As for Haiyan, like other poems, emotions gradually intensify
But the difference is that there are still ups and downs in the middle
For example, a deep opening chapter "On the vast sea" (emphasis on the word "vast") gradually rises to a climax~~~
Then it reaches "seagulls moaning before the storm~~~" and then turns to a low tide and then to " Only the proud Haiyan is brave~~~" reaches the climax~~
In this way, we can control the ups and downs of emotions based on our own feelings and understanding~~
Until finally, all the suppressed emotions are released Break out "Let the storm come more violently!!"
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"Haiyan" reading guide
"Haiyan" is a famous prose poem. It is Gorky's early representative work. It was written in 1901. It was the darkest era on the eve of the 1905 revolution in Russia. The Russian workers' movement continued to rise and waver. The foundation of Tsarist rule. Gorky, who came from the bottom of society and was well aware of the sufferings of the people at the bottom, felt the pulse of the new era that had just begun to beat. With his keen artistic perception, he created the artistic image of "Haiyan" to cheer for the coming revolutionary storm and sing for the proletariat. A hymn full of fighting passion was sung. The full text is full of warm and unrestrained emotions, the scenes are magnificent, and the tone is high-pitched and powerful.
This article can be divided into three parts according to the development and changes of the sea surface scene. These three parts depict a magnificent picture of the sea facing violent storms and rolling waves.
The first scene (from the beginning to "Flying on the foaming sea"): It is written that the storm is coming, the petrel "flying proudly", "eager" with optimistic passion and confidence in victory "With the coming of the storm.
The second scene (from "the dark clouds are getting darker" to "yes, it can't be covered"): When the storm is approaching, Haiyan fights against the wind and waves, and greets it with the confidence of victory. The storm is coming.
The third scene (from "the roaring wind" to the end of the chapter): When the storm is about to come, Haiyan enthusiastically calls out for the storm as a victorious prophet.
At the beginning, the author briefly writes the signs of the coming storm and points out Haiyan's environment. The first sentence enters at a medium tempo, and the tone is dark, which is reflected in "vast". "Black lightning" is a metaphor for Haiyan's vigorous, proud and unstoppable majesty. It should be treated as an accent to outline the image of Haiyan. "Arrow-like" describes Haiyan's actions. "The desire of the storm" is Haiyan's great ambition and should be read again. "The dark clouds hear the power of anger, the flame of passion and the confidence of victory." The parallel sentence pattern exaggerates the energetic and fighting spirit of Haiyan, and the parallel elements here should be emphasized.
Next, the images of seagulls, seagulls, and penguins are written in a contemptuous tone.
The seagull is weak and frightened, and the content after the dash reads out a sad, low and decadent mood.
The dash here is a derogatory description, and the content after the "breaker" must be. The tone of disdain and dissatisfaction. The affirmative emphasis of "life's battle", the emphasis of "fright", the disdainful tone of the sea duck.
The image of the penguin passes. The rereading of "cowardly" and "hiding" is expressed.
The image of Haiyan is written more clearly in our minds. The rereading of "flying" is elongated. , reread.
Here, on the one hand, it is necessary to create a harsh environment, and on the other hand, it is necessary to highlight Haiyan’s bravery. Therefore, the writing speed of dark clouds is slowed down, and the voice is lifted to highlight the depressing atmosphere. The speed of writing wave sentences is accelerated, and the re-reading of "rushing", "ferociously" and "falling into" highlights the cheerful atmosphere.
The repetition of this paragraph is another deepening of the image of Haiyan, with two dashes. The middle content should be re-read. The last sentence, "Shouting with joy" should be read more grandly to highlight the heroic spirit of the revolutionaries.
To write about Haiyan's firmness in ideals and beliefs, re-read "convinced". The tone is further determined after the dash, and the tone of "yes" is affirmative. The tone of "cannot cover" should be pronounced high and strong, and the tone is high-pitched.
There is a distinguishing pause after "wind" and "thunder" to explain the situation. Change.
Describe the environment, slow down, and use a suppressed tone. Re-read "green flames", "lightning arrows" and "tongues of fire" to create the environment at that time. >Using two exclamation points in succession, each one is more tense than the other, especially in the last sentence, the momentum of "the rain is about to come and the wind is filling the building", the word "lai" is emphasized.
"Roaring". The contrasting stress of "roaring" highlights the image of Haiyan.
The last sentence is the theme of the full text, and the "breaker" plays the role of summarizing the full text. This sentence is the author's great call, and it must be read loudly Powerful. However, the starting point of this sentence must be low to prevent it from rising too high. The highest point of the whole sentence should fall on the word "lie", with the "ba" falling and the tone rising slightly.