The artistic achievements of Moonlight on the Lotus Pond are various. First of all, the article pursues a poetic beauty. The following is my ppt courseware about moonlight Zhu Ziqing in the lotus pond, for your reference!
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Lotus pond moonlight
I'm very upset these days. Sitting in the yard enjoying the cool tonight, I suddenly remembered the lotus pond passing by every day. Under the full moon, Zhu Ziqing's Moonlight on the Lotus Pond should have another appreciation.
It looks like that. The moon rises gradually, and the children's laughter on the road outside the wall can no longer be heard; My wife is patting Leap (1) in the room, humming a sleep song in a daze. I slipped on a big shirt and ran out the door.
Along the lotus pond, there is a winding little cinder road. This is a secluded road; Few people walk during the day, and it is lonely at night. Around the lotus pond, there are many trees, flourishing and lush. On one side of the road, there are some willows and some trees with unknown names. On a moonless night, the road is gloomy and a little scary. It's fine tonight, although the moonlight is still very weak.
I was the only one on the road, walking around with my hands behind my back (Du? ) hang in there. This world seems to be mine; I also like to go beyond my usual self and go to another world. I like excitement and tranquility; Like to live in groups, like to be alone. Just like tonight, under this boundless moon, a person thinks about everything and thinks nothing, and feels like a free person. What must be done and said during the day can be ignored now. This is the beauty of being alone, and I will enjoy the boundless moonlight with lotus fragrance.
On the winding lotus pond, the leaves of Tian Tian ④ are watching ③. The leaves are high out of the water, like an elegant dancer's skirt. Between the layers of leaves, there are some white flowers dotted sporadically, which are graceful (ni m: o, nu? (5) Some are open and some are shy; Like a pearl, like a star in the blue sky, like a beauty who just took a bath. The breeze blew, sending wisps of fragrance, like a faint song on a tall building in the distance. At this time, the leaves and flowers also trembled slightly, like lightning, passing through the lotus pond in an instant. The leaves were originally close side by side, so (6) there were obvious ripple marks. Below the leaves are veins (m? ) (7) The running water is covered and no color can be seen; Leaves are more exposed to the wind (8).
Moonlight, like running water, falls quietly on this leaf and flower. A thin layer of blue mist floats in the lotus pond. Leaves and flowers seem to have been washed in milk; Like a dream in a sarong. Although it is a full moon, there are faint clouds in the sky, so it can't shine; But I think this is just a benefit-deep sleep is indispensable, and nap is unique. Moonlight passes through the treetops, and the bushes in the high places cast mottled shadows, just like ghosts; The curved willow (10) has a sparse beautiful image as if it were painted on a lotus leaf. The moonlight in the pond is uneven; Light and shadow, on the other hand, have a harmonious melody, such as a famous song played by Van Gogh (1 1).
Around the lotus pond, there are trees far and near, and willows are the most. These trees surround a lotus pond; Only on one side of the path, there are some gaps, which seem to be reserved for moonlight. An example of tree color (12) is cloudy and looks like a cloud of smoke at first glance; But the abundance of willow (13) can be recognized in the smoke. There are distant mountains on the treetops, just a little careless. There are still one or two lamps leaking through the cracks in the tree. What is listless is the sleepy eyes. At this time, the most lively are cicadas in the tree and frogs in the water; But the excitement is theirs. I have nothing.
I suddenly remembered the matter of picking lotus. Lotus picking is an ancient custom in the south of the Yangtze River. It seems to have a long history, but it flourished in the Six Dynasties. You can get a rough idea from this poem. Lotus pickers are teenagers. They went by boat, singing colorful songs (14). Needless to say, there are many lotus pickers. It was a lively season and also a romantic season (15). Emperor Liang Yuan put it well in "Lotus Picking Fu":
So Yao (Yu? N) Female, rowing with Xin Xu (16); Stork (y？ ) Xu Hui first (17) and pass the badminton cup; 棹 (zh? O)( 18) If it moves, the algae will hang, and if it moves, the boat will be flat. Erqi slim waist bundle element, Yan Gubu; After long summer beginning of spring, the leaves are tender and the flowers are early. They are afraid of touching their skirts and leaning on the boat to pick flowers (jū)( 19).
It can be seen that there were wandering scenes at that time. This is really interesting, but unfortunately we are not happy now.
Then I remembered the sentence in the Western Zhou Dynasty Song (20):
Lotus is picked in autumn in Nantang, and the lotus is over the head; With his head down, he fiddled with the lotus seeds in the water, which were as green as the lake.
If there are lotus pickers tonight, does the lotus here count? Over the head? Yes; You can't just see some shadows of running water. This makes me really miss Jiangnan. -thinking like this, I suddenly looked up and felt that it was my own door; Gently pushed the door in, there was no sound, and my wife had slept for a long time.
trait
1. Enjoy the scenery description
The characteristic of the scenery description in this paper lies in the ingenious combination of lotus pond and moonlight description. The lotus pond is the lotus pond under the moon; Moonlight is the moonlight on the lotus pond, which highlights the beauty of elegance, obscurity and quietness. The fourth and fifth paragraphs can best reflect this beauty. For example:? Layers of leaves are dotted with some white flowers, some of which bloom gracefully and some bloom shyly; Like a pearl, like a star in the blue sky, like a beauty who just took a bath. The breeze blew, sending wisps of fragrance, like a faint song on a tall building in the distance. ? The moon is not written in this paragraph, but there are moons everywhere. Lotus leaves and lotus flowers all have strange brilliance in the dim moonlight. Compare the blooming and budding white flowers? Pearl? Star? Write the beauty of lotus from color and brilliance. Write the continuous fragrance of lotus flowers, conveyed by the breeze, as if it were a song floating in the distance, intermittent and unpredictable.
Settings. This feeling of elegance and remoteness can only be felt when you are alone on a moonlit night. For example, in noisy days, you will never feel this way. Lotus fragrance was originally an olfactory image, but the author compared it to? A faint song in a tall building in the distance? , which can be converted into auditory images. This way of transforming the image of one feeling into the image of another feeling is called "? Synaesthesia? Or? Synesthesia? . Using this rhetorical method, readers can be inspired to have a broader and deeper imagination and association, so as to understand the ideological content and artistic realm of the works from their own life experience and cultural accomplishment. Another example is:? Moonlight, like running water, falls quietly on this leaf and flower. A thin layer of blue mist floats in the lotus pond. Leaves and flowers seem to have been washed in milk; Like a dream in a sarong. ? Put lotus leaves and lotus flowers in the moonlight background, one? Diarrhea? Words give people a milky white and vivid feeling; One? Floating? Words, but also show the moonlight lotus leaf, lotus that kind of ethereal and gentle appearance. By describing the tranquility of leaves and flowers, the author sets off the hazy softness of moonlight. Another example is:? The moonlight shines through the bushes, and the bushes at the height cast uneven and mottled shadows, which will be as steep as ghosts in a moment; The curved willows are sparse and beautiful, as if painted on lotus leaves. ? Write it here? Shadow? And then what? Beautiful image? Or write moonlight, because shadows are produced by moonlight on objects. The shadows of the trees are bright and dark, and the moonlight is faint. Moonlight is difficult to describe, but the author writes moonlight from different angles through different scenery, so that the difficult scenery is in front of him.
2. Grasp the thoughts and feelings of the article
What is the beginning of the article? I'm very upset these days. The following are all related to this restless mood: the road is secluded and lonely; The moonlight on the ground is faint, and the clouds in the sky are also faint; ? An example of cloudy trees? ; I heard lively cicadas and frogs, I thought? The excitement is theirs, and I have nothing. ; Think of the grand occasion of the ancients picking lotus flowers and send them away? Does this make me miss Jiangnan? Feeling, dissatisfied with reality, and have to return to reality. A faint sadness enveloped the full text.
However, the author's feelings are complicated, and? A touch of sadness? What followed? A little joy? . At the beginning of the article, it suddenly occurred to me that the lotus pond I walk through every day should look different under the full moon. It can be seen that the author wants to get rid of the melancholy mood and went to the lotus pond happily; The path along the lotus pond used to be gloomy. But how about tonight? After some quiet thinking, I feel like a? A free man? ; When he arrived in the lotus pond, he was truly free for the time being, his heart was tied to the beautiful scenery, and the feeling of happiness was sudden; From enjoying the scenery, I thought for thousands of years, and I thought of the one who was picked by the ancients. Peak season? ,? Romantic season? . Visible,? A little joy? It also enveloped the full text.
The most direct and concentrated expression of the author's thoughts and feelings is the inner monologue in the third paragraph. This long monologue is a transition from fidgeting to enjoying the moonlight in the lotus pond, expressing the conflict between the author's spiritual world and the outside world and his desire to get rid of this conflict. The author's state of mind, in such a beautiful environment as the lotus pond under the moon, shows an aesthetic feeling of mixed sadness and joy.
In short, sorrow and joy go hand in hand: I long for happiness in sadness and am led by sadness in happiness. They are two aspects of the author's contradictory mentality changes when watching the scenery. But the inner fluctuation is not ups and downs, but restraint, and the expression of emotions is mild (he claims to be a? Neutral? ), this is the so-called hate without anger, sorrow without injury? Neutralism? The performance of. So whether it's sad or happy, it's all? Faint? .
There have always been many different understandings about the theme of this article and the author's writing intention.
Some people think that this article is the author's sentimental landscape work, expressing a cold and profound realm and expressing a bleak state of mind; Some people think that this article is a lyric work by borrowing scenery to express the author's melancholy mood; Some people think that it shows the author's appreciation of the natural beauty of the lotus pond under the moon, his restraint and leisure mood in his personal world; Some people think that it is not the author's escape from reality, but the author's anger at reality; Some people think that it shows dissatisfaction with the realization of darkness and yearning for a better life. These are too numerous to mention.
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