First, the teaching objectives
Second, the difficulties in teaching
Beijing Normal University Education Science and Culture Center suggests that some candidates can't tell what is important and what is difficult. Note: The key point is to be more operable and specific; The difficulty is more abstract and virtual.
For example, in primary school Chinese curriculum, it is the key to let primary school students master new words and certain sentence patterns. For example, if you let primary school students experience the emotional dynamics of the characters in the dialogue, this kind of thing is difficult to understand in primary school. This is called difficulty.
Third, the teaching process
The following four parts are four parts of the teaching process, which are relatively procedural: introduction-new lessons-consolidation-summary.
Fourth, blackboard design.
Tips from Education and Culture Center of Beijing Normal University: There are beautiful blackboard designs on the Internet, and I want to try my own innovation.
Based on long-term teaching experience, it can't be done on a whim. Don't imitate, just use it properly. So what is the correct usage of blackboard writing? That is, the blackboard is divided into two sides, the left side is used to write key content, and the right side is used as draft paper, which can be erased at any time.
Verb (abbreviation for verb) assigns homework.
The course plan is as follows:
teaching process
Teaching plan of composition "writing your own true feelings"
[teaching material analysis]
The new curriculum standard clearly points out that writing teaching should guide students to pay attention to reality, love life and express their true feelings.
Without emotion, there is no depth, let alone appeal. Life is also the source of emotion. It is necessary to guide students to observe life sincerely, pay attention to people and things around them and deepen their emotional experience. With true feelings, the article can really impress readers. Ba Jin said, "I write not because I am talented, but because I have feelings."
As long as you grasp the emotional point in observation, you will find that there are true feelings everywhere in the world: a drop of dew on the leaves in the morning, a touch of sunset in the evening, a word from a friend when you are sad ... can move students.
Sun Shaozhen, an expert in Chinese education, said: Writing alone is not enough to be close to life. It is more important to be close to your own experience and write your true feelings. Students learn to observe, think, experience and imagine in daily life. With what they have observed, thought, experienced and imagined, they will naturally reveal their true feelings in the text.
Although it is said that as long as you write your own feelings and understanding in your own language, the articles you write can meet the requirements of telling the truth and expressing your true feelings, for most junior high school students, there is still a problem of how to say things and express your feelings. Therefore, in the actual composition teaching, teachers should guide students to master some specific methods and ways to express their true feelings in the composition.
[Teaching objectives]
1. Guiding students to truly feel experience and sentiment is the intersection of writing and life, and the best time for writing is when emotions are touched.
2. Master the method of expressing "true feelings" in the composition, and learn to express your sincere feelings properly in the composition.
[Teaching Focus]
1, what kind of article is an article with true feelings.
2. How to write your true feelings in the article?
[Teaching difficulties]
How to write your true feelings in the article?
[Teaching process]
Design theme: arrange teaching from two angles-what to write? How to write?
I. Introduction
Teacher: Students, today we are going to have a real composition class. Speaking of composition, what is the most common complaint that teachers hear? Nothing to say! Students, life is indeed dull, but as long as you feel it with your heart, you will find that dull life is like a slow flowing stream, with waves and flowers in peace.
As long as you have a "willing to discover" vision and a "willing to feel" mood, you will find that life is full of true feelings and feelings everywhere. A fallen leaf, a bunch of flowers, a smile, a tear, and even a handful of dirt all have touching places, which can arouse our infinite feelings. The following are some excerpts from our classmates' diaries, which are sincere, touching and inspiring.
Second, the real call:
Through music and teacher's talk, arouse students' emotions. Lead students to understand life, dig out people and things that impress them deeply, or make them feel ups and downs when they think of them. )
Teacher's language: In order to make everyone listen more quietly, I suggest you cover your eyes so that you can listen more attentively. Please take off the red scarf around your neck and cover your eyes with it. Then please listen carefully. I hope these waves of true feelings can arouse more real memories.
The teacher read emotionally: "It was not until one day that I came to grandpa's house again and looked at the empty room, old furniture and old radio that I suddenly remembered that I had not been to grandpa's house for a long time." My grandfather who loves me lives in such a cold and lonely environment every day. "
This is Lu Yifan's guilt for grandpa. Son, are you alienated from grandpa like Lu Yifan? Think back, what are the wonderful things about Grandpa in your memory?
"Excited and nervous, I am waiting for an interview with the reporter the next day. When I got home, I began to want to say something to the reporter as soon as I finished my homework, but I couldn't figure out what to say after thinking for a long time. Time flies like running water. It's eleven o'clock. It's time for bed. I had to get into bed like an anxious thief. "
This is the complex psychology of strong students before they are interviewed by reporters. Son, have you ever been nervous in your life?
"When the fishing net is cut, grandma will pick up the shuttle and darn it seriously. At this time, I will definitely sit next to my grandmother and watch her weave a net. See grandma's shuttle in her hand, the speed is dazzling. Seeing my grandmother skillfully weaving a net, my hands itched, so I begged my grandmother to let me try. "
This is a happy time that Lu Jingyan and grandma spent together. Son, should there be such an unforgettable moment in life?
"Today is March 8th Women's Day, a mother's day. I want to give my mother a special gift. I remember reading an article in the newspaper that combing my hair can relax muscles, promote blood circulation and help people's health, so I decided to comb my mother's hair once. Picking up the comb, I gently combed my mother's hair. Comb and comb, and a trace of white hair comes into view. I didn't expect my mother, who was only 35 years old, to have a little white hair mixed in her bright black hair.
Looking at my mother's gray hair, scenes of the past emerged in front of me: it was cold, and my mother often got up in the middle of the night to cover me with a quilt; On the way to school, my mother's exhortation always echoes in my ears; When I come home from school, there are always delicious meals that my mother has already cooked on the table. When doing homework, there is always a tired figure of my mother around me. "
This is the maternal love that Yu Fei found in her mother's white hair. Children, you should also be able to feel the care of your parents from these ordinary little lives, right?
As the saying goes, "a grain of sand sees the world, and half a flower says human feelings." Life is actually a "gold mine". As long as you ponder and chew carefully, those seemingly ordinary and insignificant things can bring us something that shocks our hearts.
Third, the true confession:
(Continue to blindfold the students, let several students pour out their hearts in the background music and tell their deepest feelings, deepest memories and warmest feelings. )
Teacher's language: The teacher believes that every student's heart is not calm at the moment. Let's have a "true confession". Please speak your mind at this moment.
Fourth, the writing of true feelings:
Strike while the iron is hot and let all the students write down the touching things they think.
Teacher's language: please cherish these things you tell, they will become treasures in your memory and wealth on your life path. Let's untie the red scarf and look at the screen. Today, the requirement of our "true feelings composition" is to write a composition around the topic of "treasure" based on the past events that everyone feels most unforgettable, emotional and passionate in class. Requirements: Describe things completely and pay attention to appropriate details.
The second class:
I. Introduction:
Print a big line on the big screen: write your true feelings-your composition will naturally shine.
Teacher's language: This sentence summarizes the requirements of this composition: writing a composition should have true feelings. First of all, our writing must be as real as possible, showing true feelings, moving with true feelings, not making them up; The second article must have real things and real descriptions, if it is touching.
Second, this list is very famous:
Teacher's words: It is gratifying that after the last lesson, quite a few students have achieved or basically achieved these requirements in this composition, and some of them are still very touching. Today, the first section of this composition evaluation class is' Famous on the List'!
Type the words "famous on the list" and a list of names on the screen, and read out the names of these students loudly at the same time. )
Teacher's Language: These students' compositions have one thing in common, that is, they are sincere in feelings and true in description. Among them, two students have the best compositions.
Third, masterpieces appear.
Teacher's language: So, who will be chosen in the second section of today's' masterpiece debut'? "
(sell a little, in the students' guesses and expectations. Qingyin announced: "Please invite Qiangneng to read his masterpiece on stage! Welcome everyone! "
(In the applause of the students, the words "excellent works appear" were printed on the screen, and Qiangneng students began to read his composition. Then, please ask Ding Ling, the second outstanding student, to read her own article. Prepare accompaniment music on the slide, and suggest that students choose to use it to enhance the effect. )
Fourth, everyone's comments:
Teacher's language: Please compare your own articles and talk about the advantages of the above two students' compositions.
(Combined with the students' comments, the camera moves into the "method dialing" link. )
Five, the method of inspiration (famous research)
Teacher's language: There are many ways to express emotions, which are nothing more than direct lyric and indirect lyric.
Take my teacher as an example to feel the true feelings.
Among many ways to write indirect lyric poems, I suggest you learn from famous writers:
-Take Back as an example to express your true feelings: express your feelings in details (express your true feelings by telling a specific thing, and the description of details is the best way to convey your true feelings and impress people. )
Teacher's language: When you feel that there is no big action, there are many languages or you can't describe people and things in detail, you may wish to do it with the help of detailed description. For example, we might as well put people and things under a microscope. The so-called perspective of people and things under the microscope means that when describing people, we should grasp the details such as portraits, language, psychology and movements to see the big picture from the small.
Reveal the inner world and personality characteristics of the characters in detail, so as to achieve the purpose of vivid details and emotional people. People often compare the description of details to the flesh and blood of works, and to the life of art. A gesture, an action, a word and a look can show the feelings of the characters, see through their psychology, reveal their personality, make the characters vivid and receive a little vivid artistic effect.
-Take the description of the scenery on the way to the theater in Lu Xun's "Social Drama" as an example, and feel the expression of true feelings: the scenery is full of affection.
Sixth, help you upgrade:
Teacher's words: Please start with the three methods you have learned before, and revise, add or delete the wrong questions together to make the article more expressive and appealing in emotional expression, thus improving the quality of the whole article.
Seven, celebrity advice
Conclusion: "Being loyal to your heart and life is the first key to open the door to composition. The process of learning composition is also the process of learning to be a man. The so-called writing is to let sincere thoughts and feelings flow from the depths of the soul! " -Li Zhenxi, a special Chinese teacher.
Eight, homework
It is suggested that students guide and revise the guidance according to the methods in class, and revise and improve the article after class.