been seen.
Lu Ji said that "articles are the most taboo", which is the reason. If you write an article in the scope of "love", if you write "classmates' love", you will write about how classmates care about themselves in life, how to lend themselves without an umbrella when it rains, and how to let themselves get wet; Help yourself to study.
I was ill in hospital, and my classmates took notes for me and made up lessons for me. If you write about the teacher's love, it means how the teacher encourages himself when he is not studying well, or how to carry him to the hospital when he is sick. These topics are all old materials, nothing new.
If we can start from life and combine with the development of the times, we can write how parents cultivate their children with appreciation education, how teachers improve me with frustration education, how teachers successfully use psychological education to make me grow, and so on. Will be unconventional and innovative. This is the innovation in materials.
If you want to choose new materials, you must learn to pay more attention to society and reality in your daily life. Love life, observe life, love life.
Feel the ever-changing life and the endless stream of new things. Learn to be a conscientious person in life, find more materials from life, accumulate more and improve more.
On the basis of full analysis, comparison and synthesis, we should break through the mindset, highlight diversity and make steady innovation. 3. New ideas.
It is often said that literature seems to look at mountains and is uneven. Mencius also said that if you have the ability to look at water, you must look at it.
As an article, no matter how good the theme is, it will be boring if there is no good form to express it. Therefore, in writing, we should learn to carefully conceive the content and expression of the article as a whole and learn new ideas.
In terms of conception, we should learn the ability to calm down. For example, in Romance of the Three Kingdoms.
Cao Cao nodded and killed Dong Zhuo, which was excellent: the next day, Cao Cao nodded and went to the Prime Minister's Office and asked, "Where is the Prime Minister?" From the human cloud: "In the small pavilion." Fuck the path.
When Zhuo saw Dong Zhuo sitting on the bed and Lu Bu waiting beside him, he said, "Why did Meng De come so late?" Cao Cao said, "Ma Chi." Gu Zhuo said to Bu, "The soldiers from the West are here. Good horse. I want to take a ride to Meng De. "
Cao Cao thought to himself, "This thief will die together!" I just want to draw my sword and stab it, but I'm afraid I'm strong and afraid to make a move. Zhuo Pang couldn't bear to sit down, so he lay down and turned inward.
Cao Cao thought again, "Stop this thief!" He grabbed his treasure knife and was about to stab it. He didn't want Dong Zhuo to look back in the mirror and see Cao Cao drawing his sword behind him. He turned and asked, "What is Mende?" At this time, Lu Bu had led the horse outside the pavilion, and Cao Cao was in a panic. Instead, he knelt down with a knife and said, "Fuck, I have a treasure knife." You see, even in the narrative of this small event, the author can conceive several ups and downs of the plot, which always attracts readers and produces exciting effects.
Such an article is memorable and innovative. This is what we usually call water feet making waves.
People also vividly say that good articles are: rockhopper, streaky pork, leopard tail. In other words, the beginning of the article can be concise, novel and unique, and it can have a preconceived effect.
The middle part should be meaningful, not empty talk, and can reflect personal writing personality. The ending is clean and unique and unforgettable.
These are unique ideas. It is worthy of serious study and experience.
Four languages are new. The language of the article doesn't have to be amazing, and it doesn't have to be a bunch of famous sayings and rhetoric.
Simple words can also contain intriguing content, and can also make literary talent fly; Personalized language and vivid language can also make the article have its own characteristics. For example, a classmate wrote in his composition: "The cloned sheep has no parents.
Famous people publish books, which is a mess. Tell everyone a secret: Xiao Ming actually cloned his parents' signatures! "Such a humorous statement contains a little irony in humor.
This narrative is full of life, novel and unique, vivid and touching. In short, in the usual composition, we should be able to consciously walk out of the closed cage, break the shackles of stylization, let go of our own thoughts and personality, express our unique feelings and real experiences about nature, society and life with our true brushstrokes and good forms, and write fresh and lively articles.
2.4 Please write the article 1 What you want to express. The main characters are "me" and "brother", and three things about getting an apple, wanting to divide an apple and dividing an apple are written in detail around the apple, mainly through grasping the characters' language, movements and demeanor.
It was the first time I ate an apple, and I didn't know it was so fragrant and sweet until I ate its skin for the first time.
3. For example: ① The mother is very contradictory: the child has never eaten an apple when he is so big, and he should eat it; Grandma is over 80 years old, and the chances of eating apples are getting less and less, so she should eat more. It seems that these two children can only be wronged! (2) Mother feels guilty: Is it cruel to be a mother because children want apples so much and are so sensible that they are not allowed to taste them? ...
The first layer means that the apple peel is very fragrant and sweet, and the second layer means that my brother and I learn to care about others and deliberately give the apple peel to my mother, who is very happy and sweet.
Because eating the apple peel that time made me learn to be polite and care about others, this is my beautiful memory, so the taste of the apple peel makes me unforgettable.
3. How to express thoughts and feelings Today is the Mid-Autumn Festival, a day for family reunion. As the saying goes: Things change, and heaven remains our neighbourhood. But this year we are not so lucky. It's been raining in Mao Mao since morning, and it's gloomy. It seems that we won't see the bright moon tonight.
In the evening, our family sat around a table to have a reunion dinner and chat happily. My brother and I ate round moon cakes and looked at the night sky from time to time. We couldn't help thinking of the Mid-Autumn Festival last year.
Last Mid-Autumn Festival, after dinner, grandpa and his family couldn't wait to come to the Han River to enjoy the moon. "Come out, come out," I shouted excitedly. The moon shows half of its face, shy as a little girl. Slowly, the round moon rose, like a big jade plate, like a fairy in white gauze, and sprinkled the bright moonlight on the earth, making it look like day. The moon is embedded in the sky. In the moonlight, I seem to see Sister Chang 'e crying alone. She is holding the jade in her hand and thinking about her relatives. At this moment, grandpa stopped me. "Look at that, it's beautiful!" It turns out that the shadow of the moon is reflected in the water, forming the moon in the water. The river reflects the surrounding lights and sets off the beautiful full moon, which really seems to be in a beautiful picture. Seeing this scene, I can't help writing a poem: the Mid-Autumn Festival is full moon, and the lake reflects the moon. The long river is like a picture, and our home is beautiful. After listening to this, everyone praised me and said, "Yes, I am in high spirits and can write poems." I smiled proudly ... what an unforgettable Mid-Autumn Night!
4. Are there any poems with thoughts and feelings that can be used for writing? Li Bai's "Climbing Mount Tianmu in a Dream" expresses his extreme resentment against the dark reality, his contempt for powerful people and erin brockovich's strong feelings by describing the strange dreamland of Mount Tianmu's sleepwalking. Su Shi's "Jiangchengzi" begins with the author's "silent care" when he meets his dead wife in his dream. Expressed the author's yearning. Lu You's The Storm on November 4th and The Dream of Tiema Glacier fully show the poet's strong patriotic thoughts and feelings. Li Yu's Looking at the South of the Yangtze River shows the poet's sad mood when he was imprisoned in Bianjing by describing the scene of going to the garden in his dream. Du Fu's Two Dreams of Li Bai is a copy of the poet.
5. What is the main content of the article "I like you, Xiaohei"? I like you, black in grade five. Mom said I learned it from you. Dad said you raised everything in the world. I like the arrival of summer night, the river is covered with silver, and I like the rising sun, and the river is covered with golden armor. I like the spring breeze, and the river is trembling slightly. I like autumn. Rivers. First of all, because of your selfless dedication. In spring, the river melts, playing the drums of spring, welcoming the beautiful spring and awakening the small animals. In summer, the river flows, singing and dancing, becoming the most beautiful and charming scenery in nature. In autumn, the river goes to sleep immediately, but you have to do one thing before going to bed, and that is for nature. Let the children slide on you, you set a strong backbone for them, and let the children enjoy themselves on you. I like you, Xiaohe. In the field, in nature, you can see your slim figure everywhere, stretching to endless distances. Is this the poem? It expresses the author's praise for the river, his love for the river and his love for a better life (as can be seen from his observation of the scenery of the four seasons).
6. What thoughts and feelings does the author want to express when writing this composition? Suddenly it began to rain cats and dogs, the sky was boundless, the streets were full of traffic, and people always looked back and forth when crossing the road. The rain kept falling on my head and I looked very flustered. If only there was an umbrella that could keep out the rain and illuminate! Multifunctional umbrella? Do it!
But how to make this multifunctional umbrella? I invited the top "engineer" in my family-Dad. I found an umbrella like dad said? Conductor? Xiaoguang? Movie ... Hey, what's wrong with the battery box? We turned it upside down and finally found a small electric fan for my father. I looked at it in surprise and asked my father, "What's the use?" Dad smiled and said, "This is called using local materials, understand?" I was in a daze, and the small fan and battery box solved the problem. Dad decided to connect the electric light with the switch of the electric fan. When the switch is pressed, the light and the fan will be turned on at the same time. I can't help feeling smug about this original work. But there is only one night left. It's really a shit-digging a toilet-and I'm in a hurry, stamping my feet like a deflated ball sitting on a stool. Dad comforted me and said, "You can't try once, you have to try twice. Keep studying. Failure is the mother of success. You should know, right? " Dad's words seemed to give me a shot in the arm. I pulled myself together and the ball bounced again.
My father carefully connected the wire to the fan, and then I realized that the "internal organs" of the fan were so complicated and dazzling, but my father handled it slowly and steadily. However, when the switch was finally pressed, the fan made a "quack" and "quack" sound for some reason. I tried several times, but it still didn't work. Just like a naughty child, he doesn't listen to his mother's persuasion and keeps shouting "no" and "no" Dad frowned thoughtfully, and then dad leisurely moved the wire with tweezers. Suddenly, the naughty boy became as good as he hoped. I was ecstatic and couldn't help shouting, "It worked, it worked!" "The feeling of joy arises spontaneously, constantly showing in my heart like spring water. ...
It worked! I clapped my hands with my father, and the crystal sweat kept flowing from my forehead, but looking at my masterpiece, the multifunctional umbrella, being in heaven, a sense of pride came from my heart. ...