Seeing this topic, you must naturally think of Meng Jiao's Ode to a Wanderer and the poem "She sewed carefully and mended it thoroughly, fearing that the delay would make him come home late". Isn't this the concern of the loving mother who walks Wan Li Road? "When the sun sets, heartbroken people are at the end of the world" is the wanderer's concern for his hometown; "I miss my husband and make you old" is a concern for my husband who is far away from the frontier; "Sailing alone in the sky" is a concern for friends ... On the one hand, how long the history of mankind is, how long the concern is; How deep the human feelings are, how deep the concern is; How strong the human feelings are, how strong the concern is.
The writing emphasis of this topic lies in "caring". After we have made clear the meaning of "caring is caring and mourning", writing has a framework and scope. You can draw a circle with your own cognition as the center and care as the radius, and all the materials in this circle can enter the topic. If you are a poetry lover, you can collect poems about "caring" in the past dynasties and compile a wonderful article when writing; If you are a master narrator, you can tell a touching and beautiful story about caring; If you are an affectionate American writer, you can also use a large sum of money, dipped in passionate ink, to sing the song of "caring" and make prose ... The genre of the article is like the bones of the human body, and then with structure as the rib, language as the flesh and blood, and writing as the texture, an article with both quality and beauty will overflow from your pen.
Of course, to impress readers, there must be something in detail, and through the description of details, "care" is written incisively and vividly. When describing the mother's concern for the children who go out, the figure of watching at the entrance of the village should become a detailed thing. Only by describing in detail and writing out my mother's voice incisively and vividly can we have a more meaningful texture than "my mother has prepared many delicious meals for me"
What is "care"? This is a very abstract concept. Fortunately, the topic material has used the metaphor of two people to imply its connotation. We can use these two metaphors to develop analogy and association, so as to get to the point. For example, from "no matter how high a kite flies, it can't shake off that slender thread", it is metaphorically associated with the homesickness of overseas travelers for the motherland, the thoughts of overseas students for their parents, their parents for their children, their long-lost classmates and friends, and so on; From the "melon, beans, vines and hedges", it is analogized that children are attached to their families, wives are attached to their husbands, and so on. Through analogy and transformation, we can quickly open our minds and determine the theme of the article. When writing, we should carefully choose specific touching events and try our best to express sincere feelings. When writing epistolary, we should pay attention to the standardization and completeness of the format, choose the object of statement (people we are familiar with or close to) according to the topic of "concern", keep the tone in line with the relationship with the object of statement, and highlight the center of "concern" in four main parts.
Give you three model essays:
(1) Concern
We all care about each other.
I can't forget my family, the friendship between friends, the harmony between teachers and students, and the evergreen trees planted and cultivated by my grandmother. It also takes root and grows in the fertile soil of my young mind, which is my endless miss for my grandmother.
Every time the evergreen tree grows new leaves, the round and short tree gesticulates to me briskly. Light green leaves dance at the top of the tree and sway in the sun, indicating the blooming of life. The thick dark green leaves remind me that time seems to have returned to the days that made me sad and sorry five years ago.
The sun shone through the shade and cast mottled shadows. Zaizai lies lazily under the tree, squinting his eyes, taking a nap from time to time, and sometimes sticking out his scarlet tongue to lick his dry nose. Grandma danced on the treetops with scissors, her forehead was full of sweat, but she had no idea of the hard work. She likes flowers and trees, especially evergreen trees. When I ask my grandmother why, she always tells me, "Evergreen, Evergreen, Evergreen, Yinger, if you work as hard as it, there is always endless energy." At that time, I didn't understand anything, so I snuggled up in her arms and spoiled. The sweat on her forehead merged into a river, kept gathering, and finally fell like a broken bead. Sweat like a naughty child instantly got into the soil, and she fell in love with hiding with her grandmother. She gave a long sigh.
That afternoon, I passed by evergreen and couldn't help but stop. The sun, the moon and the sun are shining brightly, and it grows luxuriantly. Sunshine and rain make it grow stronger, more like a fat child who is wet behind the ears. I laughed, and it laughed with me. I don't know when, Zaizai came to play with the "fat boy". A wave of his hand accidentally hurt evergreen. A breeze blew and I looked around with a hint of coolness. Zaizai bit my trouser leg and complained. I stared at Zaizai angrily and complained to myself: Aren't you always with grandma? Why are you bothering me? When my angry eyes and Zaizai's eyes wanted to meet, my infinite sad eyes dissolved my anger. A closer look, tears actually soaked the hair in the corner of Zaizai's eyes. "Who bullied you? What about grandma? " I said to myself, my heart was full of doubts. I looked at the lonely boy, and my heart was shocked, ah! Where's grandma? I cried for her. My aunt appeared in front of me with red eyes. I took her hand and argued with her: "Where's Grandma? I want grandma! " "Grandma ... no ... no ... no, she's gone." "No-Grandma, don't go, Yinger will be very good." I sat on the ground, crying and making noise.
Looking at the evergreen outside the window, I have many regrets. I want to listen to grandma telling stories and watch grandma knitting sweaters. When I grow up, I will earn a lot of money to buy her flowers, grass and trees. I haven't eaten the spaghetti my grandma cooked for me. I haven't ... I haven't. ...
Couples are broken and connected. Isn't that what I miss about grandma?
(2)
Caring is a kind of beauty.
Caring is a kind of love for life, a call from the depths of the soul and an overflow of feelings. When people are concerned, they are concerned, and being concerned is happiness. Caring is a loving look that transcends time and space. Even in a poor life, happiness will overflow the beautiful mind. This is my friend who has been out of touch for many years. One day she called me. She asked me to guess who she was. I was so surprised that I didn't expect someone to call me. I was ashamed to answer for a moment. Later, she signed up as my primary school classmate. I really didn't expect her to remember me. It's so touching. She said that she had been thinking about our former classmates, but some of them were out of touch. She told me that she knew my current address was accidental, and I heard her say it when I first met my little sister. Later, we chatted for a long time and finally left contact information with each other. When I put down the phone, I suddenly felt a little touched. In the turbulent crowd, people's feelings tend to fade or even become indifferent because of the widening of time and distance. Sometimes friendship has become a thing of the past. When I was a child, I could be taken care of by a classmate for a long time. Is it not a kind of sweetness and happiness? People say that true friendship between friends is like pure water. Clear and pure, always worth remembering and cherishing. Caring is a high-level spiritual communication. Think about it, in a limited life, there are some people worthy of your unforgettable memories. I hope you can be proud of his life and shine your life with his care. Because of mutual care, life becomes richer and better. Caring is acacia, mourning, worry, blessing, expectation and longing. Caring is a casual extension of love and a natural expression of true feelings. No matter what kind of feelings they come from, they are all kind, sincere and beautiful, and they all contain kindness, care, responsibility and warmth. Caring is the expression of true feelings. Caring is the homesick tears left by the wife for her husband who is far away from home, the heavy letters sent by parents for their son who is guarding the border of the motherland, the lingering overseas phone call made by the young people studying abroad to their domestic girlfriends, and the caring and missing of the mother who traveled to Wan Li. Concern is the rainbow bridge that spans the tangible distance. Even though it is far away, it is close at hand in my heart. Care needs to be cherished, paid and paid. It embodies the truth and innocence of life and is the true meaning of creating happiness and joy. Caring is not the person who will always be with you and always be with you everywhere, but the person who silently guards you when you are sick and wishes you a speedy recovery; It's the one who is still with you when you are in adversity, encouraging you to cheer up and helping you tide over the difficulties; It is the person who advised you to be indifferent to fame and fortune in the spring breeze and stay awake. Care is a cup of tea, bitter with sweet, can nourish the body and mind. In caring, we can get rid of unbearable loneliness, recall and chew the warmth of true feelings, reflect on the responsibility and mission of life, purify the soul, sublimate the spirit and win a fighting force. Caring is a kind of beauty. With care in your heart, you won't be lonely and depressed, and life will have wonderful melody and bright colors. It is the tacit understanding between hearts and the communication between hearts. Caring, like beautiful poetry, transcends the world, loves what it loves, loves what it loves. Let's use our life and care to embark on a wonderful and beautiful road!
(3) Concern
Caring is the deep concern of one heart for another, and it is the bond linking family, friendship and love. Concern is a family affection, a wisp of acacia, a kind of happiness.
Caring is a life form, a spiritual place and a psychological magnetic field that everyone should look for and cherish. The best way to identify the depth of feelings is to pay attention to the length of time. The beautiful legend of Peacock Flying Southeast, the eternal swan song of Meng Jiangnu Crying for the Great Wall, the joys and sorrows of butterfly lovers, and the wonderful sentence of "I miss you like the moon, and it decreases every night" all describe that your face is getting thinner and thinner because of your concern until you pay your life and leave us a true and sincere sad and beautiful story.
Caring is a cup of deep feelings, and saying goodbye is a good wish. Parents' concern for their children is like a cloud, which floats around with the birds in the sky, across the Qian Shan and haunts the children's hearts. The concern between brothers and sisters is like a mountain stream, clear and transparent. As long as the green hills are not old, there will be a sea of people, singing and stirring the waves all the way. The concern between husband and wife is like graceful words, lingering and far away, and acacia often makes tears stick to the towel. There is also the kind of concern between friends that does not contain blood relationship and is not mixed with selfish distractions, which often gives people endless strength and courage.
Concern is a precious emotion between people. It has no false impurities and no utilitarian color. Caring is generous and selfless dedication, deep blessing and silent prayer. Care is not an illusory mirage, but real details and actions. Buying a pill and pouring a cup of hot water is a sign of concern; Asking "good morning" and saying "good night" are expressions of concern; A greeting card, a letter from home, a phone call, a message ... are all manifestations of love.
Concern is the whisper of the soul and the dialogue between the hearts.
Bye, bye!