The setting of the moon, residual stars, dew and skylight all indicate that the poet started early.
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Luochuan zaofa
Wang Youding (Qing)
The autumn moon sets at dawn, and the drums stop at Chengtou. The Yangtze River flows far away and dreams, but stirs the stars in the short term.
Wet seagulls are dressed in white, and wild geese in the sky are green. Looking back, Serene is an isolated pavilion.
Luoshan Luochuan is located ten miles north of Ji 'an County, Jiangxi Province, and faces Ganjiang River in the south.
Make an appreciative comment
(1) This is a poem about the feeling of parting. In the last sentence, the author doesn't write about his loneliness, nor does he write about a lonely boat, but says that Luosi Mountain is like a lonely pavilion. The advantages of this writing are:
The Lonely Pavilion vividly outlines the shape of Luoshan Mountain, which complements the mountain scenery of Luochuan that looks like a snail from a distance and a pavilion from a distance.
② Personalize Luoshan, and write the poet's divorce by writing his loneliness, which can highlight the poet's lonely feelings.
(3) "Pavilion" can remind people of the farewell of roadside pavilions, vividly writing the meaning of the poet's farewell in Luoshan and the poet's attachment to Luoshan.
(2) This poem uses a variety of expressive techniques, such as the combination of reality and fiction.
(1) The reality and the reality coexist, and the feelings are in the scene (or the scene melts). The author blends his loneliness of leaving early and his attachment to Luoshan into images such as "Moon", "Autumn Mountain", "Broken Star" and "Lonely Pavilion", which makes the emotion of the poem sincere and touching.
(2) As Zhuan Xu wrote, the ever-flowing Ganjiang River seems to flow from one dream to another, and a short stroke seems to poke the reflection of the remaining starlight in the water. River water and wooden paddles are tangible entities, while dreams and stars are illusory and floating, which expands the artistic conception of poetry and brings infinite imagination.
Brief introduction of the author
Wang You was a great essayist and poet in the late Ming and early Qing Dynasties. The word Yu Yi, Yan, was born in Nanchang, Jiangxi, and his ancestral home was in Gong Sheng. He worked under Shi Kefa and died in the Ming Dynasty, but he didn't become an official. He entertains himself with poems every day. In the evening, stay in the West Lake Monastery in central Zhejiang. Apollo's writing style is also famous for its unique style. He is the author of "Four Photos Hall Collection".