As can be seen from the article, Xiangling's research on poetry can be roughly divided into three steps. One is to learn from Daiyu and taste Wang Wei's poems under her guidance. Second, he tried to write poems while reading Du Fu's poems. Third, after two failures, he finally succeeded. The first poem written by Xiangling is naive and straightforward. The biggest problem is that the whole poem is not expressed.
Her second poem has improved. It can be compared with Scenes of Flowers and Light Frost, and gradually let go of her hands and feet. However, the words "jade plate" and "jade fence" still have old flavor, and the whole poem is chanting the moonlight instead of the moon itself, which is somewhat beside the point. Therefore, Dai Yu said, "This poem is so boring."
Xiang Ling's third poem is a success. Except for the first couplet, every sentence seems to be not about the moon, but about it. The dictionary is elegant and implicit, and its meaning is novel and unique. Especially couplets are exquisite because of their stable antithesis, concise words and profound meanings. Its greatest advantage is that it fits Xiangling's own life experience, cherishes the moon and shows her true feelings. In this way, the poem is exquisite.