In daily study, work and life, when it comes to comments, everyone is certainly familiar. Notes refer to words used for explanation or explanation. How much do you know about reviews? The following is my collection of landscape composition evaluation, welcome to read the collection.
Composition evaluation 1 1, the article echoes from beginning to end, the sentences are concise, hit the nail on the head, and point out the theme. Through the description of the scenery of the four seasons, explain the beauty of xx and take care of the beginning. It is best to pay attention to the clear level of paragraphs.
The scenery of the four seasons in 2.xx is really beautiful. Your exercises are clear and informative, and your words are particularly vivid and accurate.
The young author has fresh writing ideas, vivid description and beautiful writing style. He firmly around the word "green", according to the structure of "total score" to describe the beauty of xx.
4. Rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification are properly used in this paper, so that the green of xx in different seasons is full of vitality and fragrance.
5. The author grasped the unique scenery of xx in spring, and wrote the beauty of xx correctly and aptly by using figurative rhetoric. At the same time, he praised the hard-working gardener, the teacher, and sublimated the theme of the article.
6. The little author observes carefully, describes vividly and meticulously, and the vivid metaphor is personified, which makes people feel immersive after reading, and also makes the author's thoughts and feelings for "xx" more natural and full.
7. The author can introduce his lovely xx to readers from the school gate to the teaching area (the giant flower bed of the teaching building) to the activity area (the big playground) in the order of orientation, which is clear, selective and focused, and naturally reflects the vibrant atmosphere of the school.
8. The author combines the description of the scenery with the expression of feelings. The feelings are in the scenery, and the whole text highlights the incomparable love for xx between the lines. The author tries to show a beautiful xx in front of people by depicting beautiful fountains, grassy playgrounds and spacious and bright classrooms.
9. The little author vividly described the morning color of xx with the moving point observation method, and the lines were filled with the little author's love for xx and nature.
10, the article uses rich imagination, personification metaphor and other rhetorical devices to describe, making the language fluent and beautiful and the article vivid and realistic.
1 1. Throughout the whole article, the article is fresh and lively in style, vivid in description and combined with news. From the morning fog nearby to the sunrise in the distance, from the leaves in the air to the grass on the ground, from poplar trees to free-flying birds, the organization is clear and distinct, making people feel like they are in the scene.
12, the little author wrote to his familiar place-school, skillfully combining the writing of scenery with the writing of people. There are people in the scenery, and the scenery sets people off.
13, the author vividly and meticulously describes the scenery, grasps the characteristics of color, appearance and fragrance, and uses various techniques such as metaphor and personification to make people feel the beauty of autumn everywhere.
14, this article is concise and vivid, and the content is really interesting. There are many places in the article that reflect the careful observation of the little author at ordinary times, especially in various interesting life scenes describing xx, which makes people feel the joy of xx everywhere and feel immersive when reading it.
15, the whole article is colorful and full of vitality. Between the lines, through the description of xx's spring, summer, autumn and winter, the author expresses his love for xx's childhood life.
16. In your pen, the scenery of xx in winter is described in detail and the language is fluent. The use of metaphor personification in this paper adds vividness and interest to the composition. If we can put the description of characters' activities in such a landscape, the composition will be more colorful!
17. In your pen, the scenery of xx is so beautiful and moving, and the activities are so colorful. I love you too, beautiful xx.
18. By describing the scenery of xx, the author can say that he expressed his love for the school through the scenery, with fluent sentences and clear center.
19, this article is beautifully written and lyrical, and it is a beautiful ode to childhood life. With lyrical style, the author vividly depicts the scenery of the four seasons in the corner of xx and deeply recalls the wonderful childhood life spent there.
20. This paper takes the "total score" as the structure, and describes the beautiful scenery of the four seasons in xx by extracting key elements such as "big trees, flowers and students". It is a good landscape writing exercise with distinct levels and clear organization.
2 1, between the lines, the article reveals the love for xx, and skillfully uses dynamic stereoscopic perception to make xx melt in all seasons. As time goes on, it shows movement and vitality. In addition, the little author has always been pregnant with a heart of constantly exploring the unknown, a desire for knowledge and a love for the motherland, which makes every reader feel gratified.
22. Just like a little painter, you painted the beautiful scenery of your xx for everyone. The four seasons are different and the scenery is different. Short words show your love for xx, and the scenes blend. Great!
23. Your composition and scenery are in harmony, and between the lines is your love for xx. Finally, say out loud and express the main idea: "Love xx, great!" Beautiful language, a large number of rhetorical devices such as personification, vividly depicts the four seasons scenery of xx.
24. The author wrote about the busyness and enrichment of xx morning and the beauty of the scenery in xx morning. At the end, "a year's plan lies in spring, and a day's plan lies in morning." On this beautiful morning, we embarked on the journey of life, which expressed the author's good wish to cherish the good times and take the road of life well.
25. The scenery of the four seasons in XX is really beautiful. Your practice is clear and rich in content, and your words are particularly vivid and accurate.
26, vivid and concrete, people can't help but let go of the hand roll. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing.
27. The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.
28. For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene is naturally integrated. The full text is fresh and elegant, kind and euphemistic, simple and not vulgar, and it is worth learning.
29. The full text is clear, vivid and compact, and interesting. This article is lyrical in narration. The ending focuses on expressing emotions, giving consideration to the beginning and summarizing the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.
30. The article is meticulous, orderly and vivid, which is a masterpiece. The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible. The details are quite ingenious. Extremely rich in skills.
3 1, the full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.
32. The article has clear clues, prominent themes and close development. The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read and reluctant to let go.
33. I used a scene metaphor at the beginning, which is quite innovative; Flashback the beginning and render the artistic conception.
34. The beginning of the article is novel and serves as a warning. Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.
This article can read fresh and interesting language and describe things about …. Between the lines, it is full of childlike interest in childhood, and laughter is endless, which is a masterpiece. Appropriate details and the combination of reality and reality are two characteristics, and … are richer and more vivid.
36, make full use of dynamic and static writing, supplemented by metaphor, personification and other techniques, through vivid language description, so that readers seem to be in a dream. The praise of the characters at the end is sincere and touching.
37. Pay attention to specific things and develop appropriate imagination. This is success. The article melts into the scenery, describes the scenery while expressing emotions, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid.
The landscape composition evaluation is 2 1, the writing style is natural and fresh, many metaphors are used properly, and the character "xxx" is full of beauty.
2. Appreciate the unique feeling of spring in delicate writing, but it is very poetic.
Through my careful observation and vivid description, I turned this moment into eternity.
4. The use of beautiful words makes spring more full and full.
5. The reading of the article is closely related to the feeling, and the case describes the action. The beginning touches people's hearts and has real feelings.
6. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, exciting and exciting.
7. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions, and it is interesting to read. A large number of spoken English in life is used to make the article more natural and close to the people. The ending is clear and meaningful.
8. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language.
9. Between the lines, fresh life breath and children's interest are revealed. According to the sequence of events, the article describes the events. The language is fluent and the level is clear, which seems to be enjoyable from beginning to end.
10, the article is full of respect and gratitude from beginning to end, and it is deeply touching. This is the shocking force of this article. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, full of fun, which makes people fondle it. The author is ingenious in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing. The language is lively and interesting. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
1 1. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a conscientious person in life. The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is really interesting and well written.
12, with fluent full-text language and free and easy writing, is a relatively successful work.
13, the beginning of the article is concise and appropriate, and the environmental description sets off the emotions of the characters, which is very artistic. Miscellaneous but not chaotic, can be detailed and appropriate, and the focus is prominent. The ending is just right, the center is clear, the language is concise and profound, and it is intriguing.
14, starting with feelings and ending with feelings. In this way, the article is coordinated from beginning to end, and the theme of the article is repeated, which is very infectious and full of passion. The beginning is concise, the focus is prominent, the details are appropriate, and the content is specific.
15, the article fully and appropriately renders the atmosphere and gives a delicate and vivid description of the key points of the article. High-minded, impressive and practical, it contains simple and profound philosophy, which is refreshing and exciting.
The landscape composition evaluation 3 1 is unreasonable and full of loopholes, which cannot reflect the truth of life.
2. The plot is ups and downs, and the transformation is too fast and not coherent enough.
3. The metaphor is vivid, the ontology is similar to the metaphor, and the interest and persuasiveness of the article are greatly enhanced.
4. Properly use the method of comparison and comparison to prove the center of the article through the disparity and difference between things.
Lose no time to explain the characteristics of things in many ways with parallelism, which not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.
6. Using personification skillfully, the images in the text have the characteristics of human behavior, human thoughts and feelings, and reflect the spiritual course of the protagonist in the text from the side.
7, the material selection is too popular, unrepresentative, old themes and old ideas, bland.
8. Although the events with certain narrative value in life are selected, the hidden truth of the events cannot be deeply reflected due to incomplete analysis and excavation.
9. The materials are plain, too old, vulgar, simple and naive, and there is no new idea, so it is difficult to deeply reflect the authenticity of life.
10, failed to reflect the truth through small things, and the expression of "seeing the big with small things" was not skilled enough.
1 1. lacks multi-angle description of the characters, and only chooses a narrow theme, showing the one-sided personality characteristics of the characters.
12, able to choose typical themes in life, and the events are more representative.
13, the material selection is novel and unique, not mediocre, and it is refreshing to sweep away pedantry and vulgarity.
14, although it describes ordinary things, but the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the rational excavation is in-depth, highlighting the essence of the incident.
15, although the incident is small, it reflects a deeper truth and has certain universality.
16, the selection of materials from many aspects and angles fully reflects the personality characteristics of the characters, and the characters are full of personality.
17, the language is simple, the feelings are dull and not deep enough.
18, the feelings are too strong, and it seems that it is not very emotional. On the contrary, it is a gesture and self-love.
19, lack of depth of emotion, no scene to convey feelings, no feelings created from events, although feelings are hidden in words, but failed to dig deep.
20. Psychological depiction is not vivid enough to effectively express the thoughts, attitudes, likes and dislikes of the characters. Rationality: repeatedly emphasize the author's point of view from different angles and aspects, demonstrate thoroughly and have clear ideas.
The fourth chapter of composition evaluation 1, the content is dry like dead leaves in autumn, how can people be willing to read it? Read more extracurricular books to ensure that the dead leaves turn green again next spring.
There are many typos like a hornet's nest. I am already a fourth-grade student. How to use pinyin instead of words that can't be written? Is your dictionary sleeping?
3. The author can introduce his lovely xx to readers in the order of orientation, from the teaching area (the giant flower bed of the teaching building) to the sports area (the big playground) at the school gate, which is distinct, selective and focused, and naturally reflects the vibrant atmosphere of the school.
4. The author combines the description of the scenery with the expression of feelings, and the scenery is seamless, showing his incomparable love for xx between the lines of pen and ink. The author focuses on describing the beautiful fountain, the grassy playground and the spacious and bright classroom, so that a beautiful xx can be presented to people.
5. With fresh thoughts, vivid appearance and beautiful writing style, the young author firmly revolves around a green character and shapes the beauty of xx according to the overall layout of the score.
6. Rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification are properly used in this paper, which makes the green vitality of xx in different seasons full of hope and fragrance.
7. The author captures the unique scenery of xx in spring, writes the beauty of xx accurately and aptly by using the rhetorical devices of metaphor, and at the same time, gently praises the hardworking gardener and teacher, and sublimates the theme of the article.
8. The careful investigation of the young author, vivid and meticulous appearance and vivid metaphor personification make people feel immersive after reading it, and also make the author's mind and feelings like xx more natural and full.
9. Throughout the article, the style of the article is fresh and vivid, the appearance is vivid, and the news is combined. From the morning fog nearby to the sunrise in the distance, from the leaves in the air to the grass on the ground, from poplar trees to free-flying birds, the layers are distinct and distinct, making people feel as if they are in the air.
10, the little author used the essentials of moving point inspection to hold the morning color of xx vividly, and the lines were filled with the little author's love for xx and nature.
1 1. With the help of rich imagination, the article uses rhetorical devices such as personification metaphor to portray, making the language fluent and beautiful and the article vivid.
12 and xx are really beautiful. Your exercises are clear in level and rich in content, and your words are particularly vivid and accurate.
13, the little author wrote about the local school he was familiar with, which combined the scenery and people wonderfully. There are people in the scenery, and the scenery sets people off.
14. In your pen, the scenery of xx in winter is meticulous and the language is fluent. The use of metaphor and personification rhetoric increases the vividness and significance of the article. If you can put the action of the characters into such a scene, the composition will be more colorful!
15. In your pen, the scenery of xx is so beautiful and moving, and the sports are so colorful. I love you too, beautiful xx.
16 The author expressed his love for the school through the scenery of xx itself, which is clear to the central authorities.
17, the author vividly and meticulously grasped the color, shape, fragrance and other characteristics of the landscape, and used various techniques such as metaphor and personification to make people feel the beauty of autumn everywhere.
18, this article is concise and vivid, and the content is really interesting. There are many places in the article that reflect the careful investigation of the little author at ordinary times, which is particularly remarkable in various interesting survival scenes of modeling xx, which makes people feel the joy of xx everywhere and feel immersive when reading it.
19, the whole article is colorful and full of vitality. Between the lines, through the appearance of xx in spring, summer, autumn and winter, the author expresses his love for xx's childhood survival.
20. The article reveals the love for xx between the lines, and wonderfully uses the dynamic stereoscopic perception, which makes xx melt into the fourth order of that year. As time goes on, it shows movement and vitality. There are also some young authors who are constantly exploring the unknown, eager for knowledge and loving their motherland, which makes every reader very happy.
2 1, you are like a little painter, painting the beautiful scenery of your xx for everyone to see. The four orders are different, the scenery is different, and the short pen and ink circulation exposes your love for xx, which is great!
22. Your composition and scenery are in harmony, and between the lines is your love for xx. Finally, speak your mind directly and express your main idea: love xx, very good! Beautiful language and a large number of rhetorical devices such as personification vividly show the fourth-order landscape of xx.
23. The author wrote about the busyness and enrichment of xx morning, and also wrote about the beautiful scenery of xx morning. A year's plan lies in spring, and a day's plan lies in morning. On this beautiful morning, we embarked on the journey of life, expressing the author's good wishes to cherish the good times and take a good life path.
24. This article is beautifully written and expressive, and it is a beautiful ode to childhood survival. With expressive style, the author vividly describes the four-sequence scenery in the corner of xx, and deeply recalls the wonderful childhood life spent there.
25. Based on the overall structure of the total score, this paper extracts the key elements of xx, such as trees, flowers, inkstones, etc., which greatly shapes the fourth-order beauty of xx and is a good landscape writing exercise.
26. The scenery of the fourth order in XX is really beautiful. Your exercises are clear in level and rich in content, and your words are particularly vivid and accurate.
27. The full text is clear, vivid and compact, and the viewpoints are meaningful. The article expresses its feelings while narrating. Meet at the end to express emotions, which not only takes care of the beginning but also summarizes the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, strike while the iron is hot.
28. The article is detailed, orderly, vivid and meticulous, which is a masterpiece. The content of the article is fresh, the layout is fair, smooth and coherent, and naturally accessible. The details are quite ingenious. Extremely rich in skills.
29. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is exquisite and tortuous, which seems to bring the reader into a happy paradise and make people very happy. The full text is easy to understand and meaningful.
30, vivid and meticulous, people can't help but let go of the hand roll. At the end of the article, it is both topical and intriguing.
3 1, the beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, detailed and appropriate.
32. Dealing with the appearance of the scene, the language is concise and accurate, while daydreaming is touching the scene and the scene is naturally integrated. The full text is fresh and elegant, close and euphemistic, simple and not vulgar, which is worth learning.
33. The article has clear clues, prominent themes and is closely focused. The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read and reluctant to let go.
34. It is quite innovative to use the scene metaphor at the beginning; Flashback the beginning and render the artistic conception.
35. The beginning of the article is fresh and has the effect of pulling one hair and moving the whole body. Let readers have an impression on the characters as soon as they meet. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.
36. The content of this article is vivid, and it feels like having just eaten a piece of fresh milk cake, with endless aftertaste.
37. The article can read fresh and interesting language and the appearance of things. Between the lines, a full childhood is really childlike and full of laughter, which is a masterpiece. Appropriate details and the combination of reality and reality are two characteristics, which are richer in content and reborn.
38. Make full use of the writing method of news combination, supplemented by metaphor, personification and other techniques, and make readers feel as if they are in a fantasy through vivid language description. The praise of the characters at the end is sincere and touching.
39. Your homework is no longer like boiled water. It's a little sweet now. Keep working hard and I will cheer for you!
40, the sentence is not very smooth, like my cousin's face covered with small pimples, reading makes me uncomfortable.
4 1, the focus is not very prominent, just like a water fight, the water splashed everywhere, but the target of the attack could not be found.
42. The handwriting is flying like a dragon and a phoenix. Maybe you want to be a cursive calligrapher?
43. There are too many typos. Just like sesame seeds on sesame cakes, can we try to photograph sesame seeds on sesame cakes?
44. The handwriting is crowded. Aren't you afraid to heat them?
45. The phenomenon of losing words is serious. I wonder if you often break your umbrella in rainy days?
46. From the outside to the inside, this paper introduces the features of the novel. Observe orderly and carefully. The writing is accurate and vivid, arousing many senses, and the content is true and concrete.
47. Write first, then write, then write, and finally write. How clear the writing idea is and how delicate the description is. You see, with appropriate metaphor, vivid and vivid, highlighting the beauty of spring. In addition, the scene is vividly written, highlighting a happy word, which is beautiful, affectionate and wonderful.
48. Actions are rarely written, like branches in autumn, which have no leaves.
49. Your sentence is a dead goldfish in a jar, not alive at all.
Punctuation is polite, like a smooth floor tile.
5 1, full of life, accurate and vivid words and sentences.
52. When describing the scenery, I wrote my own experience and expressed my inner feelings. For example, the surprise of finding the first grass sprouting, the excitement of seeing swallows nesting under their own eaves, the admiration of smelling the fragrance of peach blossoms, and the joy of hearing the teacher announce the spring outing are all inner feelings. While describing the scenery, properly expressing inner feelings and even associations will make the practice more vivid and real, and will also touch others.
53. Write what you see, hear, smell and feel about the beauty of spring into your sports, and make your sports as vivid and beautiful as spring!
Flying kites is children's favorite activity, and the fun is self-evident. Through detailed description, the colorful flying scenes of kites in the sky are displayed.
55. After watching your exercises, we can see a lovely and flawless childlike innocence.
56. Grasp the different characteristics of spring, such as grass, trees and flowers, and paint a vibrant scene of spring in a new order, reflecting my heartfelt joy.
57. Writing a scene captures the characteristics of the scene, describes the blending of the scene, from far to near, from surface to point, and handles it in an orderly way. The articles written are more coherent, and the scenes have different shapes and colors, which captures the modeling characteristics.
58. In your pen, it looks like a small garden, so full of vitality, and its description is carried out in order, which is easy to read.
There are 5 essays on landscape evaluation 1. The article is not long, but it describes the process clearly, and the actions of the characters are meticulous, real, vivid and interesting. The full-text layout is compact and complete, and the writing is smooth.
2. The plot is lively and interesting, the narrative is clear and complete, and it also shows the author's wisdom and alertness, full of family survival interest, and the writing is smooth and vivid.
Although it is a trivial matter, the author's appearance is vivid, and the ending is an indispensable stroke, which highlights the theme of the article.
4. Realistic detail description, on the contrary, shows the inner world of the characters in an interesting way, which is the success of this paper.
5, the article selection is novel, ... This matter, the market survival breath is strong, full of children's interest. Reading makes people happy and comfortable.
6. This article is based on real life, which is appropriate, innovative, clear, natural, interesting and readable.
7. The full text is lively, the language is fresh, and it is always humorous. Reading is interesting.
8. The vivid and meticulous description of … is the natural feature of this article, which also shows the author's keen and meticulous investigation. This is one of the main factors for the success of this article.
9. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and fresh, and the layout is peculiar.
10, this article is a relatively mature narrative work, which shows the whole process of implementation with accurate and fluent language, ups and downs and full of interest. The little author inspects carefully and narrates in an orderly way, which can get to the point of the appearance of the characters and is meticulous and comprehensive. This article shows that it is interesting to read.
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