Wooden axe
Quietly harbor
Blue bamboo forest
Maybe it was a naive dream?
Suddenly looked at her again.
A little longer.
(Selected from the Collection of National Poetry Newspapers and Periodicals (1989))
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There are many poems about bamboo shoots in China, such as Li Shangyin's "Eating Bamboo Shoots First in the Seats": "When tender and fragrant buds first come out of the forest, Yuling's price is as heavy as gold. The land and sea of the imperial capital should be countless, and bear the heart of Lingyun. " He wrote about the loveliness and preciousness of bamboo shoots, and the pity and regret of being eaten. This is consistent with the emotional tone of the poem of wooden axe and bamboo shoots.
This poem about bamboo shoots is full of twists and turns, unique and emotional.
The beginning is realism: a young bamboo shoot contains and indicates a bamboo forest in the future. This is the cuteness and preciousness of bamboo shoots. Its loveliness and preciousness are determined by the loveliness and preciousness of bamboo. Bamboo has not only practical value, but also its character and virtue. For example, we have always called pine, bamboo and plum "the three friends of the old cold", praising bamboo for "being restrained before being unearthed and always being humble when going to Lingyun" and so on.
In the second section, in view of the sharp turn of the pen in the previous section, the author puts forward the question of "maybe it is a naive dream" This question makes it possible for the next section "answers" to appear.
The "answer" in the third section is not language, but the fact that bamboo shoots "grow another section". This is the genius of the author. We often say that "facts speak louder than words". Isn't it more convincing to answer with facts than with words? Moreover, the fact of "growing taller" was presented at the moment of "suddenly looking at her again", indicating that it is not only certain but also just around the corner to grow from a tender bamboo shoot into a "green bamboo forest".
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