2. If you are writing something, you should write it concretely, with fluent and coherent sentences, rich words, original ideas, sincere feelings, starting with the topic and ending with the beginning.
3. If you write about scenery, you should write about the scenery you want to write well, with beautiful words and flowery words, so that you can get high marks.
Of course, this is just a skill to tell you. If you want to write a good composition, you should read more composition books, take good composition notes, accumulate good words and sentences, and most importantly, practice your pen diligently! In this way, your vocabulary will be more and more abundant, so that the rough words will become beautiful.
say the end first, followed by the beginning.
closing skills of composition
If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the ending is like "ringing a bell". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant teas, which makes people think again and again." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending at the end of reading! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which makes it more difficult to write the ending. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although it is not necessarily required that the end of an article is "leopard tail", it is also required that the end be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily. That is, the full text has ended, which should be intriguing, but the author is still not at ease, determined to tremble a few words, explain the whereabouts of people who do not need to be confessed one by one, and pierce the meaning that could have been realized. 2 empty slogans. At the end, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted slogans that had nothing to do with the content of the article, which was a big theme at the end. 3 dragging mud and water. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article. From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of the examination composition? The following ending techniques are commonly used in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination.
1. natural bunching. No matter what style of the article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This kind of ending is called "natural ending". It completely avoids the ending fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness, and appears simple, bright and unpretentious, which is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so it is impossible to pay too much attention to "form" and "law". As long as you are passionate, write freely, and you can fully express your feelings, it is a good article. But paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and sloppy, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of the development of literary thought. In the text learned, there are many such examples, so I won't repeat them here. 2. Head-to-tail echo. The ending should echo the beginning, and write a sentence that echoes the beginning and is not simply repeated. This ending method is a very common method of closing all kinds of articles. This method can arouse the reader's psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling that the head and tail are round and integrated. For example, "A Precious Shirt" begins with "In my home, there is a white shirt that is really cool." At the end, I wrote: "For four years, I have carefully collected this precious shirt, and I have never been willing to wear it once." The end and the beginning of Praise of Poplar echoed: "I want to praise the poplars loudly!"
For example, my grandfather: My grandfather is over 6 years old, tall, with a pair of eyes embedded in a wrinkled face. The most proud thing is that he has the quality of "never too old to learn".
that day, I just walked into the door of my house, and my grandfather pushed me to the study. The precious book pointed to an English word and asked for advice: "Good granddaughter, how do you pronounce this word?" I was at a loss. How could Grandpa ask me for advice on English? It's true that the sun rises in the west. I didn't know until I asked. It turned out that there were several foreign guests recently. Grandpa learned English in order to prevent us China people from being dumb in front of foreigners. I suddenly realized.
Mother asked Grandma, "Old man, what's the matter? Learn English." When grandma heard this, she was so angry that she couldn't fight, and she spit it out quickly: "Today, she said that she would go out to buy things, and she would buy things if she bought things!" I actually bought an English book. Do you think it is irritating? "
As soon as the voice fell, Grandpa rushed in and shouted, "It's over, it's over." I wonder in my heart, grandpa, what's the hurry? I saw grandpa turn on the TV and turn to Channel 17. A fluent and sweet English was introduced to my ears. It turns out that grandpa still watches the English program "Into America" on time every day.
Grandpa is like this. He is "never too old to learn" and is an example for me to learn.
An unforgettable thing
When I was in the third grade, something happened, which has been deeply imprinted in my mind and made me unforgettable.
It was a Friday afternoon, and it was after six o'clock in the afternoon when I finished my English class in Cambridge. My stomach growled and I was so hungry! I walked towards the school gate with my schoolbag on my back. As I walked, I thought: Why are you so hungry today? If only a few roasted chicken legs or a few dollars could fall from the sky! Just thinking about it, I suddenly saw a shiny thing in front of me. "It can't be money!" I said to myself. Although I didn't believe such a good thing would happen, I ran towards the shiny thing. After a closer look, it was really one yuan! Haha, it's a dream come true. God help me! Although there is no roast chicken leg, it is not bad to have one yuan. I quickly picked up the money and dragged it in my hand, skipping out of the school gate, intending to buy two delicious kebabs to fill my hungry stomach.
At the moment when I was about to hand over the money, it seemed as if a voice reminded me in my ear: You are a young pioneer, so you should never forget the money. What should I do now? At this moment, my "damn" stomach growled again, as if urging me: "Don't hesitate, pass the money to buy kebabs quickly!" Westbank > I reached out my hand again. Suddenly, I felt as if countless pairs of eyes were looking at me. I blushed, and my outstretched hand shrank back. I was a young pioneer. I found money and should give it to my teacher instead of buying what I wanted. So I ran back to school and gave the one-yuan money to the teacher in the brigade department. The teacher smiled and nodded at me and said, "Good job". I feel elated in my heart, because I have passed a test. This incident shows that I am a real young pioneer.
An unforgettable thing
Since I went to school, I have been reading happily every day, but an incident that happened in school not long ago made me regret it and I will never forget it. The thing is this:
It was Friday afternoon, and my friends and I went to the school's four-wheel drive interest group. From learning to assembling to operation, it was smooth. Just before the end of the interest group activity, something unexpected happened to me. My good friend Guo Jie, who loves to fight and is naughty, suddenly pushed me behind my back and then looked at me with a smile. Angry and funny, I couldn't help pushing and shoving him and chasing him. Just as we were getting excited, I accidentally pushed him down and let him step on the track of the four-wheel drive. The track immediately changed shape and the parts on the track were scattered. We were stunned at once, from the beginning of joking to arguing with each other. The students next to him immediately invited Mr. Li, the supervisor, to see the "scene". "Teacher, someone stepped on the runway!" That classmate called in a hurry. We can't wait for a crack to get in. After understanding the situation with us kindly, Mr. Li said seriously, "The runway has been seriously deformed and can't be repaired, which will affect everyone's preparation for the city's four-wheel drive competition. What should I do if I damage public property? " Guo Jie and I immediately promised to make amends and compensate as soon as possible. Teacher Li said earnestly, "You have the courage to admit your mistakes, and the quality of honesty is not bad, but you must be careful, and you must not patronize yourself to play and bring losses to others or the collective." Later, our parents actively cooperated with the teacher, not only compensated for the loss of the runway, but also earnestly educated us.
Now this incident is like a wake-up call ringing in my ears, reminding me not to get carried away for my own happiness, to chase and make jokes too much, to keep collective affairs and care for public property in my heart, to be an honest child and to do more useful things for the collective!
One person I admire most
Some people admire Ronaldo, who is all-powerful in the football field; Some people admire Beethoven, a musician who can play countless beautiful music; Some people admire the knowledgeable Lu Xun; Some people admire ... and I admire my ordinary and great mother.
My mother is diligent and hard-working. When I was 4 years old, my parents took me to Shamujia town to work because of the poor land and poor life in my hometown. It's sunny and cold, and people are doomed. In the winter when I was 4 years old, my father was ill, and my mother quietly shouldered the burden of life with her weak shoulders. She gets up early in the morning and gets dark, regardless of the wind and snow, looking for work everywhere. Because my mother is kind-hearted and hard-working, the Zhang family's work has not been finished, and the Li family's uncle and aunt will make an appointment again. After many twists and turns, my mother finally found a family clinic with profound experience for my father. They made a wonderful comeback, and dad's illness finally got better in this clinic. It was not until the following autumn that my father recovered from his illness. My mother continued to work, let my father rest at home, send me to the kindergarten class, and often supplemented my father and me with nutrition, but she was frugal, but my mother was always cheerful and didn't complain. When she is free, she also teaches me to draw. From that moment on, my mother planted a seed of painting in my heart.
mom is smart and capable. The next spring, my mother didn't let my father do the rough work for fear that he would be ill. She learned how to make rice bean jelly in her hometown. In spring, her mother made rice bean jelly at home, and her father rode a bicycle to sell it. Her mother's rice bean jelly was praised by everyone. In autumn, my mother asked my father to go to my hometown to collect dry tobacco. When I came back, my mother and my father carefully picked up dry tobacco, and in winter, my father rode a bicycle to sell dry tobacco. After three years of ups and downs, my family has a small savings due to my mother's diligence and thrift, and my father's bicycle has been replaced by a small electric tricycle. Under the hard guidance of my mother, my painting has a certain foundation, and my mother sent me to a painting class.
My mother is not only my father's good helper, but also my good teacher. In my study, she often helps me analyze some difficult problems, gives me comfort and encouragement, and makes me stride forward rain or shine in my life and study. Mother let our family boat sail from the whirlpool to the smooth flow. This year (29), our family opened two grocery stores. Dad got on a small container truck, three or five miles around selling groceries.
The business between mom and dad is getting hotter every day, but mom is still so casual about her clothes and food, but the learning conditions and living standards she gives me are getting higher and higher every day. My mother is tolerant, kind and hard-working, and people sincerely admire her at home and abroad.
My mother is ordinary and great. She is too busy making money to enjoy herself. The goal is to make me become the admired Lu Xun and Xu Beihong in people's eyes ...
First time to buy food
"First time, how nice!" Is that really the case? I think so.
The long-awaited Spring Festival has finally arrived. This time, the family is very lively, because it's a treat. Mom is busy cooking and dad entertains guests. Because there were not enough people and I didn't buy all the vegetables, I was sent to buy vegetables while I was having a good time. Although I was extremely dissatisfied, I went anyway.
When we arrived at the vegetable market, almost all the traders went home for the Spring Festival, except for a few stalls where there were people. I walked aimlessly, and everything pays off. I came to the place where onions are sold. I can look at that man and think: he has a long beard and small eyes, and he doesn't look like a good person. It's my first time to buy food, and I'm a little worried. What should he do if he cheats me?
At this moment, an aunt was shopping at a nearby booth, so I watched her learn. "How much is this cabbage?" "Sixty cents" "It's so expensive, everyone sells it at forty cents, which is cheaper." "All right, fifty cents." The stall owner said helplessly. I saw that the old lady picked the leaves very much. I thought to myself: I will say these words, take a deep breath and go to the place where onions are sold.
"How much is this onion?" I asked confidently. "Eighty cents a catty, okay?" The stall owner squinted and said. "It's so expensive. I've seen it. Everything else sells for 6 cents. If it's cheaper, I'll buy two Jin." The stall owner smiled and said, "Really? Now that the Spring Festival is over, all the onion sellers have left. It seems that I am the only one. " Listen to this with a mocking tone. I had no choice but to bite the bullet and say, "I'll take two Jin." I saw that he took a few leafless onions and put them on the scale. When I saw them, I said loudly, "Slow down, others want more Ye Er. Do you think I am a child and lie to me?" The stall owner looked at me with surprised eyes and said, "Well, I'll give you plenty of leaves."
After paying the money, the stall owner smiled at me, but said nothing. I was secretly proud that I was not cheated by him. Trot all the way home, trying to get mom's praise.
when I got home, my mother took out the onion and said to me, "You child, you have failed to accomplish enough, but you have failed more than enough. Why do you choose onions with so many leaves? How can you eat them? " I suddenly realized that the surprised eyes of the stall owner at that time.
if you don't climb the mountain, Fuchiyama is the highest; I don't know the thickness of the land without facing the deep stream. Indeed, if you don't buy food, how can you know that there is knowledge in buying food? Only by trying for the first time can you get what you have never got.
Therefore, life should keep trying new life, so that it can be colorful.
Spider Story
Today, I was lying alone in bed with my eyes half closed. By accident, I saw something black on the wall. I thought: Could it be a spider? Curious, I stood up and stepped forward to have a look. Unexpectedly, it actually moved. Ah! It's really "eight legged freaks"! I cried out in horror. You know, the worm I fear most is a spider, and this spider is black and big, which is very scary.
when mom heard the cry, she came over and asked, "What's the matter?" I stammered, "There are … spiders here." After that, she pointed to the spider on the wall. Who knows, my mother said casually, "What did I think? Isn't it a spider that makes a fuss? It won't bite. What are you afraid of?" Say that finish and went out. I thought: what is a little spider afraid of? I am hundreds of times bigger than it! It can be pressed into patties with one finger. I think so, but my eyes are always fixed on the "eight legged freaks", fearing that it would climb into my crib. I saw it crawling