Problem description:
Chinese homework … find ten ancient poems … attach my own comments … but I am a middle school student after all … so I want to ask where I can find some comments on ancient poems? Thank you for seeing them off to my door.
Analysis:
An autumn night in the mountains
(Don)
The empty mountains are bathed in a new rain, and feel the early autumn at night.
The bright moon shed clear light from the cracks and cleared the fountain on the rocks.
The bamboo forest is sonorous, the washerwoman returns, and the lotus leaves are swaying to get on the canoe.
Spring spring might as well give it a rest, and the autumn sun can stay on the hills for a long time.
This is a famous landscape poem. The first couplet, early autumn evening in Shan Yu, has fresh air and beautiful scenery. Turn around, it is already dark, but there is a bright moon in the sky; The flowers have withered, but there are pine trees covered. The mountain spring is clear, flowing through the rocks, like a flawless plain, shining in the moonlight, what a quiet and clear natural beauty. Necklace, there was a burst of laughter in the bamboo forest. It's some innocent girls coming back from washing clothes and laughing. The graceful lotus leaves spread out to both sides one after another, overturning countless pearl-like crystal drops. It is the fishing boats downstream that cut the tranquility of the lotus pond moonlight. The poet tried his best to paint a pure and beautiful picture, reflecting the poet's ideal of living a quiet simple living, and at the same time, setting off his aversion to dirty officialdom from the opposite side. The poet expressed the beauty of personality and an ideal social beauty with natural beauty. The poet chooses positive images such as "new rain", "bright moon", "clear spring", "bamboo sound" and "lotus movement".
Taicheng (Tang Wei Zhuang)
The rain is falling, the grass is falling, and the birds of the Six Dynasties are singing.
Ruthlessness is a willow in Taicheng, but it is still a smoke cage.
An analysis of the ancient city of Nanjing with continuous rain and lush vegetation. The past six dynasties have become an old dream, and now only the desolate birds are heard. No matter who prospers or dies, the willows in the ancient city are still flourishing, like green smoke covering the long embankment. The descriptions of rainy days, Cao Jiang and birdsong at the beginning render a bleak atmosphere, while the last two sentences are full of feelings in the landscape, expressing infinite melancholy and ups and downs in the common landscape.
Qiaojinmen (Tangfengyan Temple)
The spring breeze suddenly started and blew out a pool of clear water. Nothing was done. The believers in the pool folded the apricot flowers and crushed them gently on the path among the flowers.
Leaning on the railing by the pool, watching the fighting ducks, the Hosta on his head hangs obliquely. He missed his sweetheart all day, but he never came back, and suddenly he heard a magpie calling.
At the beginning of the analysis, the author pushed the spring scenery in a specific environment to the readers with a beautiful pen of "the wind rises at first and wrinkles a pool of spring water" with a specific lens. But its beauty lies not only in the description of the scenery, but in its skill of integrating feelings with the scenery, which subtly reveals the inner world of the heroine. The spring breeze stirred the water in the pool and also disturbed Sifu's heart. Because her husband is far away from home, she has never come home, so it goes without saying what she says in her heart. With the passage of time and the alternation of seasons, spring comes to her quietly. At the beginning of spring breeze, spring scenery is charming. How can all this make her indifferent without arousing the melancholy of spring thoughts? This technique from scene to emotion, from scene to emotion, closely integrates scene and emotion and interweaves them into a complete and vivid picture.
A berth at the foot of Beibao Mountain (Tangwang Bay)
Under the blue mountain, my boat and I meandered along the green water. Until the river bank widens at low tide, and no wind blows my lonely sail.
... night gives way to the ocean of the sun, and the old year melts in freshness. I can finally send my messenger, the wild goose, back to Luoyang.
Note: Beigushan: It is in the north of Zhenjiang City, Jiangsu Province, facing the river on three sides. Hanging: Hanging high and upright.
Analyze and grasp the characteristics of the combination of objects and images, and analyze the thoughts and feelings contained in the scene image. Pay attention to the effective information of poetry-title, punctuation, author, notes and the most important sentences that express the feelings of poetry, and find the breakthrough point of understanding. Time: station, park. "Ke" is a poet. In the first sentence, it can be inferred that Luoyang is the hometown. Guest Road: The journey I want to take. Images such as "boating", "hometown writing" and "returning to the wild goose" express my journey in the south of the Yangtze River, while my homesickness in Luoyang's hometown shows the poet's feelings of missing his loved ones.
Komatsu (Tang Duxun and)
When pine trees were young, they grew in deep, deep grass and could not be seen. Now they are found to be much taller than weeds.
Those trees that don't recognize that they can soar into the sky, until it enters the sky, people say it is tall.
Note: thorn head: refers to pine seedlings covered with pine needles, which are straight and hard.
Analyzing that this poem is a typical poem about chanting things and expressing aspirations, we should first appreciate the lyricism of the author and the description of the characteristics of the things we sing, find the point of convergence with "aspirations" and grasp the theme. First, we should grasp the characteristics of Komatsu and a refined word "thorn", which not only accurately outlines its appearance characteristics, but also outlines its indomitable character and brave fighting spirit.
Du Xunhe was brilliant when he was young, but because of his humble background, he was a stranger in the emperor's life, and even failed again and again. Later, because of trying to get Zhu Wen's appreciation, he occupied an important position. In the poem, Komatsu is used to compare people, and Komatsu is invited to satirize customs. Komatsu was not noticed at first, and eventually grew into a tree of Lingyun, which was related to the author's life experience. On the one hand, it embodies the author's view that "from humble origins, great things can be achieved"; On the other hand, it satirizes the essence of secular villains, such as judging others by themselves, being short-sighted and being passive to Nuo Nuo.
Hunting (Don)
In the wind, the horn sounded and the general was hunting outside the borehole.
The grass is yellow in autumn, and the eagle eye is sharper; When the ice and snow melt, the horseshoe is extraordinarily brisk.
It has passed Xinfeng City in a blink of an eye and soon returned to sunny Liu Ying.
Looking back at the eagle wilderness, thousands of twilight clouds spread to the horizon.
Analysis of the sudden emergence of the first alliance, the momentum is like a rainbow. Write about the situation where the prey is struggling to catch up, which is vivid and realistic. The bow tie says hunting and returning to camp, which shows the charm of the general galloping without trace. The tail combined with the word "looking back" wrote the general's triumphant expression. By describing a hunting activity, this poem outlines the image of a brave general.
Jiang Xue (Liu Tang Zongyuan)
There are no birds flying over those mountains, and there are no traces of people in those paths.
A boat on the river, a fisherman wearing his webworm moth; Fishing alone is not afraid of snow and ice.
At first glance, it's about the snow scene. In the heavy snow, a boat with a leaf and an old fisherman are fishing alone on the cold river. Described that in the cold environment, the old fisherman was not afraid of ice and snow, forgot everything, concentrated on fishing, and was lonely, but his personality seemed aloof and even a little awe-inspiring. This illuminated and beautified image of the fisherman is the sustenance and portrayal of the poet's lofty thoughts and feelings of getting rid of the secular and detached from things.
On the Youzhou Tower (Don Chen Ziang)
No one can see the ancient wisdom of the ancient king, only those wise men who can't see the afterlife can see it. Only the boundless universe, boundless, can't stop the tears full of sadness.
[Note] Youzhoutai: Jibei Building and Yantai were built by Yan Zhaowang in the Warring States Period, formerly known as Huang Jintai, which is a place where Yan Zhaowang recruits talents.
Analysis of feelings can only come from the image characteristics of characters. Grasp the language of the characters: "thinking" and "leisure" Grasp the expression of the lyric hero: "independence" and "tears". This poem depicts a feudal scholar-bureaucrat who is concerned about the country and the people, has lofty aspirations and is lonely in a vast landscape of North Yuanye. It can be seen that poetry expresses the dissatisfaction with the feudal rulers' failure to reuse talented people and the sadness of being born at an untimely time and meeting talented people.
Passing through the temple (Tang)
I don't know where Ji Xiang Temple is, so I climbed several miles into the clouds and peaks.
Ancient trees are towering, but there are no pedestrian paths, and there are bells in the mountains in the temple.
The spring water in the mountains hits the dangerous rocks, and the sun in the pine forest is cold.
In the evening, come to the empty pool and meditate quietly to suppress the dragon.
Note: meditation, a Buddhist term, means to close your eyes without distracting thoughts; Dragon: refers to secular desires.
Analysis of dangerous rocks in the mountains Part III: The flowing spring water is blocked and can only flow slowly and intermittently. They trudged among the rugged rocks, and the sound of water became small, deep and dumb, as if choking in pain. The word "pharynx" is accurate, vivid and vivid. The pine trees in the deep mountains are densely shaded, and the sun shines among them. Because of the influence of the dark environment, it presents a cool tone. The poet's use of the word "cold" to describe the color of the sun is even more novel and wonderful. These ten words organically combine the four images of spring sound, dangerous stone, sun color and pine tree, so that the sadness of sun color and the bitterness of spring sound set each other off, and the realm of seclusion and silence is exhausted. He painted a lonely scene in the mountains, which set off the author's own lonely mood.
Huazigang (Pei Di)
The sun is setting, the breeze is blowing, and the grass is exposed at home.
Cloud light invades shoes, and mountain green clothes brush people's clothes.
This paper analyzes the process that the afterglow of the sunset gradually fades in the word "invasion", and writes a vivid picture of the poet going down the mountain step by step in the sunset. The word "fu" uses anthropomorphic techniques to enhance the sense of movement, and also makes people want to see the lovely green mountains, which are soft and colorful. These two verbs describe Guang Yun Cui Shan's attachment to the poet and reflect the poet's love and nostalgia for Hua Zigang.