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20 14-09-25
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1. You are very good at observing life and can keenly capture meaningful moments; You are a student with great potential.
2. The language of the article is fluent, which also shows the teacher's feelings. You are the teacher's bosom friend. I hope we can learn from each other and collect a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.
Sorry, the teacher didn't understand this paragraph. Would you like to explain it to the teacher again? Thank you.
Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. Teachers should learn from you. If the material selection of the article is novel, it will definitely complement the writing style. what do you reckon ?
5. Great! Your article reproduces the simplicity and frankness of the northeast people, which makes readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, and the use of synaesthesia is particularly clever. Your writing style is conquering and attractive. Work hard and create more glory!
Careful observation, vivid description, careful choice and ingenious arrangement
Flexible description, relaxed style
The theme is correct and the performance is meticulous.
The story is novel and the words are clear and clean.
Elegant and elegant words, vivid words
The narrative is smooth and lyrical.
The narrative is concise, to the point, flattering and interesting.
Fresh, smooth and natural.
The writing is vivid and picturesque.
Exquisite and lifelike
A profound and vivid description
Beautiful sentences and vivid narration.
Profound description and meticulous structure