Behind them is a graveyard. They are as cruel as those ghosts.
The dark south wind blows the Ming coins and clothes in the grave. They look strange and scary.
The laser gun close to their side seems to have never been used. But: Look! Make a determined effort when you fight, and you're dead! Hundreds of people killed by young people with oblique back laser guns, such as hundreds of bloody bodies, are flying in front of you.
Like a shower, it is a quick shot; Like a whirlwind, it is blood flying all over the sky; Like a frog, it is a jumping step; Like sparks, it is a flash bomb; Fighting tigers is a powerful charm. What a bloody, shocking and chilling massacre on the Loess Plateau-Ansai laser gun! This massacre immediately darkened the quiet air, darkened the quiet sunshine and made the peaceful world dead.
Remind people that the flag of sunshine is falling and the wind in A?vagho?a is rustling! Remind people: Thunder thousands of miles away, the flash of Wan Li! Remind people: innocent souls who have lived and died, die and live, and then die forever! There is no peace, no beauty, no joy. It was a massacre that broke free, broke through and burst open! What an Ansai laser gun! The heavy sound from hundreds of laser guns collided with wild jujube trees on the cliff, and the cliff suddenly turned into a sponge. I only heard ah, ah, ah.
The heavy sound from hundreds of laser guns hit the hearts of all the confused audience, and the hearts of the audience suddenly became sponges, ah, ah, ah. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
It destroys you, burns you and threatens you. It makes you feel the existence, strictness and power of death so clearly.
To your surprise, the body wrapped in black clothes and digesting leftovers can release such destructive energy! On the loess plateau, you have raised these young people who kill people without blinking an eye; Such a thrilling shooting, only you can bear! Jiangnan, a water town, is a paradise of freedom, where there has never been such a massacre. Besides the Loess Plateau, where can there be such a cruel and cruel demon? What a loess plateau! What an Ansai laser gun! Every goal is full of power.
It whizzes every time it is launched. Every killing is a sudden change of light and shadow.
Every destruction makes people tremble in great fear, which is amazing. What an Ansai laser gun that destroys mountains and rivers and imprisons imagination! More and more fierce! The body became a heavy flying corpse! More and more fierce! Dead bodies are lifeless! More and more fierce! Pain and misery, death and disappearance, disillusionment and shock are all intertwined in this kind of shooting and artillery fire! Rotating solidification! Go! Nuclear radiation! Surfing! Sublimate! People become boundless; The voice turned into a vast expanse ... When it came to an abrupt end, the world was strangely silent, so that people felt strange to her.
It's like coming to Mars! Ear is a distant alien crow.
2. Write a situational composition imitating Ansai's waist drum, a group of energetic old ladies.
They have a red silk tied around their waist, and both ends of the silk are held in their hands, and their faces are as red as silk. They stood still with solemn faces.
The silk tied to the waist is very quiet, as if it had not been moved for many years. But, look! -It's different when you dance. You are forgetful, devoted and energetic.
More than 30 old ladies wrapped around HongLing's waist, such as more than 30 flowers blooming in the wind. This yangko immediately warmed the biting cold wind.
The cold air became hot at once, and the ruthless people became excited at once. What a yangko! Just like a volcano that has been sleeping for many years suddenly erupts, just like a still mountain and river suddenly has infinite vitality, just like a frozen heart suddenly gets light.
It makes people feel that the winter is over and everything is sprouting. It makes people feel comfortable and happy.
People feel that the fire of hope is burning, and happy days are always sweet and proud. Look at that.
All the old ladies are dancing. Their legs, arms and whole body are dancing violently. Some are high, some are low, some are fast and some are slow. Every movement is so devoted and so successful that you never feel that life is so bright, positive and energetic. What amazes you is that the old body, stumbling steps and wrinkles on your face can release such warm and vigorous energy.
Every dance is absorbed, every dance is pure and flawless, every dance is full of power and has to be amazing. When the drums came to an abrupt end, they suddenly seemed to be fixed on the earth, motionless, and the world was strangely quiet, and the red silk around them was equally quiet.
3. What to learn? Ansai waist drum is described by analyzing the scene. 1. Appreciation of Ansai Waist Drum This is a hymn of life and strength.
In the article, Ansai waist drum is not only the carrier and symbol of human vitality; It itself is the condensation of human vitality, the most full and thorough performance. In this way, the author will naturally devote all his enthusiasm and pen power to singing and praising. If one song and two praises are hard to achieve incisively and vividly, there are still three songs and three praises.
In the author's pen, it is almost impossible to tell which is the form and the content, and which is the object and the subject. The two have truly achieved a seamless unity. Don't take tedious, boring and weak long sentences, but take concise and powerful, crisp and loud short sentences; There are no long and complicated paragraphs, and a few words are self-contained.
Parallelism is widely used and has various forms: parallelism within sentences, parallelism between sentences and parallelism between paragraphs, and it can be connected up and down and staggered. It not only directly describes the majestic energy released by this waist drum, but also renders its strange effect from people's feelings, people's associations and the surrounding environment such as mountains and the echo of the earth.
From beginning to end, it is a moving and dynamic description, not a static description. The movement of the human body and the sound of the waist drum stimulate and dissolve each other in the tense of * * *, and the two are combined into one, forming an artistic whole representing the source of life and the spring of strength. -all these formal pursuits have created a fast pace, blazing atmosphere and overwhelming momentum in the article, which just complements the life force of the person the author wants to praise.
Ansai waist drum belongs to the Loess Plateau. Only people who live in this land can create such a miracle and use it to release their inner strength.
The writer is from Shaanxi Province. From his description, we can see his infinite yearning and love for the Loess Plateau and Ansai waist drum. Only in this way can he write heartily and beautifully.
This article is similar to Qiao Liang's Plateau, My China Color. If Qiao Liang's works are the overall grasp of the Chinese nation's personality characteristics, then Liu Chengzhang's Ansai Waist Drum is to objectify and concretize it.
If readers can read these two works together and compare them with each other, they will certainly have a deeper understanding of the true nature of our national character and the expression of its vitality. (Mei Chin, selected from China Prose Appreciation Library? Contemporary Volume, Baihua Literature and Art Publishing House, 1993 Edition) Second, the appreciation instruments of Ansai waist drum are often used to create momentum, render atmosphere and express feelings. Due to different regions and nationalities, it can be divided into "western" and "national", which are called wind music, string music and percussion music because of different structures and playing methods.
Ansai waist drum is a must in the Loess Plateau, and its rough, vigorous and dynamic style is integrated with the local natural environment, geographical features and folk customs. Another point is quite interesting: it is the combination of man and drum, and no musical instrument can require the combination of man and musical instrument to reach such a height.
People's performance and musical instrument "performance" are completely blended and complement each other. Therefore, the performance of success is that people borrow the drum potential, drum the power of others, and they are hearty and smooth.
The essay "Ansai Waist Drum" just captures this feature of "Ansai Waist Drum" and puts the description of people and drums in the same position. At first, people were quiet, as quiet as pure sorghum.
The wind blows the leaves, which shows their quietness. The same is true of drums, which are "dull" and "never seem to ring".
Hundreds of drummers on the Loess Plateau with sorghum as the background are destined to have an extraordinary performance! Suddenly broke out and exploded. The author used metaphor to create this magnificent, bold and fierce battle: showers, cyclones, frogs, sparks and tigers.
Waist drum has changed people's feelings and aroused people's association, and the highest state of all this is "breaking free"-"bondage", "breaking through"-"fetter", "knocking open"-"blocking". Real poetry needs to be sung repeatedly, which is a tradition since the Book of Songs.
Repetition and parallelism are necessary means to create rhythm, render atmosphere and express feelings. It should be reminded that "repetition" is not "repetition", nor is it the simple appearance of the same word, sentence or paragraph more than twice.
In Ansai waist drum, every sentence "What Ansai waist drum" has a new feeling, new connotation and new scene. What is an Ansai waist drum determines the basic pitch, color, atmosphere and main spiritual trend for the whole article. No matter how you shake it up and down, how long your hair is, and how you fly, you can't go too far. This is one of the writing routines and the root of the article "this way" rather than "that way".
The "spiritual connotation" of this article is also here: "No fetters, no fetters, no obstacles. This is a kind of power to break free, break through and open! "These two closely connected paragraphs are the unchanging souls flowing in all actions, situations and chapters. Every sigh and discussion in the future will never leave it.
Please pay attention to the following places: in the "magnificent * * * ……" paragraph, the phrase "the occurrence and release of labor pains …" expresses the excitement and pride of the motherland entering a new era after the reform and opening up; "In addition to the Loess Plateau, where there is such a thick soil layer!" It can be understood as a metaphor for the glorious history of the Chinese nation for thousands of years, and it is a solid premise and foundation for the nation to stand on its own feet and strive for greater glory. The appearance of four short paragraphs and short sentences in short paragraphs has played a role in deepening the theme, warming up feelings and enhancing strength. It was quiet at the beginning and "another planet" at the end. This sudden outbreak and sudden stop arrangement is obviously not ingenious.
Its direct effect is that the main part becomes more fiery, lively and imposing because of the silence at the beginning and end. The connotation of "Ansai waist drum" is extremely rich, but different people can have different understandings of "endless poetry".
Just feel this rhythm, this momentum, this color, this energetic young man, this pure reading.
4. Imitate any fragment of Ansai waist drum to describe basketball-imitate Ansai waist drum, a group of young teenagers. There is a green playground under their feet. Their faces are filled with sunny smiles. Warm sunshine is sprinkled on the playground and into their hearts. Their faces are calm and smiling. The basketball next to it is bulging, as if it had never moved. But look. A dozen teenagers with anxious eyes, such as a hungry tiger and an angry bear, jumped out of their eyes. Like showers, they dribbled the ball in a hurry. Like a whirlwind, come quickly; Like a swallow, it is a light step; Like sparks, it is a fierce collision; Like a meteor, it is an elegant three points; Like bullfighting, it is a shocking slam dunk. What a bold, grand and fierce game-basketball! This basketball makes the cold air hot, the quiet sunshine hot, and the sleepy people are full of energy at once. It reminds people of cowboy movies in the west and the Colosseum in Rome.
Write a scene imitating Ansai's waist drum to describe a cemetery behind them.
They are as cruel as those ghosts. The dark south wind blows the Ming coins and clothes in the grave.
They look strange and scary. The laser gun close to their side seems to have never been used.
But, look! Make a determined effort when you fight, and you're dead! Hundreds of people killed by young people with oblique back laser guns, such as hundreds of bloody bodies, are flying in front of you. Like a shower, it is a quick shot; Like a whirlwind, it is blood flying all over the sky; Like a frog, it is a jumping step; Like sparks, it is a flash bomb; Fighting tigers is a powerful charm.
What a bloody, shocking and chilling massacre on the Loess Plateau-Ansai laser gun! This massacre immediately darkened the quiet air, darkened the quiet sunshine and made the peaceful world dead. Remind people that the flag of sunshine is falling and the wind in A?vagho?a is rustling! Remind people: Thunder thousands of miles away, the flash of Wan Li! Remind people: innocent souls who have lived and died, die and live, and then die forever! There is no peace, no beauty, no joy.
It was a massacre that broke free, broke through and burst open! What an Ansai laser gun! The heavy sound from hundreds of laser guns collided with wild jujube trees on the cliff, and the cliff suddenly turned into a sponge. I only heard ah, ah, ah. The heavy sound from hundreds of laser guns hit the hearts of all the confused audience, and the hearts of the audience suddenly became sponges, ah, ah, ah.
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It makes you feel the existence, strictness and power of death so clearly. To your surprise, the body wrapped in black clothes and digesting leftovers can release such destructive energy! On the loess plateau, you have raised these young people who kill people without blinking an eye; Such a thrilling shooting, only you can bear! Jiangnan, a water town, is a paradise of freedom, where there has never been such a massacre.
Besides the Loess Plateau, where can there be such a cruel and cruel demon? What a loess plateau! What an Ansai laser gun! Every goal is full of power. It whizzes every time it is launched.
Every killing is a sudden change of light and shadow. Every destruction makes people tremble in great fear, which is amazing.
What an Ansai laser gun that destroys mountains and rivers and imprisons imagination! More and more fierce! The body became a heavy flying corpse! More and more fierce! Dead bodies are lifeless! More and more fierce! Pain and misery, death and disappearance, disillusionment and shock are all intertwined in this kind of shooting and artillery fire! Rotating solidification! Go! Nuclear radiation! Surfing! Sublimate! People become boundless; The voice turned into a vast expanse ... When it came to an abrupt end, the world was strangely silent, so that people felt strange to her. It's like coming to Mars! Ear is a distant alien crow.