The comments emphasize encouragement, aiming at stimulating students' inner writing enthusiasm. The following is my collection of composition evaluation's short comments. Welcome to reading.
1) The article is concise and the language is plain and simple.
2) Can lead a reasonable imagination and embody a meaningful philosophy? The writing is fluent and concise, which gives full play to one's imagination. Is it a good one? The article is elegant, fluent and clear-cut, especially the humor of the characters' language, coupled with the use of some subtle words, which invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article.
3) There are many wonderful sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.
4) The story of this article may not be particularly attractive, but it is still a successful work. On the one hand, it depicts the image of the role well, and on the other hand, the language is vivid and rich, which plays a very good role in expressing ideas.
5) What is the article? For the ending, it is concise and memorable.
6) The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and fluent, and the feelings are sincere and touching.
7) By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off. The article is reasonable in imagination, natural and vivid in narration, compact in structure, coherent in connection with nature and prominent in center.
8) The language is concise, the center is clear, the conception is reasonable, and the writing level is clear.
9) It is really commendable to write the inner activities of the characters very vividly and leave a deep impression on people.
10) The center of the article is clear and the structure is complete.
1 1) The full text is hearty, with joy and expectation in one go, and the beginning is sincere and touching.
12) The article is realistic, three-dimensional, readable and interesting. With keen social insight, it reflects the dark side of reality with fairy tales and depicts a series of greedy existence with vivid language, which is profound.
13) This article is based on? For clues, the articles on the right to use are coherent, smooth and natural. At the same time, through the comparison of specific cases before and after, the language of the article is vivid and rich, and it is readable.
14) The selection of materials is novel and unique, and it is refreshing to sweep away pedantry.
15) Although it describes ordinary things, thorough analysis and rational excavation have profoundly highlighted the essence of the incident.
16) Although the incident is small, it reflects a profound truth and has certain universality.
17) the selection of materials from many aspects and angles fully reflects the personality characteristics of the characters, and their images are full.
18) Emotion is too strong to be sentimental, but self-satisfied.
19) Lack of emotional depth failed to convey feelings through the scene, failed to generate feelings from the incident, although hidden in words, failed to dig deeper.
The characteristics of this article can be summarized as kindness, enthusiasm and significance.
2 1)? Fresh, lively, cheerful and clear, the childlike innocence between the lines makes the article have vitality.
22) The article has rich imagination and colorful language. Present to readers
23) The article is concise and clear, and the language is plain and simple.
24) The author's careful observation, rich imagination and the use of anthropomorphic metaphors have aroused readers' interest.
25) It's very distinctive to borrow scenery to express emotion, to hold things and to chant ambition.
26) Based on folklore, the article reasonably imagines and vividly describes and deduces wonderful fairy tales, which are interesting to read.
27) ? It is required to express a philosophy through fictional stories.
This article is a good example? Distinctive features, profound themes, novel ideas and complement each other.
29) Clever use of foreshadowing is a major feature of the article. The first paragraph of the article laid an excellent foundation for the development of the whole story. This idea is very clever and can be used for reference.
30) Psychological depiction is not vivid and concrete enough to effectively express the thoughts, attitudes, likes and dislikes of the characters. Rationality: emphasize the author's point of view repeatedly from different angles and aspects, and the reasoning is thorough and clear.
3 1) quoting classic examples of famous sayings is more convincing and can express the author's point of view more powerfully.
32) The arguments are strong, thorough, reasonable and philosophical.
33) Rich examples, appropriate materials and detailed descriptions are more convincing.
34) Emotions as strong as volcanic eruption and bubbling out can leave a deep impression on readers.
35) Sincere feelings are as strong as mellow wine, which makes people drunk without drinking.
36) Emotions are true and natural, and there is no suspicion of affectation.
37) The mental journey is true and delicate, and the thoughts and attitudes of the characters are unobstructed in front of the readers.
38) The feelings are true and delicate, and the words are touching. It really comes from the author's heart.
39) Seeking the gains and losses of life from self-reflection and revealing the true feelings in confession are powerful and shocking.
40) The language is concise, concise, concise and powerful, and a few words can convey the spirit of the characters.
4 1) The language is fluent, fluent, detailed and vivid; The meaning of this sentence is implicit and euphemistic. After reading, it is like drinking, and the fragrance is endless.
42) The language is lively and humorous, which makes people laugh.
43) the language is too brief, like an outline narrative, but it fails to get an outline. The narrative is dull, dry, dull and lifeless.
44) this is a very original article? The article is cleverly conceived and the language is concise and natural.
45) The works are ingenious in conception, concise and fluent in writing, bold and creative in imagination, novel and peculiar in articles, and fascinating to read.
46) imaginative and innovative. Introduce yourself at the beginning. The following articles are concise in language and humorous in style.
47) The article is not long, but the process is clearly described and the activities of the characters are concrete, real, vivid and interesting. The full text is compact and complete, and the writing is smooth.
48) The plot is lively and interesting, the narrative is clear and complete, and it also shows the author's intelligence and wit, full of family life interest, and his writing is fluent and vivid.
49) Are you good at grasping the characteristics of things and describing them in detail? Emotion permeates between words and characters.
50) The article is very convincing and thought-provoking. In writing, the plot is vivid and the article is ups and downs, which is very instructive to read.
5 1) the theme is concise, profound and powerful, and shocking.
52) The use of rhetorical devices such as accurate and rigorous words, plain and natural language and personification makes the article even more icing on the cake.
53) The main feature of this composition is that it narrates specific details, describes vividly, and uses rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification. At the same time, it is very vivid? Right? Love for ...
54) The theme is serious and the thought is noble.
55) The center is not clear enough and the concept is not clear enough.
56) The theme is obscure, the meaning is vague, and the purpose of writing is unknown.
57) Although there is a central theme, the expression is not strong enough, but it is empty and weak.
58) The theme is not serious enough, and there are still dross in the mind.
59) The plot is tortuous, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curvy beauty of the plot and is fascinating.
60) The plot is strong in faltering, and accidents usually occur, which can attract readers' attention.
6 1) The plot changes irregularly, with occasional suspense, waves and surprises. The development process of the event embodies the author's innovative ideas.
62) The plot develops smoothly, lacking certain ups and downs.
63) The article is well-founded, convincing, highlighting the characters' personality, natural context, clear organization, coordination from beginning to end, and highlighting the central idea.
64) Is the author right? Careful observation, delicate description, vivid language and innovative expression.
65) The full-text language is concise and the structure is natural? The article is well-structured and echoes from beginning to end.
66) The language is humorous, the plot arrangement is tortuous and vivid, and the first and last echoes are clever. Although the length of this article is short, the content is vivid and concrete, the paragraphs are clear and the language is easy to understand.
67) A series of verbs expressing the actions of characters are used accurately and well.
68) This article is written in the first person, which makes? It has great advantages and plays a very good role in shaping characters and expressing centers. It is friendly, natural and credible to read, with clear thinking and lively rhythm.
69) The process of writing this article is concrete, clear and coherent. At the same time, the author adds appropriate psychological description to fully express it?
70) The expression is vivid and vivid, and a few words outline the personality characteristics of the characters at a glance, and the manners and manners of the characters have distinct and unique personalities.
Before and after 7 1), the content is not closely related, some content is too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article.
72) The narrative is short and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.
73) Improper arrangement of details and unclear priorities.
74) The content is mostly outlined by lines, and there is no detailed description based on points.
75) out of touch with the times, the content is too old and outdated.
76) focused, clear center, clear thinking.
77) The views are clear, and the likes and dislikes are clear, which makes people clear at a glance.
78) Directly highlight the theme in content, clear and to the point, without redundancy.
79) The article is narrated in children's language, which is natural and simple, just like the ending of a clear spring, and plays the role of making the finishing point.
80) The article is vivid, sincere and special? The article on the right to use is very infectious and thought-provoking
8 1) Make things clear, use verbs correctly, use metaphors appropriately, and give vivid suggestions, from which you can get education.
82) Simple and natural childlike innocence is reflected in the article, which makes the article exude a fresh and lively atmosphere.
83) This article expresses sincere praise for the beautiful mind with concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language and novel and unique writing style.
There are three main advantages of this paper: this paper can closely follow the requirements of the topic and be written completely? The process is well-structured, focused, concise, fluent in language, and naturally accurate at the beginning and end.
85) The beginning is simple and natural, the structure is clear, and the psychological description is true, which shows the author's good language control ability.
The characteristics of this article can be summarized as cordial, enthusiastic and meaningful.
87) What does the article describe? Fresh and lively, cheerful and clear, childlike innocence between the lines makes the article have vitality.
88) With rich imagination and colorful language, the article will? Present to readers
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