* * * The original text, comments and appreciation of the poem "Fisherman's lofty sentiments against the second siege"

* * * The original text, comments and appreciation of the poem "Fisherman's lofty sentiments against the second siege"

(193 1 summer)

Baiyun Mountain is about to stand, the sound under Baiyun Mountain is urgent, and dead trees are working hard. The gun was forced by Lin, and General Fei respected himself. On the fifteenth day of the 700-mile trip, Jiangxi was rich in water and Fujian was green in mountains, sweeping away thousands of troops. Someone is crying, why not do it step by step for the camp!

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After the first "encirclement and suppression" failed, Chiang Kai-shek was shocked. 193 1 at the beginning of February, he sent the minister of military and political affairs as the director of Nanchang camp to command the troops of Hunan, Hubei, Jiangxi and Fujian provinces to "encircle" the central revolutionary base area. At the beginning of April, three brigades of 18 division, with a total of 200,000 people, were mobilized, which was double that of the first "encirclement and suppression" campaign. In view of the failure of the last "encirclement and suppression", the enemy adopted the policy of "slow but steady, step by step", forming an arc front from Ji' an, Jiangxi Province to Jianning, Fujian Province, and advancing to the central base area in four ways. Only 5 miles a day, 10 or 20 miles, and build strong fortifications at the station. At this time, the Red Army in the central base area has more than 30,000 people, and its strength is very different. How to win is a difficult problem. On April 17, the first enlarged meeting of the Soviet C.O. was held in Qingtang, Ningdu, and the operational policy put forward by * * * was adopted: to fight within the base area, the enemy's Wang Jinyu department should be weakened first. On April 19, * * * gave the battle order. After the main force of the Red Army concentrated in Longgang, it advanced 20 kilometers to the west and calmly ambushed in Donggu area, which lasted for 25 days. On May 15, a brigade of the 28th Division and the 47th Division of the Ministry of Public Security broke away from the Futian position and invaded Donggu in two ways. Under the direct command of * * * *, the Red Army Corps 4 and 3 fought head-on, and the Red Army Corps outflanked. On may 16, the fighting started and ended at 5 pm. Gong Normal University was completely annihilated, and Gong was captured, posing as a general and then released. In the pursuit, he annihilated a brigade of the 47th Division in Wang Jinyu. That night, the Red Army marched into Futian. In the second half of this month, the Red Army moved from the east bank of Ganjiang River to the mountainous area of northwest Fujian, sweeping 700 miles, and won four battles in succession (Jishui Baisha annihilation war, Nakamura annihilation war, Guangchang campaign and Jianning surprise attack war), killing more than 30,000 people. The enemy's second "encirclement and suppression" failed.

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Baiyun Mountain is located at the junction of Ji 'an, Taihe and Xingguo counties in Jiangxi. When Donggu fought against "encirclement and suppression", * * * and Zhu De set the command post at the top of this mountain.

"Dead wood and rotten grass" originally meant old and useless people. Uncle Liang in the Han prison said, "Therefore, there is no reason to go to the front. Although it is a pearl that follows Hou, it is a luminous treasure, but it still makes enemies and does not see virtue. So some people say it first, but they will not forget the merits of the dead tree. " See Historical Records Biography of Lv Zhonglian and Zou Yang. This article does the opposite, saying that the old and the weak are warriors and stand up and fight? .

General Fei originally referred to Li Guang, a general of the Han people. When Emperor Wendi hit the Huns. When Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty was appointed as the right satrap of Beiping, Xiongnu called him "General Fei". See Historical Records Biography of General Li. Borrow the red army.

[700 Li] refers to the distance that the Red Army swept the enemy eastward after the Donggu War. It started in Futian, Jiangxi, and as for Jianning, Fujian.

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* * * In the poem, it is written about one or two counter-campaigns against "encirclement and suppression". This is the second time. Therefore, it should be understood against the background of the first big "encirclement and suppression".

Going to the city and writing about Baiyun Mountain, that is, the victory of the battle of Donggu, is called the description of "point"; Next, write about the victory of the Red Army's 700-mile counter-offensive after the Battle of Baiyun Mountain 15, which is called the spreading of the "line" (or "surface"). The combination of "point" and "line" is the structural feature of this paper.

From the perspective of "looking down", the three sentences of "Baiyun" in "Shanggan" describe the fighting posture of the Red Army and are full of the prestige of the Red Army. The cloud is about to stand, which is a real scene. On the morning of the battle, Baiyun Mountain was really shrouded in a cloud, so my vision was limited and my hearing was not hindered. "Qi Xin works together" is the judgment made by "voice". At noon, the clouds dispersed and the field of vision was wide, so there was a morphological description of "bullets". There are already "guns" and "people" (flying generals), and they still only write the image of the Red Army, not the face of the enemy. This is out of the creative intention of strengthening the heroic image of the Red Army. In order to achieve this goal, the poet also wrote the "desire" of "cloud" and the "effort" of "dead wood and rotten grass" by personification, which shows how much help the teacher of justice has received. In addition, the poet's choice of verbs is also extremely refined. Gunlin used the word "force" and General Fei used the word "advance", all of which reflected the tendency of commanding, thundering and throwing stones to ask for directions. So don't say victory, victory is already expected.

Xia Gan, because he wants to outline the five victories after the victory of Baiyun Mountain, the poet's language creation and environment creation are more dreamy. Three sentences of "700 Li", each sentence contains a connotation that can't be explained in thousands of words. "Seven hundred miles to catch fifteen days" is the battle route and time; "Jiangxi floods, Fujian mountains are beautiful" is a poetic capture of the transfer of the battlefield. Only when the victory is in hand can there be leisure. "Sweeping an army like a straw mat" has come into contact with direct conflicts, but the enemy is simply too lazy to be beaten. It is called "mat" to show contempt. At the end of the sentence, it is ironic and ironic to imagine the loser's modality (cry) and psychology (sigh) in a speculative tone.

* * * *' s ci works are good at laying out great events, avoiding reality and being empty, and the spatial tension in the sentence is great, which shows everyone's tolerance, so they have done it.