Poetry composition plus comments-I have never been to Cambridge
But you can see it from a distance
Thinking in the empty space
The charm of Cambridge
It must be just a small bridge running water.
Golden willow dancing in the sunset
Presumably, she is just the bride in the poet's fantasy.
The notes of youth are swaying on the soft mud.
It is speculated that it is just a weed in the Hekang River.
Precipitate a rainbow-like dream
It must be just the spoony moonlight cast on the boat.
Playing the flute quietly may not put down the song.
So on this quiet and peaceful night
All that flowed was the poet's farewell.
Looking for a long pole of dreams
Failed to explore the long road of dreams
But in a hurry, I support the song "Starry Night Gone with the Wind".
Make Cambridge unforgettable
Is Cambridge there?
Only the burning clouds in the sky
Retell the poet's deep attachment.
Fold a 28-line poem
Cherish and cherish the memory of a passionate soul.
Is a pure beauty.
Never been to Cambridge.
But you can see it from a distance
Thinking in the empty space
There are stories in Cambridge.
Comment on this poem continues the sad and lingering style of Biekangqiao, and deduces the images and emotions in it, which makes people feel kind and beautiful. ? I haven't been to Cambridge/but I can see it from a distance/think in the air/is there a story about Cambridge? Expressed his deep memory of Xu Zhimo.
Poetry composition plus comment 2 Peacock flying west, it looks better today.
? He entered primary school at the age of five, entered provincial middle school at the age of nine, traveled to Nantah at the age of fifteen, and was a graduate student at the age of twenty. I have good conditions in my life, so I don't need to find a job. The master's grandmother also praised, and Aunt Xi also praised. My sister and brother are laughing, and my parents are very happy! ? Good people come down in one continuous line, all over Nanjing.
Parents smile: Our baby is a treasure and looks good. Excellent academic performance, no place to put the certificate. You can choose a job and find a beautiful woman. ?
In this life, I have a temper, such as floating clouds. Parents attending class:? My son's physique is charming, but he still needs more exercise. Home conditions are good, and parents are sweating; My son wants to be independent and eat his own food. ?
When my parents spoke, my aunt and grandmother were surprised, but my brothers and sisters were silent, and outsiders only suspected each other. Parents have no choice but to obey their children's wishes: when they grow up, it's up to them. You can be independent and you can't go out of Nanjing Gate! ?
I don't want to betray my parents in my life: my parents are mistaken for my own children. My son wants to be independent and is determined to go to the northwest. The national policy is good and the western region is thriving. If a son is willing to bear hardships, he will surely succeed. ?
? Western development? Parents are suspicious and unwilling. Invite aunts in the east, grandma in the west, Mr. Zhong in the south, uncle in the north, and get together with relatives. They are all busy about it.
Sir Zhong said:? What's good about the west? The environment is too bad and there are many difficulties. After fifteen years, I came back with two sleeves! ?
Aunt also echoed: that boy is good-looking, Pan An can't compare with him, and his character can't be said. It's hard to find in the city. I'm a graduate student again, and I'm worried that no one will want it?
This business is determined not to let go. No matter who said that, don't look back.
I am not stubborn in this life, but I aim high. He said to everyone:? Grandparents, uncles and aunts, the comfort zone in the city, boys don't love it. The country is engaged in construction and is in urgent need of talents. I want to go to the west, the more I think about it, the more I should. Everything belongs to one family, all of which belong to greater China. The east should develop, but the west should not be poor; If the gap is big, the country will collapse. To paraphrase Lu Xun's words: If I don't build the West, who will! Construction is the key to China's rapid development. Children are strong-willed, and elders are strong. I can do it! ?
Hearing this, everyone was deeply shocked This son's choice is a deep sigh. The choice of mentality is really not simple. Everyone supported him and climbed west. Peacock flies west, and it looks better today.
In the form of the new Yuefu poem Peacock Flying Southeast, this paper is novel and unique, and tells the story of aspiring young people building the motherland and developing the western region, which is very touching. As an ancient poem, it requires rhythm, and the author's successful expression makes the old wine in the old bottle full of fragrance. The ending? The choice of mind? Point to sublimation.
Grandpa, what they said today reminds me of you.
They are your daughters.
I am your granddaughter.
It's you, holding me in your big, thick palm.
It's you, carrying me on your wide and thick shoulders.
It's you, calling me with words of love and pain.
It's you, who loves me with a strong beard.
Time flies, before you know it, you have left me for ten years.
In ten years, I have forgotten many people and many things.
But I only remember your love for me.
You made me a bottle of fresh milk before the first sunshine came into the house.
Among your bustling parents, I am proud of you.
You pulled me into your arms among a noisy child.
You have held my little hand with your big hand countless times.
You also used your few dollars to buy me my favorite snacks.
It is kind to you, generous to you, and loves you.
I have blocked my parents' reprimands for countless times, so that I am no longer afraid.
Grandpa, do you still love me?
They said, I didn't leave a tear the day you left.
They said that when you left Na Yue, I was waiting for you to take me home.
They said, I slept alone in your room the year you left.
I'm not crying, grandpa. Do you still blame me?
I'm strong, grandpa. Do you know that?/You know what?
Now, no one holds my lover in his arms.
No one dragged me across the street.
Nobody stopped my parents from slapping me.
Grandpa, I won't cry.
You said to be your granddaughter, you should know how to stand on your own feet and love yourself.
Grandpa, I remember all this.
I have never forgotten to love you deeply with my elders? My grandfather