How to write the composition "head-up, there are also,,,"?

The first group: Example 1-6 is narrative.

(A) Pay attention to nature

Example 1: Look up

The bird flew over and crossed a broken arc in the sky. My eyes moved with it and looked up at its agility. When it finally stopped in the field, I looked down at its tranquility.

I think I can always find a suitable angle between this kind of leaning and leaning to treat these natural spirits.

For a while, I watched the puppies wandering in the street. They nervously shuttled through the crowd and dodged in the traffic, looking so helpless. I looked down at them and saw their messy bodies, black and thin limbs, tails hanging behind them and dirty water, and my heart was filled with infinite disgust. Occasionally, I saw them being kicked around, screaming and hiding in the corner, and even turned their proud heads and looked down at them disdainfully. Until one day, when I lowered my accustomed head, I met these lovely creatures in order to pick up a coin left in the corner. They came to lick my hand, and I picked up my lovely head hidden under the mess and felt the vibration from their bodies. Their eyes looked at me and looked at each other's feelings from different worlds. In those smart and sad eyes, I suddenly understood that in cities where there are more and more stray dogs, what people lack is just a heart that is willing to look straight.

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At that moment, at the foot of the crowded people in the city, I only wish that more people would bend down and see the world of stray dogs.

I still remember that there is a big and exquisite bird's nest on the top of the big banyan tree at the entrance of the village. Birds fly in and out from time to time. I stood under the tree and only heard the rustling of leaves. So I kept looking up and saw the big bird spreading its wings, which seemed to be lifted by the wind and gliding; When I saw the sunset and the western hills, I drifted back to the golden one from the horizon and suddenly flew into the leaves, which made me feel the warmth of my infinite home. They lived freely until one day, a clear shot ended everything. When I reached the banyan tree, the ground was littered with fragments of the bird's nest. I crouched down and pushed aside the messy branches, only to see an injured chicken, holding its head high in horror. I leaned down and tried to get my eyes close to its small eyes. I saw it. I saw that his eyes were full of fear and anxiety. I even saw people's complaints in the depths of those eyes. When I looked up, I suddenly understood that birds are not just flying freely at the height we look up to.

At that moment, in the silent whining of the chickens, I only wish that more people would treat this group of free creatures with the mentality of "don't do to others what you don't want them to do to you".

It is another spring return to the earth, and all kinds of frosty days are free. I looked up at the eagle in the sky and looked down at the shallow bottom of the fish. Between this up-and-down tilt, we will certainly find the right angle to look at all the spirits of nature, so that all creatures can live in this vast land equally. ...

(2) Relevant personnel

Example 2: Head up

The green kudzu vine clings to the vigorous branches and climbs too high! I stood on the thick bluestone road of Ditan, trying to raise my head and want to see the scenery in the high place. Try to hold your head up and see the scenery from a height. The trees here can't be said to be towering into the sky, but it's not easy for me, a nearsighted girl whose height is less than 1.6 meters, to see those special leaves and clusters of flowers. Have to look up. ...

In my mind, Ditan and Shi Tiesheng are inseparable. Looking up at Shi Tiesheng is like looking up at the scene of the altar. I know that he is physically disabled and determined. She is a famous writer. He is the object that I look up to and admire, which means "just watch from a distance, don't be ridiculous".

I held my head high for a long time, and all I saw were palm-shaped leaves and pink bone flowers. Not connected to the magnificent melancholy. My neck hurts a little, so I hung my head and suddenly looked forward, and my eyes fell flat and steady on the thick trunk. Bark is carved on me like an ugly scar, but it also forms a meaningful picture, like a vertical and horizontal river, like a drizzle, and like a curtain hanging on a woman's wing, curved or straight, or staggered or parallel. There is a slightly deeper tree hole, like a dimple on a tickled child's face. In this head-up view, I saw such a wonderful scene. I stood under the tree, and my steady eyes fell on Shi Tiesheng through the hole in the tree.

He would beat his unconscious legs wildly, curse in a low voice and cry silently; Like all adolescent boys, he refused his mother's company and chat shyly and with excessive self-esteem, and walked to the altar alone in a wheelchair regardless of his mother's anxiety. It turned out that under the writer's aura, the acacia tree hiding his mother was full of thoughts about his mother, and then he leaned against the trunk like a child and whispered. ...

Looking up and seeing is greater and more deified, and looking up and seeing is more real and moving. I think I prefer the latter, because the truth can be closer to my chest, and because I am moved, I will derive that kind of piety that is almost like god when I look up. However, I always knew that he was not a god.

The philosopher said: "Looking up, the landing point is high, so it looks lofty; looking down, the landing point is low, so it looks humble. One magnifies the light spot in the head-up view and the other magnifies the black spot in the head-up view. Only by raising your head can you see a complete person. "

Don't move your neck, just look straight ahead, and the most natural and primitive state will show the most authentic scenery.

Looking up at the sun, you think it is the master of all things, and looking down at the sun in the universe, it is an ordinary star, but the fact is, it is just an ordinary star in the universe, isn't it?

(3) Pay attention to society

Example 3: Head up

Senior 3 (4) Gong Haijuan

Please stand on your knees, please raise your drooping head and look straight at me.

The cold wind blows very tightly in winter, and it is difficult for a thick cotton-padded coat to resist the attack of this sharp and biting cold wind. The streets at dusk also lost the excitement during the day. I quickened my pace, wrapped my coat and hurried home.

What I saw was such a scene that hit my warm heart calmly and violently. You in the dark, messy and funny, chapped hands and lips, hopeless knees and humble hands, and the money box stuck at your knees indicate your fate today, and it may also be your life.

The night is getting dark, and you are getting closer and closer to me. I seem to hear your silent whisper and your heavy sigh. Untouching, untiring, is the main theme of your life. Who can give alms to warm your hopeless heart in such a cold season?

Your knees are kneeling in the cold wind; Your hands are so humble to cold pedestrians; Your heart is lost in the storm ...

I am a young man who struggles for life and walks in such a cold wind. And you, a man of fair age and sound hands, please allow me to call you uncle, and use the terms of mutual respect and equality: please stand up on your knees, please raise your head and look at me directly.

Shakespeare said: The weakest fruit must fall first. Similarly, a person who has no courage to advance in the face of difficulties, is disheartened and willing to retreat, and his life must be lonely, empty and lifeless.

The weakest fruit falls first. And you, in this cold wind, have become a weak fruit and fallen to the bottom of society, but you are willing to kneel down and bury yourself in the abyss. I can't help feeling sad and ashamed, and I can't help feeling deeply confused: Are you trying to keep up with others? Do you exist in such a common and extravagant desire? I can't help shuddering.

Standing in front of you, in age, you are an elder, in thought, you are just a humble person who dare not even look at others. I won't give you any money as you wish, because you step on yourself first. Perhaps, you have experienced hardships, your life has been crushed under heavy losses, and you have lost the courage to struggle. You'd rather use your knees to numb a soul that has lost its flesh and blood.

I still don't want to give up the call: please stand on your knees, please hold your head down and look straight at me.

Why do you choose to fall deeply when you know that the weakest fruit must fall first?

Fight, fight, if you have the courage to face life, fight, fight, and exchange your hands for the right to "head-up", what is the difficulty?

The wind is still blowing, and it is getting colder and colder. I picked up my slow steps and walked in the direction of struggle. The night is getting deeper and deeper. ...

I still don't give up calling you, stand on my knees, raise my numb head and try to look me in the eye.

Haizi said: I wish you a bright future and happiness in the world. I also bless you, but also bless myself, bless those who resolutely raise their heads, struggle in hardships, and dare to face up to life.

(4) Pay attention to yourself

Example 4: Head up

Senior three (1) Xu Hui

Look at a person's perspective, should be determined by the relative height, others are taller than you, you should look up, others are shorter than you, of course you look down. But between parents and children, this set of rules does not adapt.

My parents are taller than us, but they often look up to us. Because we are the only child generation, we are doomed to be afraid of the emperor and princess who are frozen in our hands and melted in our mouths. As a result, it was forbidden to be isolated from the kitchen from an early age. I don't know how to use those pots and shovels. Ever since, I have been locked in a small study since I was a child, and the mixture of soil and grass can only be "smelled" in books; As a result, you don't have to help grandma cross the street, just get your grades up. ...

We often think, Mom and Dad, why can't you look at us?

If you choose head-up, you will find that we will also become adults, and we also need to use a spatula to create happiness and food for another family; If you choose head-up, you will understand how much beauty and shock from nature affect the exercise of personality; Choose head-up, you will have an epiphany, and your participation in social life will become a harmonious landscape.

But, you didn't!

On the contrary, growing up, we are also used to looking down on our parents.

They don't understand Jay Chou, so they are the backward generation that we scoff at; They don't watch Korean dramas, so they are defined by us as not understanding romance; They are cautious, passive and Nuo Nuo. They are ridiculed by us as ambitious ordinary people ... we just look down on them without losing face, and they are even more humble in our eyes.

If we can look them in the eye, will we find that their favorite red songs have been pushed to the edge of the music market? Will you find their love for rice, oil and salt more real and warm? Will they find that in order to make a living and for their families, they have to bury their dreams when they were young and be guardians of their children?

However, we didn't. ...

Head-up may be the best observation angle between parents and children, which can make them know each other better, resolve unnecessary contradictions and troubles, and build a warm and happy nest.

In this way, if everyone can look up, is the whole society a warm and happy "nest"

Therefore, don't stick to the relative height of others, this is the need of happiness and harmony!

Example 5: Head up

Senior three (13) class in

For a long time, I haven't touched the soil that breeds life, listened attentively to the rain falling on the eaves tiles, and touched the face full of hardships and honest wrinkles. Time is gradually filtering memories, and what you don't want to stay has long been forgotten.

But his appearance made me re-examine myself.

"Call you Bo Er. He loved you the most when you were a child. Listen, this boy hasn't seen you for years. He is taller than you ... "Dad saw me coming back and quickly pulled me to a dark man. The face that makes people can't tell the age shows a simple smile. My heart thumped, full of unhappiness, and my face was flattened at once. Facing the outstretched hand, I hesitated but instinctively retreated, and my lost hand suddenly froze in mid-air.

"I'm going to do my homework ..." I turned and closed the door, and my unchanged slippers exposed the truth prematurely, silence, strange silence.

I just fell on the bed. I don't know what that hand did wrong to make me so disgusted. Is it earth tone who will never wash his hands, or is it covered with dust? I can't imagine it would be my second uncle, a man who carved the countryside on his face.

When eating, everyone said nothing, only occasionally had one or two silly smiles.

Like after centuries, the dim-looking shadow under the high concrete wall finally left slowly. "You child ... how good Uncle Er is to you ... People have come here in recent years. Didn't you live in his house for two years when you were a child?" Mother sighed.

When I was a kid. ! Memories are gentle and relaxed.

I remember when my parents came to pick me up, I grabbed Bo Er's door and cried. Facing a strange city, I am afraid. I remember running on the ridge, dragging my trouser legs, and weeding with Bo Er. I remember ... I was attached to a field stream and my childhood was left in the country. The mori memento I deleted is getting more and more complete, but the breath I tried to erase is slowly overflowing.

I used to think that more than ten years can dilute the memory of the countryside, and fashionable clothes can cover up the brand of the countryside, but I still can't forget it now. Bo Er is still Bo Er, but my years have left more scars than I remember, but I am no longer me. I will have disdain and disdain for the hand that kissed the land, and I will be unhappy with a humble and simple heart. It turns out that time washes away kindness and humility, not memories.

It suddenly dawned on me that I never wanted to see myself in the past and the so-called backwardness and hardship. I never looked up to myself now, until now I found that I was too proud and lost my kindness because I was influenced by the city for too long.

"Mom, Bo Er hasn't gone far. I want to give him a ride. " I think I have to say "sorry" myself.

Example 6: Head up

Huang, Senior Three (15)

I used to like a collection of paintings by a painter in Taiwan Province Province, De Zhen, Face the Breeze: the background of the picture is magnificent, with golden quilts and gorgeous curtains, which is obviously the mansion of the Qing dynasty nobles. A woman in a flag dress is sitting in front of a big bronze mirror, looking straight ahead and looking deep into the mirror. This look shocked me, and I can't get it out of my mind all the time-she is definitely not admiring her face, and that distant look seems to see something through the mirror.

I can't understand this painting, but my intuition tells me that if you want to understand the deep meaning of this painting, you must integrate yourself into it.

So, I also learned to look straight ahead, concentrate and meditate. In this way, I cast my eyes forward at will, without any purpose, just looking straight ahead devoutly, hoping to realize something. Finally, I made a discovery, which made me happy and sad-I found it for so long, and I never looked up seriously once!

Yes, head-up is the most common gesture in my life, but it is only an external gesture. What is my heart doing behind this gesture? Are you fidgeting-it's not real head-up!

I'm still focused and looking straight. I don't see anything, but I seem to see everything.

I saw a girl with a ponytail. That was my childhood. Her crisp laughter flew unbridled across the field, alarming the birds. She turned and ran to hug her village. ...

I see a wooden photo frame. Grandma is in the picture frame. She smiled indifferently, but there was a faint sadness in her brow. She should be sad. She died so lonely and painful that she had no relatives around. ...

I saw osmanthus trees in the junior high school campus. I once boldly fled downstairs to see it in the evening self-study class, smelling its fragrance greedily and lingering. It's still so gorgeous now ...

Thought is like a kite with a broken thread. The farther it flies, the harder it is to catch. Suddenly, my nose was normal and a string of tears fell. Surprised, I quickly lifted my sleeves and wiped them at random.

Head-up, not eyes, but heart. I'm always too busy, either burying my head in problems or rushing to get high marks. Today, I finally looked straight at the thousands of walls of the world and saw many things that I couldn't see at ordinary times. The innocence and beauty of childhood, the preciousness of family and the persistent yearning for the beauty of nature seem to have been abandoned by me for a long time. Thank God for giving me a chance to look straight into my heart, let me see my lost spiritual world and pick them up one by one.

Looking back at Dezhen's paintings, I seem to understand something. The woman wearing a flag skirt in the painting lives in a noisy and flashy aristocratic mansion, but her cold eyes looking straight ahead can penetrate the glitz and bring peace and tranquility to her heart.

Hold it up, print it with a deep kiss, and then I will look into the distance again with great peace. ...