Teaching objectives
1. Understand the artistic styles of writer Sun Li and Lotus Lake School, and improve students' ability to appreciate literary works of various styles.
2. Taste the personalized language of the novel and experience the role of poetic scenery description and vivid dialogue description in portraying characters.
3. Feel the supreme and pure beauty of human nature and the implicit beauty in China traditional culture.
Teaching focus
1. Perceive the whole, sort out the context of the article, and grasp the main content and theme of the novel.
2. Taste the poetic language of the novel and realize the role of scenery description and vivid dialogue in portraying characters.
Teaching difficulties
Feel the supreme and pure beauty of human nature, and appreciate the implicit beauty in China traditional culture.
teaching method
Reading method and discussion method
Teaching time
One class hour
Preview before class
1. Check out the information to understand the style of the writer Sun Li and the school of Lotus Lake.
2. Add appropriate subtitle to each part in concise language.
3. Briefly summarize the story of this article.
4. Who is the hero of this novel?
teaching process
First, import
Show pictures of war scenes. Please summarize it in a few words.
Cruel, terrible, bloody, rivers of blood ...
Second, check the preview and sort out the plot of the novel.
1. Writer's works:
Sun Li, formerly known as Sun Shuxun, is a modern writer from Anping County, Hebei Province. His main works include the novel Fengyun Biography, the novella Tiemu Prequel, the collection of short stories Baiyangdian and Lotus Lake, and the collection of novel essays Baiyangdian Chronicle.
In the "Top 0/00 Novels of China in the Twentieth Century" selected by Asia Weekly in 2000, Sun Li's novels were selected into two, one is Lotus Lake, and the other is Complete Biography of Tiemu.
After Sun Li's death, some people commented on him like this: The last romantic writer in China in the 20th century left us a man with light personality and beautiful words, who completed his life as well as his poetic life. The language of Sun Li's novels is fresh, natural and simple, which is called "poetic novels". He and writers, Cong, Han Yingshan, etc. , has the same characteristics in creative style: rooted in the lotus-like water soil, with natural freshness and simplicity, full of poetry and painting. Known as the "Lotus Lake" school.
2. Three parts of the subtitle:
(1) Husband and wife say goodbye (2) Detective meets enemy (3) Help husband kill enemy.
3. Briefly summarize the story of this article:
Aquatic sister-in-law found that her husband joined the army and said goodbye to her husband. She and several young women went to Mazhuang to visit her husband, but they met an enemy ship on their way home. They hid in Lianhua Lake and inadvertently led the enemy into the ambush circle, creating conditions for guerrillas to ambush the enemy. Since then, they have grown rapidly and become anti-Japanese guerrilla fighters.
4. The hero of the novel:
A group of rural young women, represented by aquatic sister-in-law, describe "group portraits".
Third, study the text.
(1) Read the scenery description in the novel Beautiful as Water, and realize the role of scenery description.
1. Students are free to read the article "The Moon Rises" ... with fresh lotus leaves and lotus fragrance "and feel: What scenery does this text describe? What kind of' picture' did they form?
Bright moonlight, white reed mat, silvery white lake, mist, breeze and lotus fragrance. It shows the regional characteristics of Lianhua Lake and outlines a pure and beautiful realm full of poetry and painting.
2. Draw a proper rhythm, then read it out and read the taste of the poem.
The moon/rising/yard/cool/clean/broken/Lu Mei/wet/just made a summer sleeping mat/woman/sitting/yard/twisting her fingers/silky/Lu Mei/thin/jumping around in her arms.
Reading instruction: Pay attention to the soft and soothing tone to avoid heaviness and impatience.
3. Try to compare a description in Moonlight on the Lotus Pond:
The breeze blew, sending wisps of fragrance, like a faint song on a tall building in the distance.
Moonlight, like running water, falls quietly on this leaf and flower. A thin layer of blue mist floats in the lotus pond. Leaves and flowers seem to have been washed in milk; Like a dream in a sarong.
Same: they all create a hazy, quiet and poetic realm.
Difference: the language of Lotus Lake is simple and fresh, while the language of lotus pond moonlight is more elegant.
4. Thinking: War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression is so harsh, is there such a quiet and beautiful environment? Does this poetic description go against reality? If not, what is his intention?
Guide Association:
"Why do I often have tears in my eyes? Because I love this land deeply! " (If I were a bird)
Intention:
The silvery white world, transparent mist, gentle breeze and fresh lotus fragrance are our beautiful home and our beautiful life here. No one loves such a beautiful home! There are so many beautiful mountains and rivers, how can the Japanese aggressors trample on them wantonly? This is the driving force for all anti-Japanese fighters to fight.
(2) Read and taste the dialogue in The Couple Say Goodbye, and explore the image of the sister-in-law in the water.
1. Look at this dialogue, tell me what impression aquatic sister-in-law left on you, and find out the relevant sentences to prove it.
Diligence and kindness: editing the seat under the moon
Gentle and considerate: "Why did you come back so late today?" Stand up and serve a meal.
Toughness: A woman's nose is a little sour, but she doesn't cry.
Deeply understand the righteousness: "I won't stop you if you go." "They all think you are more open-minded."
2. Read the following sentences and experience the personality characteristics and psychological state of aquatic sister-in-law.
(1) "What's the matter with you?"
Read aloud by changing sentence patterns and experience its different expression effects;
What's the matter with you? -Eager and considerate
What's the matter with you? -the tone is dull (cold)
What happened? -Strange and blunt tone
(2) "You are always positive."
Read aloud with different stress and experience different expression effects;
You are always positive. —— Highlight the positive, showing that aquatic sister-in-law is proud of her husband's behavior.
You are always positive. -A little complaining.
"Go ahead, I won't stop you. What do you do at home? "
Read aloud by changing punctuation marks and experience different expression effects;
You go, I won't stop you. What about home? -understand that the attitude of supporting her husband is clear, prominent and not stopped.
You go, I won't stop you, what should I do at home? -emphasize "what to do at home" and show dependence.
(4) "It is good that you understand the difficulties at home."
Aquatic sister-in-law supports her husband to join the army and kill the enemy. As long as he can understand his difficulties, she will be willing to suffer again and again. It embodies the traditional virtues of hard work, kindness and perseverance of working women in China, represented by Shuisheng Sao.
(5) Read the dialogues of different roles below, and experience the emotional changes in the process of aquatic sister-in-law's answer.
"If you have anything to say, tell me!"
"There is nothing to say. I'm leaving. You must constantly improve, literacy and production. "
"hmm."
"Don't fall behind others in anything!"
"Well, what else?"
"Don't call the enemy to capture the traitor alive. If you catch it, you have to fight hard with him. "
The most important thing is that the woman promised him with tears in her eyes.
"If you have anything to say, tell me!" -in the face of separation from her husband, attachment and reluctance.
"hmm." "Well, what else?" Be strong and don't let your husband worry.
The most important thing is that the woman promised him with tears in her eyes. -"Life is worse than death." For the dignity of individuals and countries, their choice can only be "desperate" with the enemy. At this time, the thoughts and feelings of husband and wife must have experienced an instant storm, lightning and thunder. She promised her husband with tears and showed her loyalty to him.
3. Rewrite the dialogue between couples on the water and act it out, so that the aunt on the water can talk to her husband in another tone and show another personality.
For example:
"I will go to the big army tomorrow."
The woman jerked her head up.
"The county called us for a meeting today. It was decided at the meeting to set up a regional group. I was the first to raise my hand to sign up. "
The woman looked at her husband and said, "You are such a man!" " "
"I am a guerrilla captain in the village and a cadre. It is natural to stand on my head. They also signed up. They dare not come back for fear that their families will drag their tails. "
"You go, I won't stop you, I'll go with you!"
"We're going to play devil, what are you doing a woman? No! "
"Why not? Women can also fight devils! "
"The team won't agree."
"I'll find the captain."
(3) Read a "Yi Fu" dialogue and experience the different personality characteristics of different characters.
1. Read aloud in different roles and experience the roles.
"I heard that they are still here. I don't drag my tail, but I forgot a dress. "
-I obviously miss my husband, but I'm embarrassed to say it directly, so I made an excuse to express my feelings euphemistically.
I have something important to say to him.
-I speak very implicitly, not to say that I miss my husband, but to make excuses and say something important.
"Listen to him, the devil should be based on the same mouth ..."
-Mrs. Shui Sheng's words remind them that the road is unsafe, which foreshadows the following, showing her cautious and steady character and meticulous consideration of problems.
"Where to touch so skillfully? Let's go and come back soon. "
I can see that she is eager to explore her husband, and she speaks quickly and is a bit reckless.
"I didn't want to go, but my mother-in-law insisted that I go and see him again. What's the point! "
-The eldest sister-in-law is shy. "Still hiding half her face behind her guitar from us" is true or not.
2. Summary:
Just a few words of dialogue, hidden but not exposed, thought-provoking, and several vivid characters vividly appear on the paper. Their feelings of shyness and lingering can be seen, which fully shows the reserved and restrained women in China.
3. Thinking: From the perspective of full text expression, what is the main function of this dialogue description?
Promote the development of the story.
(4) Summary:
Poetic environment-beautiful scenery description like water, creating a quiet and pure artistic conception;
Desalinate the plot-simple and concise dialogue description, dilute the atmosphere of war;
The characters are vague-no names, no portraits. Implicit personality and emotion.
The artistic style of "Lotus School" is the perfect unity of prose style, poetic artistic conception, elegant and agile poetic image and simple and fresh earthy atmosphere.
Fourth, homework
1. Read several other scenery descriptions in the text carefully and realize its function.
Please add a fifth woman and show her personality characteristics different from the original characters in one or two paragraphs.