Don't write a 300-word composition in spring.

1. Writing characteristics of "Qing Ping Le Bielai Chun Ban"

Serenade of peace and joy/lyrics of peace, tranquility and joy

Nan Tang Li Yu

Don't come in mid-spring, it will break your heart. The order of autumn may be like snow in the snow, brush it off and then flow down full.

Hongyan has flown back, the journey is far away, and the dream is hard to come true. The sadness of parting is like weeds in spring, which go further and further.

Qing Ping Le Yi Bie is a poem written by Li Yu, queen of the Southern Tang Dynasty during the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms period. Is this word written with the feeling that people miss in the distance and can't let go, or is it written for the sake of the author's feeling that his brother Li can't return to the Song Dynasty. The last film points out the dusk of spring and the moment of parting, and profoundly depicts the helplessness and expectation of the protagonist who misses his loved ones; The next film is intended for the other side, and it strongly shows the hero's yearning for his loved ones and the metaphor of endless spring grass on the assumption that it is difficult for his loved ones to sleep. The whole poem is centered on leaving sorrow and not hating, with clear clues, solid structure, natural techniques and thorough brushwork, especially unique metaphors. Writing from people's dynamics is particularly vivid, and it is called.

2. Appreciation of Li Yu's Qing Ping Le (No Spring Half) and Wang Wei's Rain for Spring Villa.

The order of autumn may be like snow in the snow, brush it off and then flow down full. Hongyan has flown back, the journey is far away, and the dream is hard to come true.

The sadness of parting is like weeds in spring, which go further and further. It is said that in the fourth year of Zhu Gande (966), my brother became good friends and never returned to the Song Dynasty. I wrote it out of deep gratitude.

However, the writing is not limited to personal affairs, but embellished with the pen of imagination, which profoundly shows a universal and abstract sadness and hatred, which is amazing. When the spring is strong and the spring is bright, everyone smiles and is happy. Only he is deeply saddened by the yearning in his heart. Bai Mei on the steps is like snow, which falls in a whirl, piles together in disorder, blows away gently, but falls from the beginning, just like his lingering sadness, endless and painful.

The goose came, but the letter didn't come. The goose left, but people didn't come back. It's a long way to Xiu Yuan, but it's hard to come back in a dream. This distance from hate is like lush spring grass growing farther and farther, thin and dense, boundless and boundless.

Li Yu's words are full of twists and turns, sighs, profound feelings and full of charm. His words are outlined with a light pen, clear and natural, flowing away like pearls, but leaving a distant meaning, which makes people have infinite reverie and imagination and unconsciously indulge in them. When they woke up from a big dream, they just let out a sigh: good word, good word! Reading Li Yu's words always makes people sad, makes people sad and moist, and can't bear to let go. And then linked with his life, I think his life is really a legendary life.

The people of Sri Lanka have passed away for a long time, and we can only silently appreciate the taste and savor the sadness between the lines. Li Yu (937-978), whose real name is Jia Cong, whose real name is Shi Guang and whose real name is Zhong Yin, was the sixth son of Southern Tang Dynasty.

Xuzhou people. Song Jianlong ascended the throne in Jinling in the second year (96 1).

He was in office for 15 years and was called Li Houzhu. When he ascended the throne, the Southern Tang Dynasty had settled in a corner of the south of the Yangtze River.

In the seventh year of Song Kaibao (974), Song Taizu sent letters to the north many times, but he refused to leave. In October of the same year, Song Bing went south to attack Jinling.

Next November, when the city is broken, the queen's flesh will come out naked, and she will be caught in Bianjing and sealed there, and she is not allowed to disobey her orders. Emperor Taizong ascended the throne and became the Duke of Longxi County.

Taiping rejuvenating the country for three years (978), and Qixi was his 42nd birthday. Song Taizong hated him for saying that "the old country can't bear to look back on the bright moon" and ordered people to poison him up and down at the banquet. Queen Wu was sealed and buried in Mangshan, Luoyang.

In the early days of his reign, the style of his poems was beautiful and soft, and he did not get rid of the habit of "flowers". After the national subjugation, during the house arrest of Lacrimosa every day, the king of national subjugation became the "Southern King" of the eternal ci circle (in the words of Qing Shenxiong's Ancient and Modern Thorns), and it was precisely that "the unfortunate poet of the country was lucky, and his words began to work when it came to vicissitudes".

These late ci poems are desolate and solemn, with profound artistic conception, which laid the foundation of Su Xin's so-called "bold and unconstrained" school and played a role in the history of ci poetry. As Wang Guowei said in Ci on Earth, "Ci came to Li Houzhu and began to have a broad vision and deep feelings." As for the beauty and harmony of his sentences, it is unprecedented.

The late Lord has a collection that has been lost. There are 44 words, only 38 of which can be confirmed by previous works or works written by others.

Wang Wei's "My Cabin in Wangchuan after a Long Rain" appreciates the rain stored in Wang Wei's Woods. After a long rain, I slowly emitted smoke from my cabin in Wangchuan, steaming quinoa and boiling millet. An egret flies over the quiet swamp, and mango birds sing in the trees in midsummer.

I learned to watch the morning glory in the mountains calmly and eat sunflower seeds with dew under the pine branches. Why should I scare seagulls, even if I think about it, by giving the honorary position to any clown? .

Wang Wei's masterpiece of Seven Laws describes the rainy scenery and seclusion in the villa. The poem consists of eight sentences in quadruplicate. The first sentence is about farm life in rainy days.

Fang, a scholar in the Tang Dynasty, said: "The lifeblood of this topic is the word' accumulated rain' (quoted from Poems of the Tang and Song Dynasties). Therefore, the poet points out the accumulated rain with a pen.

Because of the rainy day, the mountain is empty, extremely quiet, the air is humid, and the kitchen smoke rises. On this rainy day, men go to work on the eastern farm early in the morning.

The women steamed quinoa and boiled millet at home, cooked the rice and sent it to the field quickly. There are only fourteen words, which not only describe the mountain scenery and smoke dynamics in rainy days, but also show the life picture of farmers cooking and farming early; It not only shows the leisurely mood of the poet, but also shows the busyness and happiness of family life.

The pen is unusually refined and concentrated, and the words are concise and dense. The necklace describes his seclusion and Zen life.

Poets often sit quietly in the mountains, realizing the impermanence of life and serving the Buddha; He also picked sunflower seeds in Panasonic to be vegetarian and practiced the Buddhist doctrine of abstinence. From the perspective of artistic expression, these two sentences are quite intriguing because they contain Zen in the narrative of landscape writing.

At the end of the couplet, I wrote, I have tried my best, never to get rid of vulgar thoughts, meet fate and not to compete with the world. The poet combined two allusions in Zhuangzi and Liezi, which made the poem more interesting and rational, and also enhanced the tension of the poem.

"Fables of Zhuangzi" contains: Yang Zhu went to see Laozi, and people from the hostel greeted him and offered him a stool, while other guests offered him their seats. When he learned the truth from Laozi and came back, people there no longer gave up their seats at a respectful distance from him, and even informally fought with him without any barriers.

The metaphor here is that I have got rid of the heart of fame and fortune. Stop: waste.

Hai Hong sentence: Liezi Huangdi says that some people live by the sea and learn from European birds. His father found out and asked him to hurry some home.

When he went to the seaside again, the seagulls seemed to have guessed his heart and stopped flying near him. This means that you have no desire and the flocks don't have to doubt each other.

These two sentences can be understood as that the poet wrote in backchat that he was glad that he had forgotten the realm of enlightenment, and it can also be understood as a metaphor that there are still people in the court who are jealous of themselves. Rich in meaning, interesting, tortuous and chewy.

This couplet is characterized by bright colors. The poet painted a picture of egrets, orioles, vast gray rice fields and dark Xia Shu with different colors, shades and brightness, so that they could be compared with each other.

Flying egrets and singing orioles add dynamics and sounds to this harmonious picture, thus depicting rainy Wangchuan Shan Ye as lush, elegant, charming and pleasing to the eye. Zhu's iron net coral commented on the painting of this couplet, and Wei Qingzhi's poet Yu Xie compared it with Du Fu's poem "Two orioles sing green willows and a row of egrets rise to the sky" ("quatrains"), thinking that they are both "excellent works of writing".

Fang praised it as "vivid scenery" (quoted from Poems of Tang and Song Dynasties). "Desert.

3. Read the following words and answer the question 1. Metaphors and puns. The falling snow clearly indicates the chaos of plum blossom, and the current chaos of plum blossom (snow) indicates the current upset mood; The bright plum blossom has just been brushed away and covered again, and the sadness in the dark can't be stopped although it is restrained. Here, the poet creates a deep and graceful realm of scene blending through the description with a great sense of picture, and vividly and implicitly displays the heartbreaking inner grief to the readers, which is touching and thought-provoking.

2. "There is no evidence for the news from the goose". It is unreasonable and affectionate to complain that the geese have come without bringing news from their families. They persistently and deeply express their unforgettable concern and condolences. It is unreasonable to complain that dreams are difficult because it is too far away, but it is this irrationality that reflects a feeling of helplessness and not knowing how to get rid of it. Therefore, these two sentences between the lines are unreasonable, helpless and sad, and have their own indescribable subtlety.

3. Du Mu's "hate like spring grass" is only a static metaphor, but Li Yu has extended it to the dynamic realm of "go further and live more brilliantly", combining the scene of leaving people with the scene of leaving people like spring grass, and writing the growth and increase process of leaving sorrow and not hating, which is unique. (If it makes sense, you can score)

4. In this unusual composition of spring, full of green in summer is certainly exciting. Autumn is beautiful with fruitful results, and winter with frost and snow is certainly beautiful, but I have a soft spot for vibrant spring.

Look! The grass crept out of the ground, and the bright green and silver elves slowly took off their pure and beautiful coats, and spring appeared.

She not only came, but also brought spring breeze, spring rain and countless flowers and plants. The spring wind is so pleasant that people feel extremely relaxed and happy.

The water drops of spring rain beat on the roof tiles, just like a beautiful music; Splash is a beating note, and its close contact with ceramic tiles is the magic endowed by nature.

The seedlings and grass drank the water heartily, which made people immersed in colorful reverie.

It was an ordinary intoxicating spring, but there was a trace of heartache in my heart. Because I will be separated from my most sincere friend. I will respect my parents' wishes-transfer. So, I moved from Leshan to Mengshan.

I remember that spring, I walked with Swallow in the shopping mall. She held my hand and leisurely hummed her favorite JJ Lin song "Windy Summer". She asked me to sing with her, and I did.

At that time, I was so absorbed in singing that I burst into tears. Swallow looked at me in surprise, wiped my tears with her hand and asked me with concern. When she learned the truth from my weeping mouth, she didn't cry, but stood up and said to me. "Plum, I will remember you, because you will always be my friend. Right? " I nodded heavily.

On the day I left, on the boulevard, she gave me a blue toy necklace and said to me; We all have a blue necklace. This is a testimony to our friendship. Tears came out again.

She insisted that I go first. She wanted to watch me leave. Suddenly, behind me, there was a song:

"Remember yesterday, that summer, when the wind blew ..."

After six years of separation, we encouraged each other, supported each other, shared happiness, shared sadness and troubles.

I will always remember the song "Windy Summer" in the unusual spring in "Boulevard":

"Let blue thoughts, with wings of love, fly to your side and tell your heart-"

5. Read the following Tang poem and complete the following questions: 1: The meaning of "chaos" is very complicated. What is said here is that the countless snowfalls clearly show the chaos of plum blossoms, and the current chaos of plum blossoms implies the current state of mind. The bright plum blossom has just been brushed away and covered again, and the sadness in the dark can't be stopped although it is restrained. Here, the poet creates a deep and graceful realm of blending scenes through the description with a strong sense of pictures, so that the heartbreaking inner grief is vividly and implicitly displayed in front of the readers, which is moving and thought-provoking.

Question 2: Metaphorically, overlapping and overlapping, "hate is like spring grass, and you are still alive if you go forward." Comparing the feelings of pregnant people to spring grass on the distant horizon is multiplying. He also used three short words of "going further" and "returning to the original" in one sentence, interwoven with rhetorical devices such as overlapping and overlapping, and used the growth of spring grass everywhere as a metaphor for endless hatred, euphemism, profundity and endless thoughts. "Spring grass" is not only a metaphor, but also a scene and a psychological image. With its "further development" and reaching the end of the world, it broadens people's horizons and the distance between time and space. The farther people go, the greater the distance in space, and the more the spring grass will spread until the vision is blurred. The poet's sadness and parting also melted into a long atmosphere, and the depth of parting is beyond words. This combination of the virtual and the real makes the image melt into a long time and space, which urges people to think deeply about Lenovo, which is similar to Yu Meiren's sentence, "You can worry as much as you can, just like a river flowing eastward".

Question 1:

Analysis of test questions: this kind of question belongs to the examination of refined words, and the analysis can be started from the following steps: ① understanding the meaning of "chaos" in sentences; ② See whether "chaos" uses rhetorical devices; (3) See what role the use of "chaos" has played. Then understand it in the context of poetry. The expression (or rhetoric method) adopted vividly describes the characteristics of-and expresses the poet's feelings. "The bricks are falling like snow, and they are still full." Masonry is a step. Try to write sensational scenery in these two sentences. The more prominent the scenery, the fuller the mood will be. The steps are covered with plum blossoms, messy as snow, falling on people, brushing off one body and returning to another. Isn't this the embodiment of the poet's sadness? Old worries have not disappeared, but new ones have increased. The International Association of Poets is on the verge of extinction. As the king of a country, I think my brother will stay in a foreign land for a long time. Why not make people feel confused? This plum blossom doesn't understand people's wishes and provokes people's nameless worries.

Question 2:

Test analysis: this question should be answered first by the expression used, and then combined with specific text analysis. Metaphorical rhetoric can be obtained from "retaining hatred" such as Spring Grass. It can be concluded from Gengxian, Farther, and Rebirth that overlapping and cascading are used. When answering questions, you can answer the expressive effect of these expressions and the author's thoughts and feelings.

Spring is coming. Spring is coming. The sun in early spring, like a big girl, smiled shyly at me with a red face. After a while, the sun appeared, radiant, golden light shining on the world. In an instant, the whole earth is full of light and warmth. The sunshine in early spring shines on people, warm and kind like a loving mother.

In the suburbs, with the singing of birds, we go looking for spring. Found it, found it, spring has quietly arrived. You see, the wheat seedlings are green and tender, one after another, like a green ocean, with a wind blowing and blue waves rippling in the ocean. Golden rape blossoms, square, piece by piece, spewed out from the ocean like small golden pagodas, and like golden carpets, shone brightly in the sunshine. The cool breeze in Xu Lai and the rich fragrance of rape blossoms are refreshing, and I'm going to be smoked to death.

On the side of the road, the grass sneaked out of the ground, spread its leaves and climbed up the vine in a hurry. (Reprinted from the first model website, please keep this mark. ) Soon, it was full of ravines and ridges. From a distance, a piece of green velvet looks like a green carpet. It's soft and loose to step on. I just lie down, roll around and enjoy the warmth of spring. Hey, what are those colored spots? Oh, those orange ones, orange ones and eggplant purple ones. They are all dandelion, Malan and duck food. There are some wild flowers that I have never seen before, also called unknown, like stars scattered all over the sky on the jasper plate. They compete with each other to make the "green carpet look extraordinarily beautiful".

The duckweeds in the river are blown to one side of the river by the wind and stick together tightly, leaving no gaps. From a distance, it really smells like "half river and half river red"!

The sky is clear, the breeze is blowing gently, the spring grass is fresh, the English is colorful, the clouds are flowing, and the stars are moonlight. Have you ever stopped to enjoy it? Why not slow down and enjoy it? You will find the spring picturesque!

7. Spring has come, and the total score of the composition is 300 words. Spring has come, and the composition is 300 words.

Spring has come, and she is close to us. Xiaohong, Xiaolan and Xiaoming went to find spring. Xiaohong caught a golden butterfly with many red spots on it. Xiaohong took a look at it and let it fly freely with pity. Xiaolan is enjoying the scenery. She sat on the grass and touched the flowers in front of her and said, "Do you still recognize me? Look how much I have grown up! " Xiaoming has been running. Tired of running, he lay on the grass and watched the birds fly in the air. Suddenly, Xiao Ming felt a little itchy on his face. It was the grass that scratched his cheek. He smiled happily. Later, the three friends drew all the scenes they saw on the same piece of paper and took them to school. Unexpectedly, their paintings won the first prize in the "group painting" competition, and they were extremely happy.

Article 1

Spring has come, and the composition is 300 words.

Miss Chun came to the world with light steps. She sent Uncle Dong away, blew the grass's clothes with the spring breeze, and melted the ice in the river.

My mother and I welcomed the spring breeze and came to Gong Yuan. When we walked through the elastic soil, the grass had unconsciously exposed its head. When he stepped on it obliquely, he raised his head again, as if to say to us, "Spring is coming!" " "

When we walked to the river, I saw shrimp, tortoise and carp. They are swimming happily in the river, as if preparing for the arrival of Miss Chun.

It's getting late, and my mother and I are about to leave. Suddenly, there was a spring rain. The rain, dense, gently sprinkled on my face, cool, until my heart.

Spring is so beautiful, if only the earth would always be spring!

the second

Spring has come, and the composition is 300 words.

It is another morning. When I was walking on my way to school, I was surprised to find that Sister Chun had quietly come to my side.

When the sun comes out, the grass on the roadside is more vibrant. They are no longer dry khaki, but gradually turn pale green. The road is no longer cold, but it is getting warmer and warmer.

Spring is coming, and the temperature is higher than that in winter. The temperature used to be a few degrees below zero, but now it is more than ten degrees above zero. The weather is really getting warmer. Passers-by changed their cotton-padded clothes into single clothes, cotton trousers into single pants, and long and thick cotton boots into sports shoes.

Spring has come, and people seem to be in a particularly happy mood, with hopes in their hearts and smiles on their faces.

Spring is a beautiful season, and I will greet it with my best academic achievements!

Article

Spring has come, and the composition is 300 words.

Spring seems to have come long ago. I didn't know that people living in cities are all gray walls, cars and trees on the street by police. It is strange that spring never germinates, so people here find out how summer comes so soon after winter, including me. I love the four seasons, and I love spring more. Not long ago, I suddenly found my rose chlorophytum tulip aloe. I didn't know it turned green quietly that night. I'm glad that spring has come, and I even ran away overbearing. I suddenly felt very happy when I came to my home. Spring has not forgotten me, because I still remember it, but some people have forgotten them, because they have forgotten.

Article 4

Spring has come, and the composition is 300 words.

"Where is spring? Where is spring? " On the day when the winter vacation ended, I found in my dream that all the hibernating animals were singing this song, probably because of the information from spring, so I had such a dream! Spring in the Woods: the hair of the withered old tree seems to be reborn and immediately turns green, as if it had been dyed in a barber shop. Many grasses stretched out their arms to compare their heights. "Ha, I am taller than you!" ""hey! I am greener than you! "The noise made the swallows fly back to the barbed wire." What a noise! "Swallows fly around. Spring in the garden is more beautiful. Lily, rose, Chinese rose, violet, Spring Festival, azalea and peach blossom are blooming. This is the so-called letting a hundred flowers blossom and be colorful. Ha! Spring is so beautiful, I finally found it!

Article 5

Spring has come, and the composition is 300 words.

The north wind roared and the small iron tower model was forgotten in the wooden cabinet. The thin black cat lying on the balcony looked at the starry sky and asked in confusion, "Why am I so sad?" Their owner, a little urchin, is frowning at the moment and thinking hard about the frozen earth: why am I so upset? After listening to their complaints, the beautiful girl living in the sky drove away the annoying winter. She came to the iron tower model and blew the dust gently, and the dust disappeared. She came to the black cat and turned into a sleeping kitten among the green leaves. She came to the child and turned into a wisp of hot air. The ice and snow melted and the child and his friends played happily. Oh, it was spring!