Notes on the Side of the Eriduo Snow Peak:
When we read Chang Yao’s short poem "The Side of the Eriduo Snow Peak", we felt a sense of freshness and joy that we had not seen for a long time. , because it not only depicts the danger and loneliness of conquest, but also writes about the magnificence and joy of conquest. It is a symphony of strength and beauty, a hymn of conquerors.
The first is to choose an inclusive moment to express the theme of conquering nature and exalting humanity. The author does not describe the process of rock climbing, but selects the moment when the climb reaches the highest point. Through the description of the environment and the description of the climber's body and spirit, he expresses the theme of conquering nature and transcending himself. It is full of tension and explosive power and can arouse a wide range of associations and thoughts. Imagine.
The second is the rich imagery, majestic artistic conception and strong appeal. The poem selects "thin wall", "snow of Eriduo", "sun", "mountain and sea", "gravel", "brown mountain abyss", "crack", "rusty rock wall", "eagle or snow leopard" ”, “Spider”, “Forehead”, “Knuckles”, “Blood Drops”.
Images such as "thousand-layer palm soles" are complete in macro and detail, combining movement and stillness, the characters are integrated, and the colors are gorgeous, just like a long and magnificent oil painting scroll, which makes you feel dizzy. The majestic artistic conception can make ordinary people The third is to use a variety of expression techniques and strong expressiveness. "The sun that has been wandering towards the snow of Eriduo for a long time is leaping decisively into the infinite gravitational / mountains and sea /." The gravel slides from time to time / triggering a roar from top to bottom in the brown abyss / like the distant shouts of the military." The environment is written in six lines, using a combination of dynamic and static, audio and visual writing.
Like a military "The distant cry of killing" is rendered in the form of metaphor to highlight the thrilling sound. The purpose of writing about the environment is to express the magnificence of nature and the dangers of rock climbing, and to highlight the sublimity of rock climbing and the greatness of conquest.
It expresses the hardship of rock climbing extremely vividly, which makes the poem more masculine and beautiful. Ha/I really long for an eagle or snow leopard to be with me/on the rusty rock wall/but there is a pitifully small spider/to silently enjoy the comfort given by nature with me. This five-line poem uses a combination of virtual and factual writing.
Showing passionate pride, the "spider" is insignificant, but it is better than nothing, one big and one small, conveying richer emotions.
Summary:
"The Side of the Snowy Peak of Eriduo" is a new poem that expresses the theme of conquest and is quite masculine. The aesthetic value and good inspirational effect.