1, "vaguely, a prairie appeared in front of my eyes, and there was a girl whose skirt fluttered in the wind like a ribbon tied to the grassland ..."
This ending turns the abstract emotion of "missing" into a real image, which not only shows the deep feeling of missing, but also shows the effect of endless aftertaste and reproduces the beautiful image of the girl. Make the article vivid, beautiful and full of aura.
2. "Motherly love has set up a beautiful rainbow bridge for me, and I am stepping on it to be happy ..."
Maternal love is abstract. This paper uses the concrete thing "beautiful rainbow bridge" to express abstract love, which is a way to turn virtual into real. In this way, maternal love is endowed with a good sense of image, thus linking the image of "stepping on happiness and beauty" with the trend, making the center distinct and profound; Make the ending paragraph beautiful and vivid.
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The writing method of combining reality with reality introduces reality into virtuality;
For example: "I am tied between numbers and ABC all day, sitting at my desk alone, looking at the dense Arabic numbers in my math book, my head is getting bigger." At this time, a breeze blew me back to my childhood. How happy I was then! Play with friends under blue sky and white clouds, lie flat beside green grass and wild flowers. An old man with white hair took us to see soft white clouds and colorful rainbows. "
In this paragraph, it is realistic to write about the distress and bondage of learning, but empty to recall the freedom and happiness of childhood. "A gust of breeze" ingeniously introduces the truth into the virtual, forming a contrast, which has a strong contrast effect and enhances the expressive force of the article.
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2. The article takes advantage of the combination of reality and fiction to write landscapes, and needs to give the official answer of 1 to form a strong contrast effect, thus highlighting the center of poetry.
2. Set off the rendering and highlight the poetry center
3. The expression of the combination of reality and fiction can sometimes form a strong contrast effect, thus highlighting the center of poetry. For example, the poem "Peach Blossom in Qingquan Temple" says, "Looking for a peach garden to avoid Qin, peach blossom is another spring. Flowers fly with the running water, fearing that fishermen will come to swim. " The whole poem borrows peach blossoms to introduce a paradise, skillfully combines the present reality of seclusion in the mountains with the ideal world described by Tao Yuanming, and expresses the loneliness of the author's seclusion in the mountains.
4. The expression of the combination of reality and fiction can sometimes play the role of rendering and contrast, thus highlighting the center of poetry. For example, Cui Hu's "Village in the South of the City" "Today last year, in this door, peach blossoms set each other off in red. Peach blossoms are still smiling in the spring breeze. " After writing about Tomb-Sweeping Day for a year, the poet went to Nanzhuang, a suburb of the capital, for an outing. Because of thirst, he asked a peasant girl for water to drink. The girl gave him a glass of water. The next year, he came again. Although the scenery remained the same, the girl didn't know where to go, so he wrote this poem on the closed door to express his thoughts for the girl who was not in front of him.
5. The combination of reality and reality is to combine abstract narration with concrete description, or to combine the description of immediate real life with memory imagination.
3. What is the writing and function of the combination of reality and reality in the article? What is the important role of the combination of reality and fiction in ancient poetry? Regarding the important role of the virtual and the real, Tang Biao in the Qing Dynasty put it incisively in Reading Composition Spectrum: "The article is not true enough to explain the meaning, and the virtual is not enough to sway the meaning, so the virtual and the real are often suitable for each other."
In view of the short space and limited capacity of poetry, the poet seeks the combination of reality and fiction, which makes it rich in connotation and endless in extension. For example, in the Tang Dynasty, Du Fu's "The banks of the Yellow River were recovered by the imperial army: the news of this distant west station!" The north has been recovered! At first, I couldn't stop crying on my coat.
Where are my wife and son? There is not a trace of sadness on their faces. However, I packed my books and poems crazily. On a green spring day, I began to go home, singing my songs loudly and drinking my wine.
Come back from this mountain, pass another mountain, go up from the south and then go north-to my own town! . In the winter of the first year of Baoying in Tang Suzong (762), Tang Guanjun broke thieves in Luoyang.
The following spring, Du Fu lived in Zizhou (now Santai, Sichuan). When he heard the good news of the officers and men, the poet was ecstatic and wrote the only cheerful poem in his life. Its first two couplets are realistic.
When the poet first heard that the land in the middle of Sichuan was "gathering thistles in the north", it meant that the nest of the "An Shi Rebellion" that had been entrenched for eight years was destroyed, and Du Fu couldn't help crying all over! This is really sad, happy, happy and sad! He looked back at his wife and children who had suffered from the war with him. Where are they still sad? So I rolled up my poetry collection and enjoyed it with my family! "Picking chrysanthemums under the east fence, shedding tears on my skirt, reading them and turning over poetry books" are all real life of "ecstasy" at once! The last two conjunctions are empty. We "sing" and "indulge in wine" to celebrate the victory * * * to celebrate the recovery of lost ground; We are rejuvenating, rejuvenating, returning to China with young children, and bidding farewell to the wandering life.
Although the poet was in a foreign country at this time, his thoughts had already flown, and he entered Jialing River along Fujiang River, crossed the dam and entered the Yangtze River, then left Wuxia to Xiangyang and turned to Luoyang to return to his hometown. The rhythm of the poet's homecoming rhapsody is light and harmonious, and the position change is dizzying! At this time, Du Fu's feelings are like flood peaks, rushing forward and pouring thousands of miles! Without these two empty words, it is difficult to express the joy of the poet when he first heard the news of victory and his desire to go home quickly! The reason why this poem is known as "the fast poem of Du Fu's life" lies in the wonderful combination of reality and reality! Virtual writing is particularly essential, as Wang Shizhen said in Yi Yan Yuan Yan: "Those who are sparse before must be dense, those who are half wide must be sparse, and those who are real must be empty."
4. What is the role of the combination of reality and fiction in making the article more vivid and unpredictable?
The combination of reality and reality is to combine abstract narration with concrete description, or to combine the description of immediate real life with memory imagination. Virtual and real are relative, as the book says, some are real, and none is virtual; Evidence is truth, and false support is empty; Objective is true, subjective is virtual; Concrete is real, hermit is empty; Actions are true, but words are empty; The present is true and the future is empty; The known is true, the unknown is false, and so on.
What is point-surface combination? The so-called "point" refers to the detailed description of the image state characteristics that can best express the personnel scenery; The so-called "face" refers to the narrative or general description of personnel scenery. The combination of point and surface is the organic combination of the detailed description of point and the narrative or general description of surface. "Point" can highlight key points and reflect depth; "Face" can take into account the overall situation and reflect the breadth. The combination of point and surface can not only reflect the image state of personnel scenery in depth and breadth, but also fully express thoughts and feelings.
It depends, some of them are to highlight the XX feelings of the characters (homesickness, nostalgia for the old country, etc.). Some are to highlight the XX (majestic, sad, etc.) of the scenery. ). In short, the role is outstanding, and it must be combined with the original text, and it cannot be the same.
5. The composition of the combination of reality and reality This is a composition with full marks in the college entrance examination.
On both sides of forgetting and remembering.
Sichuan examinee
Xi Murong said: "Life is a running river, and we are all people crossing the river." The left bank of the river of life is forgetting, and the right bank of the river of life is memory. Only when we shuttle between the left bank and the right bank in our unique boat do we know that we should forget what we should forget and remember what we should remember.
Walking on the road of life, we laugh at the flowers blooming and falling outside the window and watch the clouds roll and the wind stop. On the way, we experienced too many mixed feelings. During the voyage of the river of life, we learned to forget the sad and happy things that should be forgotten, and to remember the bits and pieces that should be remembered.
Dongpo threw up his hair and shouted "River of No Return", and the troubles he faced suddenly sank into the rolling waves and disappeared without a trace. The magnificent surging river made Dongpo choose to forget, forget those frustrations and sorrows, and forget those disappointments in his career. Tao Qian leisurely picked chrysanthemums under the oriental salamander and danced with butterflies. Facing Nanshan, Yuan Ming chose to forget the ugliness of officialdom and all the unhappiness he encountered. This is the choice of the soul, the wise choice made by people crossing the river on both sides of the strait, and the wise "ferry".
People stay on the left bank of the river. Besides, there are people living happily on the right bank.
Sitting under the pool pavilion, tears streaming down her face, drinking wine alone, Yi Anzhu told me in her words that she would always remember the bits and pieces of her life experience, which was the choice she made on the way to "cross the river". Haizi told me that starting from tomorrow, he will remember all the water in his life, because it is the dew he used to water the flowers. Sanmao used her words to remember the soul of Sahara forever. Where is it? High-use sunflower will always remember his "boat" ...
This is the life on both sides of the river of life, and it is the choice of forgetting and remembering. The wind blows petals like a broken childhood. Desperate ancient music explains the gap between souls, hiding in the depths of dreams and memories, listening to flowers and nights singing nightmares, singing prosperity, singing away all memories, forgetting the unhappiness and triviality that should have been forgotten with the clear smile and unclear tears that no one knows, and remembering the profoundness and eternity that should have been remembered.
White rabbit, look around. Clothes are not as good as new ones, and people are not as good as old ones. Sailing in the "river of life", sitting in your unique boat, knowing that forgetting is on the left, remembering is on the right, and there are endless shuttles in the middle!
Comments: This article begins with the words of celebrities, which not only attracts readers, but also puts their abstract reasoning on the concrete and sensible "river bank", and then launches the following around "the left bank of the river of life is forgotten, and the right bank is recorded". Write Dongpo first, Tao Qian can stick to his own mind and forget "forget setbacks, sadness and dissatisfaction;" Forget ugliness, forget unhappiness ",and then use the phrase" people are on the left bank of the river, besides, there are people living happily on the right bank ",which naturally transitions to the" memory "of Yi 'an lay man, Haizi, San Mao and Van Gogh. Finally, respond to the title and sublimate the theme.
The structure is meticulous and the paragraphs are symmetrical and concise. If the fourth paragraph is taken as the central axis, the framework of the full text is like a diamond, which makes the article feel strong as a whole and has a beautiful structure. The language of prose, poetic artistic conception, appropriate exposition and implied philosophy enrich the meaning and charm of the article.
(Wu Xueguang)-Senior High School Entrance Examination (7th edition, 2005).
If this candidate doesn't have the concept and imagination of "combining reality with reality", can he think about the existing materials from one side to the other, from the outside to the inside, turn abstraction into concrete, turn concepts into images, break through the limitations of materials and write such an excellent article?
To sum up, when writing literary articles, senior high school students should consciously apply the principle of "combining reality with reality" and boldly use imagination, fantasy, exaggeration, personification and other methods to fictional characters and stories, so that the scenery can be "fantasy", the author can be "synthetic" and the notes can be "disruptive". Of course, all this must be based on the premise of giving people "artistic truth", otherwise the writing will become illusory and the article will become vague and poor, losing its artistic appeal.
Precautions:
(1) Philosophical Notes People's Publishing House (1956), page 49.
(2) Lu Guishan, Zhou Zhonghou's Lectures on Marxist Literature and Art' Renmin University of China Press, 1999 edition, p. 755. ③ Basis of Literary Theory, Shanghai Literature and Art Publishing House, p. 49.
(4) Gorky's letter to beginners, Literature, p. 259.
Editor's comment: Students' writing develops bit by bit under the guidance of teachers. When many people see the disadvantages of students' writing, it is valuable to remind everyone that students should also pay attention to the relationship and bridge between reality and art, but in practice, they need patience and step by step. (Zhang Huajuan)
6. Write a composition that combines reality with reality. Sunshine falls on everyone's head fairly and selflessly.
The sunshine in the morning is bright and clear, and everything is happy; The sunshine after the rain turned into a rainbow, showing the beauty of the world incisively and vividly; The sunshine after the cold is warm and comfortable, telling you the joy of reunion and the preciousness of friendship. Sunshine will make your narrow life suddenly enlightened, make his happy, lonely and monotonous days colorful, and let you drive away the depression of reality with romantic imagination.
In fact, the real sunshine is felt with your heart. Talking with the sun, you will feel bright, happy, warm, exciting and powerful ... If you are a friend of the sun, you will have a red and healthy face and a bright and clear mind.
In the morning, sunshine talks with the growing leaves in the most transparent and thorough language. Dense leaves immediately danced excitedly at the top, bright and dazzling, like a foil made of gold, showing off among dense branches.
And when the sun smiled and whispered to the flowers on the earth, the flowers suddenly looked up, and the melancholy petals curled together spread out their faces, like ears absorbed. The blue sky, accompanied by a trace of white clouds like floating catkins, you walked through the street, did you notice the sunshine like water?
Sunshine is like an orator giving a speech to the public, which makes people sleepy. The bright sunshine echoes in the quiet jungle in the morning, in the green spring after the cold, and in the oil-painted dusk before the night falls.
In these contemplative moments, the sunshine will tell you the joy of reunion, the warmth of friendship, and even the sadness caused by a short separation in emotional language. If it is a sunset after rain, the rainbow will bloom with its colorful beauty-red, orange, yellow, green,