Hehe, this poem has many problems, but the reward of 5 points is too little.
1: I don't know what the whole poem is expressing, but I just don't know what to say!
2. The sentence is unreasonable:
Wild geese smoke alone-the word "Sui" is puzzling.
Whitebait dives into deep water. -I don't know what this sentence means, what role does it play in the whole poem?
How can the sea of hearts tolerate the destruction of the world? -"The Fallen World" won't do.
Capriciously chop the boat several times. -I don't understand "volatilization". What does the word "chop" mean when used here?
A glass of turbid wine reflects Dan Xin, which is puzzling.
Leng Yue is not as clear as Qingming. -"Qingming" ambiguous. Is it Tomb-Sweeping Day or the wee hours?
Last night, I didn't know the flowers would wither.
The lingering fragrance can also wrap around the three beams. -You mean the flowers? "Around the Three Beams" won't do either!
Generally speaking, this poem is difficult to understand. What does the author want to say? The brushwork is not clearly expressed.
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It's not that we misunderstood, but that you can't control the text well, so that the reconstructed image of the reader is consistent with the image you want to describe.
Your supplementary explanations are meaningless. I won't go into details.