But some of them are neither fish nor fowl, and I can't understand what he really wants to express. That's because the depth is not enough, the language is not fluent enough, and the artistic conception is not outlined. To be clear, it is not poetry, but the essence and epitome of language, a piece of language or a patchwork of language combinations, not all modern poetry!
Since it is a poem, the language should be concise, beyond ordinary sentences, and it is the refinement and extension of inspiration. Only the author's inspiration can inspire readers and produce souls!