Too white but not pale, the stars are in the forest.
Three hundred Li in the sky, you will die.
There are green-haired Weng in the forest, lying in the snow with the clouds.
I don't laugh or talk. I live in a cave.
I'm here to see a real person. I knelt down and asked for advice.
Brilliant jade teeth are called refined medicine.
The inscription on the bone conveys its language, and the body has been electrocuted.
Looking up at the unreachable place, pale and enthusiastic.
I will camp cinnabar and say goodbye to others forever.
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The ancient poem "Taibai and Cang" is one of the group poems "Fifty-nine Ancient Poems" by Li Bai, a great poet in the Tang Dynasty. This is a poem about immortals. The poet told himself that he met a real person with a kind spirit on Taibai Mountain. Real people taught him the secret of alchemy, which made him feel hot inside, determined to make an alchemy, make it a positive result and leave this world forever.
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(1) You: You look very lofty.
⑵ Green hair: raven sideburns.
⑶ Cloudization: Dispel dark clouds.
(4) Ghost House: Silent House.
5] Brilliant: Bright appearance.
[6] Inscribed bones convey their language: it is an inverted sentence of "real people teach their language, which I will never forget".
⑺ "pale and passionate": refers to the sudden impulse in the heart. Pale and hasty. Five emotions, joy, anger, sorrow, joy and resentment, refer to emotions here.
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The Taibai Mountain in Xi 'an is lush and towering, with stars arranged overhead. It is only three hundred miles from the sky, so it is isolated from the world. In the mountains of Gu Song, there lived an old man with green hair and white clouds. He was lying in the snow. Don't laugh and say nothing, silently, meditate in the dark cave. When I came to Taibai Mountain, I was lucky enough to meet this real person. I knelt before him for a long time and earnestly asked for the treasure of cultivating immortals. He didn't laugh or say anything. He burst out laughing, showing his white teeth, and gave me some valuable prescriptions of Dan medicine. After I wrote down his secret recipe in the dungeon, he disappeared like lightning. An unattainable emotion seems to ripple in my mind. That really knocked over the seasoning cabinet, which was full of sweet and sour taste. From now on, I will practice the elixir according to his precious formula, away from the world and people.
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This poem is the fifth of "59 ancient poems". This poem was written after Li Bai was frustrated when he first went to Chang 'an for an official position in his thirties. At that time, he climbed Taibai Mountain once. It should be said that whenever Li Bai is greatly stimulated, he has a strong idea of becoming a monk to balance his emotions. Later, the lingering desire to join the WTO summoned him back to the real world. This is a dream fairy poem. Dream God frequented Li Bai and gave him brilliant dreams, perhaps with the help of Dionysus.
This poem is divided into three paragraphs. The first four sentences are about the grandeur of Taibai Mountain. Four sentences describe the strangeness of people's appearance. In the last ten sentences, the poet knelt down and asked for the secret. After the real person told the secret, the poet was shocked and determined to die of alchemy. This is the poet's dissatisfaction with reality and his desire to get rid of the illusory world.
In terms of writing, this poem directly describes the scene, without allusions, or even common metaphors in poetry. Smooth and lively, in one go, incisively and vividly. Describe and contrast characters with scenery. This extraordinary environment is in sharp contrast with the noisy world, which further highlights the theme of the work. Writing characters directly is all line drawing, with concise words and outstanding images.