Original poem:
The rustling leaves send the cold sound, and the autumn wind moves the guests on the river.
I know that children choose to promote weaving, and a lamp fell on the fence at night.
Translation:
The rustling autumn wind blows the plane leaves, bringing chills, and the autumn wind blowing on the river can't help but miss my hometown. Suddenly I saw a little light under the fence in the distance. I thought it was children catching crickets.
Source: Ye Shaoweng Nightbook in Song Dynasty.
Poetry appreciation
Poetry shows nostalgia for childhood. The children caught at night to promote knitting reminded the poet of his childhood. Write the voice of autumn wind first, then listen to the feeling of this voice. At the end of the poem, write down what you see outdoors. This poem is fluent in language, distinct in layers, with a turning point in the middle, and sentence breaks and meanings run through it. Poets are good at euphemistically expressing the unspeakable feelings of autumn night travelers through artistic images without falling into the realm of decline. The last word is light and far-reaching and chewy.