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The wind blows the leaves, humming ancient songs, and shuttles through the smoky dreams. A waterfall as beautiful as China, screaming and rushing down from the top of the mountain, is like a silver dragon galloping across the world. "Thousands of waterfalls rushed forward one after another, and thundered in thousands of valleys, spinning stones". With the echo of the long dragons, the clouds washed away, collided with the mysterious turtle-shaped rocks and emerged, blending with the surrounding sea of clouds. That's the fairy skirt around you, dancing 3 thousand illusions; It is the palm of the elf touching you, which is full of thoughts; It's the angel's wings that protect you and reflect colorful things. "Qingxi Yingshanhong." Looking up at the splendor of Wan Li; Bow your head in a silk satin, twine in purples and wheatgrass. Layers of flowers are like tides, dragging green waves like waves. It seems that the gods are painting a picturesque landscape, and people are roaming in a world of scrolls; Just like a fairy wearing a piece of brocade, flowers follow people. Layers of cliffs and winding corridors. The waterfall is only two feet away from people, just like a fringed white jade bead curtain that gently covers half a roll; It's like a long-eared golden curtain. Water drops and white jade fall on your face, which is the kiss of an invisible elf; The swaying sound waves echoed in this corridor, which was the gentle song of an unknown monster. The mountain is full of fog, like smoke in a dream, as if the goddess descended from the sky and danced on the clouds, leaving the shadow of clothes; If it is true, it is like a silver dragon galloping in the sea of clouds, with three or four beautiful clothes and a rainbow girl. Neons and waterfalls outside the promenade set each other off, showing a charming and breathtaking beauty. In this world, there are only splash-ink landscapes. Who else can think of home?
Don't look at your hometown on the homesickness platform, and you can't go back to the Jiuqu Corridor.
Appreciate:
A very good essay, the author vividly presents the natural scenery in front of us by using gorgeous rhetoric and vivid writing techniques, and uses descriptions such as "fairy", "silver dragon", "monster" and "goddess", which looks interesting.
Excerpts and Appreciation of American Literature (2) Mom, that silent love
When I was in the fourth grade, my father went out to work in Zhejiang. His work is very tiring. Every time he calls home, he asks my mother to go to his place to cook for him. Mom can't leave our three brothers and sisters who still live in their hometown, and can't leave her poultry and fields ... My father is ill, so my mother has to sell the pig, take care of everything at home and prepare to find him.
My mother took all my brothers and sisters and left me alone at home.
Mom left, and I began to regret it. I didn't see them off that day because I was studying at school.
That day, I cried very sadly. That class is Chinese. I have taught several classes. I can't remember clearly. I couldn't listen to what the teacher said at all, so I secretly cried there. Fortunately, the teacher asked me to read the text that day, and I kept crying in my seat. No one saw it, because I stood the book and blocked others' sight with the standing book.
How many times, I want to get up from my seat and ask the teacher to let me out so that I can go out and see my mother who is leaving. But after all, there is no firm courage. I had to wait until class was over, and I was the only one still crying in my seat.
That class seems to have lasted for a long time.
After class, my friend came to ask me out to play. I didn't want anyone to know that I had cried, so I buried my head and refused to say "I don't want to go". My friend had no choice but to walk away ... sitting alone in my seat, my tears kept flowing like a stream.
At noon, I was very sad, but I saw a familiar figure. That's right! It's mom! -My mother! -Mom didn't go! I ran out of the classroom excitedly and almost fell down in the aisle. Mother smiled, smiling gently and lovingly. Her eyes were bloodshot, her eyelids were swollen, and a few strands of silver were added to her head. I know my mother cried, too. I know why my mother is crying.
Mom said, "The bus is too crowded. The driver said that we can leave tomorrow."
Thank god, my mother is back, and I can stay with my mother for another night!
I haven't left my mother since I was six years old. I never thought I would leave my mother, but my mother will leave eventually.
Mom left and came back one day. This is not a permanent separation. I've been comforting myself like this.
The next day, my mother really left, and I really didn't cry anymore.
I'm always a little unaccustomed to my mother's departure. I often see other children's mothers coming to school to deliver things, and my nose is sore. Sometimes at my cousin's house, I call my cousin my mother.
Every time my mother calls home, I always cry. At that time, my mother called my neighbor's house, and the neighbor came to school and asked me to answer the phone. On the way, I said to myself: Don't cry when you talk, lest others see it badly. But I didn't answer the phone until my mother asked me something about my life and hurried to work. I was crying quietly, so that when I was talking to my father, I didn't hear what he was saying for a long time.
After hanging up the phone in a hurry, I went back to the classroom and recalled the days when my mother was at home.
Appreciate:
This composition was compiled after learning "The Back". "Back" allows children to feel their father's love more deeply from a more delicate perspective. Because of this, many students also write their compositions from the perspective of fatherly love and maternal love.
The little author's mother went out, leaving only underage children. In the process of experiencing that separation, and the bitterness of missing after that separation, the child's feelings are particularly profound. Usually, she doesn't have this opportunity, or condition. Today, learning the text and completing the composition have reached an objective condition. As a result, the child's feelings are vented like this!
The good thing about this composition is that it doesn't imitate "The Back" deliberately, but writes real feelings with its own real experience.
Excerpts and Appreciation of American Literature (3) Turning Point
Taste it and say: vultures belong to the same family, called falcons, and hunt in the wild every day. In the year of drought, plants and trees withered, roe deer and rabbits fought for their lives, and flocks of falcons were exhausted. Or fight the sky, migrate to the HarmonyOS system, and seek the top of the mountain; Or put away your wings and feathers, jump on the dust and settle for carrion. The former is proud of the eagle, while the latter is ashamed of the vulture.
I heard here that the year of drought was also a turning point for the Falcon family. At this time, your ambition is different, and your future is different. Where to belong and what to do.
Everything in the world, the turning point of Austria is not only here, but also everywhere. Have you ever seen a clear spring flowing in a big stone? It's also the turn of spring. Choose to retire, hide in the shade of stone, hide in the forest, but not famous in the world, long-term decay will not heal; Those who choose to enter, fearless when encountering obstacles, repeatedly hit millions of times, but became a ravine and stopped the boat. Did you see the wind blocking the cliff? The wind of this turn is also. Those who choose to avoid are scattered outside the mountain, invisible for a while and disappearing for a while; Those who choose to move forward will continue to grind for hundreds of billions of years, and it will be a day covered with red deserts and flying sand. However, the shape of things depends on the turning point.
On the other hand, in the long river of history, there is no choice but to turn around. Priscilla's action and Sun Shuaio's official position are all due to the suffering of adversity. However, moving away from the heart of history, determined but not easy, tortured but not discouraged, resolutely chose life under heavy humiliation, and finally there was a history of swan song and no rhyme, which made later scholars lament. There is also the ambition of the marquis of Wu, who inherited the virtues of the first emperor, devoted himself to serving the country, and pointed his sword at the Central Plains. Although the plan is for the street pavilion, I will not choose to retreat, then set off four times, and finally make a name for myself and lament for the ages.
From this point of view, most people who transfer are trapped. (m.taiks.com) Only those who are ambitious and never give up can become outstanding people. Small setbacks come back, and they can't be counted for thousands of years, but those who left their names are not there! It is known that there will be people who fall into the dust and mud, those who choose to die, and those who choose to rise, and they will gain enough; When an ape climbed to the cliff, someone must have accidentally broken his arm. People who lose confidence will die, and those who struggle will gain magical skills. People are bound to stumble in the wind and rain, and those who choose a quiet life will find a hole to live in seclusion for life; If you choose to stand proudly, you will walk silently, wait for the rainbow to be picturesque, and then climb the flat road and soak in the breeze. Don't bend over to fight rice. Tao Qian chose to retire and gave up his glory, so "Back to Xi" was told through the ages; Facing the sword, spear and halberd without fear, Wen Tianxiang chose to die and abandon his official position. This is a burning eye and a heart that shines forever.
Yu Yu is sighing: Everyone has his own will and can't impose it; However, those who spread benevolence and righteousness to the whole world and to future generations must be people who are not afraid of difficulties and are determined to be angry!
Appreciate:
Judging from the specific content and writing skills, this article can be described as a classic, with an extraordinary opening; It is of far-reaching significance to argue with "ambition"; Digging is not shallow; Cleverly close the beam, see the topic. "As a modern person, classical Chinese looks back at the ancients with admiration and inherits the spirit of the ancients." The author of this article, Beijing examinee Geng Liang, said. All those who study science have such an interest. Are they all-rounders? "geek"?