The atmosphere begins and runs through. Not only is there no loss and disappointment, but there is also no loss of heroism in it. It is memorable and very good.
If there are shortcomings, the antithesis of couplets is close, complicated and not smooth. The shift of neckline is abrupt, and the words are generally plain.
Personal opinion, please forgive me for being incomplete.
Comments on this small day
B.rain is fragrant
Five Laws Birthday Huan Yi Sha
Enjoy the wine and boast, and the fishing port speaks of Sang Ma.
A kind heart promotes a young family, and a high ship carries a friendly baby.
There are birds flying in this mountain and fireworks in that mountain.
Birthday is half a hundred words, and I can still remember the gauze by the railing.
C. traces of love kiss
Seven laws? Birthday (new rhyme)
Year after year, I try to be a good mother.
The dutiful son cherishes life, and the loving mother nurtures this body with affection.
Don't forget the party, but also love to repay kindness.
Why do micro-bodies return to grace and insist on being a gentleman since childhood?
D. Zhang Chengyu
Five laws. birthday
How can you boast a long life, but you can't live a good life?
I often fall asleep in my eyes and know that life is pitying at night.
One night bodhi, half a life prajna flower.
Candles burn into brown sauce, and the end of the world is everywhere.
Zhang Chengyu commented: Sincere feelings can be worth thousands of dollars.
F. Poet Rusif
Five laws. Happy birthday
Children have birthdays, and mothers suffer.
Sanqiu cultivated young trees and gave birth to a fetus in 10.
Endless spring, how much kindness and respect.
Cherish the cultivation of human nature and push it down from generation to generation.
G China Piaoxiang
Five laws. Happy new year, Chunxuan.
The sun and the moon fly, and I look forward to playing with cranes.
Double sideburns on the seat, cheeks under the eyes.
Sweet as honey, let's drink to Shoubishan.
Chunxuan celebrated the New Year with a smile all over the inlet.
H. there is sunny snow in Xishan
Five laws. Birthday feeling
Crying, crying, thinking.
When the grass and trees are blooming and the parents are sick and tired.
The morning glow is full of love, and the evening glow is full of joy.
Is that there will be old people, there will be no filial piety.
J fanmu
Seven laws? Birthday message of coffee blossom
It's another long year, and the flowers are half fragrant.
Cooked in a sun-moon pot, coffee will be hidden in a bitter place.
The past is stormy, and the rest of my life is more prosperous.
How many floating dust dreams, hoping to get a few original lines.
K. Freshmen in Yu Xiang
Five laws of birthday (new rhyme)
Peach blossoms bloom in spring, and purple Yan returns.
I sang several rounds and laughed three times.
Mom's thousand stitches, Dad's Wan Ren Mountain.
Parents live a long life and pray with wine.
M Xishui
Lv Qi. Qingsheng (Yun Xin)
Birthdays coincide with cold and heat. Yes, today, we are more happy about the moon and the night.
Good friends write songs for Donghai, and T? H?u pours wine for Yu Yan.
If you don't speak your mind to the fullest, you can whip your horse and chase after joy.
Clear frost and dyed temples still smile, and joy is better than youth.
Noun (short for Noun) Pan Wei
Lv Qi's Birthday Shuhuai (Yun Xin)
Bean carp came out in February this year and has settled down to know her husband.
Looking back, I began to write.
Ask how much snow there will be in the future and take two or three books with you.
There are storms everywhere in the world, but fortunately there are proud bamboos by the window.
Comments on the last issue of poetry
I came to study in Haitang. I saw this poem just now and liked it very much, so I voted for it. Although this song didn't win the championship, it is worth remembering.
The whole poem is fluent and catchy to read. The couplets of Zhonglian Erlian are neat and neat, and the words and sentences are appropriate and delicate. It can be seen that the author's poetic skills are extraordinary, and the feelings of couplets sublimate naturally, echoing the first couplet alternately. It is worth learning [fuel] [fuel]. -Xishui
P fine bamboo green
Seven laws of birthday
I was here today last year? I have loved you for a long time.
The Modao dynasty is like a year old, like a shuttle swallowing.
When the moon is cold, the stars will disperse as soon as possible, and when the wine is ready, there is no need to muddy the holy bottle.
But watching the guests on the romantic slope, singing and enjoying themselves.
The judges recommended works and comments
Hui Ruo recommended and commented on today's works and pushed this one for the following reasons:
The sentence (1) is plain, without vague and flowery words, and what is moving is the description of details, not the falsehood.
(2) The language sense is fluent and the confrontation is steady. Through the propaganda and dyeing of Chinese couplets, it is said that "plain and leisurely is true"
(3) The fly in the ointment lies in the grasp of the rhythm between leagues, which is easily overlooked by each of us.
R Shi wai mei yuan
Seven laws. Birthday feeling
Who will pity you if you get older and waste another year?
Helpless wind and frost invade the temples, and I can't bear to worry.
Known peerless but superior, who can compare?
Sorrow and sorrow are doomed, and life and death are free days.
T. my stolen youth
Five laws. Birthday (new rhyme)
Chrysanthemums bloom every year, and geese return today.
Close neighbors bring wine, and distant friends send love messages.
Grandma is busy cooking, and dad looks at the mountain with a smile.
I don't pursue wealth, and I don't envy immortals.
Zhang Chengyu's comments: The works of the two couplets have reached a certain level, with gradual artistic conception, moderate relaxation and profound meaning, although it is not easy to spend thousands of dollars.
But mark, who is over one year old in the cup, doesn't know what to say, but it doesn't matter.
Xitong avenue
Five laws birthday
Youth follows Meng Lang, and middle age enters Zen Hall.
Fishing fires often move, and Xia Yun always gives pity.
Why are you afraid to go to the abyss?
exhibit one's works
A. listen to the stream in the bamboo forest
Seven laws. Birthday Memorial (Friendship Exhibition)
Life experiences ups and downs, and birthday candles shine in the windy year.
How many messages are hidden in WeChat? Celebrate with a glass of wine for nine days.
Drunk dream soul receives Heng Chuxiu, and flowers pen to Lingnan Yan.
Li Tao provides for the aged in spring and keeps it cool in reality.