A. Relationship with the cause: For the cause, there must be a cause, which is "correspondence". Be broad-minded and don't limit yourself to the previous sentences. You can't suddenly say a word in the sky, nor can you suddenly say a word on the ground. You must take care of it.
B. the relationship between harmony and harmony: transformation should pave the way for the conclusion of the sentence.
You can't just steal the limelight from the conclusion.
C, the role of sentence transformation in the whole article: basically, it is to express the author's feelings on the basis of description, which is what we call touching the scene. Take care of it, pave the way for cooperation, and clarify the main idea.
Let's look at several ways to turn sentences:
First, the emotional transmission method of scene import
Let's find an ancient poem to study.
See if it's a way from scene to emotion. For example, Wang Wan's "A Stop at the foot of Beibao Mountain".
Castle Peak, my boat and I, along the green water.
Until the river bank widens at low tide, and no wind blows my lonely sail.
... night gives way to the ocean of the sun, and the old year melts in freshness.
I can finally send my messenger, the wild goose, back to Luoyang.
Let's analyze it. This turn, is it about scenery? Or lyrical? From "sea day" and "night" to the helplessness of drifting for a long time. Although writing about scenery is actually lyrical. The poet uses what he sees in his eyes and feels in his body.
Write day and night alternation, time sequence conversion and weight lifting as easily as possible.
Pay attention to these phrases "sea day" and "remnant night"
Compare "Jiang Chun" and "Old Year". Just looking at the two phrases "Last Night" and "Old Year" is definitely not landscape writing.
But it is also connected with the scenery. The last night, that is, the sky is about to dawn, so the sea is sunrise. Why did the author go from pure landscape writing to sleepless night? What's the difference between the first two sentences and the joy of just leaving home? The next sentence has an explanation.
Because a year has passed, which means that the author has been wandering outside for a long time. In this way, what we have learned from association is that "... the night gives way to the ocean of the sun, and the old year melts in freshness" is the author's sleeplessness and helplessness.
When the night has not subsided, a red sun has risen from the sea; The old year has not passed, and the river has shown spring. That is to say, although this sentence is also about scenery, it is actually lyrical, integrating one's feelings into the scenery, allowing readers to transcend the concrete and get rich philosophical enlightenment. This couplet is mainly lyrical, at least lyrical sentences.
This kind of "turn" based on lyricism is called the scene-to-emotion method. This situation must be well grasped and must conform to the "law." The so-called law is in line with the laws we abide by and normal emotions. Not neurotic, not puzzling,
It is not a feeling of insanity, but a feeling of public acceptance and recognition. When we write, we need to be "delicate", even if we write someone rough, we should be delicate. Just because he has a rough personality, he can't even write rough. When writing, you can throw it gently or forcefully. When you are bold, you can focus, and when you are elegant, you can throw it gently. In order to match the artistic conception of the whole poem. There are some requirements about these:
1, don't alienate, take over and see the scenery.
2. Don't leave. Whether it is light or hard,
Can't alienate, can't split, can't alienate the theme,
Don't digress.
3, connecting the preceding with the following, the scenery or things written have a close relationship of inheritance and integration with lyricism.
4. pave the way for the combination.
For example, Chang Jian's Broken Mountain Temple.
On a pure morning, near the ancient temple, the early sunshine points to the treetops.
A winding path leads to a hidden place, and the Buddhist temple is surrounded by branches and flowers.
Here, birds live in the mountain light, and people's hearts feel quiet in the pond.
There is silence here except for the bell.
Here, birds live in the mountain light, and people's hearts feel quiet in the pond.
The scenery of the forest in the Buddhist temple makes the birds very happy. "Birds are singing and flowers are fragrant here", followed by Hua Shen,
Keep the connection with the bearing. This is the true and lovely side of nature; Mountains, flowers and trees are reflected in the clear pool water, which makes people relaxed and happy. This means that everything is just an illusion after all. Buddhist theory holds that the world is essentially a kind of nothingness, but this kind of nothingness is expressed by "existence". From "being" to "nothing" is the way to return to Buddhism and grasp the world. Empty heart, as if not feeling all the voices contending. Here and now, everything is silent, except the bells and chimes in the temple. But when people are immersed in the realm of Buddha, they only hear the voice of Buddha. The hole under the ambush of the latter sentence leads to the silence of the tail joint, except for the bell and the bell. The characteristic of this poem is to melt the Buddhist meaning of "emptiness" into the scenery; Even if you don't understand the author's hidden intention, you can feel a very special atmosphere.
Another example: Li Bai's "seeing friends off"
Green mountains are located on the north side of the city wall, and the sparkling water surrounds the east of the city.
Here we say goodbye to each other, and you, like losing your father, are floating in the wind and traveling far away.
Floating clouds are like wanderers, like wandering, and the sunset slowly goes down the mountain, which seems to be nostalgic.
With a wave of his hand, he will be separated from now on, and his friend on horseback will carry him on a long journey, blowing a long wind, as if reluctant to leave.
Floating clouds are like wanderers, like wandering, and the sunset slowly goes down the mountain, which seems to be nostalgic.
"Floating clouds" and "sunset" are metaphors of their own reluctant feelings. Writing farewell couplets on the neck is the theme of the whole poem. "Cloud" and "sunset" are metaphors.
To show your mind. Wan Li's sign of mandibular joint is connected with the floating clouds of cervical joint (the floating clouds trip is not limited to Wan Li).
The last word "love" on the necklace was waved, and Ben ·a?vagho?a laid the foundation. Write from two aspects: line and delivery
It symbolizes the uncertainty and helplessness of friends; In the distance, a red sun slowly sets, which seems to be unbearable to leave the earth suddenly, which is a metaphor for the poet's reluctance to his friends. Seeing "Farewell" under the background of beautiful scenery and the sun shining in the west makes the poet feel nostalgic and inseparable. The corner here has both scenery and affection, and the scenes are mixed and exciting. Floating clouds are uncertain, just a metaphor for wandering; The setting sun is very slow, and it seems unwilling to take it away. Even if it is backward, it often splashes red clouds all over the sky. This persistence is like my deep friendship with you. These two sentences are well-proportioned, balanced and symmetrical, and rhyme beautifully, which is a famous sentence that has been passed down through the ages.
Second, the inversion method
Reversal method: it is to change from positive description to negative description, which is opposite to emotional description. Note, however, that the theme is the same, but the angle of depiction is different. The difference between nodes is this turn. But it should be noted that it should also be related to tolerance and cooperation. Such as "an old friend of Liangzhou, Xi Hui, Huaishang"
We used to be partners on the river and Han Shang, and every time we met, we would get drunk.
Since we left each other, we drifted like clouds, and ten years passed like running water, until we finally got together again.
We talked and laughed, just like before, except that the hair on our heads is a little gray now.
Why not go home, face the autumn mountain and sail along the Huaihe River? .
We talked and laughed, just like before, except that the hair on our heads is a little gray now.
The change from happiness to sadness. "We talked and laughed, just like before, except that the hair on our heads is a little gray now." The sentence means "laugh",
Now, we meet again, happy as ever, and our friendship remains the same, but the years are ruthless and their temples have been frosted. The word "except the hair on our heads is turning gray now" is disappearing.
I am very happy to meet again after such a long separation, but the vicissitudes of the world make me sad. We can see that the neckline has changed from happy to sad, and the brushwork is so ups and downs. Ten years of wandering life has made people old. One joy and one sorrow, one positive and one negative, interact into a text.
This turn has turned out the author's image of aging, not to mention the vicissitudes of life and personal joys and sorrows. Using Xiao Shu's Fahua to describe the wasted years and the sadness of the boss reflects the relative expression. This sentence describes the environment, appearance and mind, and it is very detailed. Conception, tailoring and writing are also very smooth and natural, from which we can prove a method of turning sentences from chapter to chapter. That's the reverse order method.
Third, the method of direct expression and expansion.
That is, from the original intention of the topic, expand the scope of description. Such as: Du Fu's Moonlight Remembering My Brother.
A vagrant heard the drums heralding the battle, which was the first call of a wild goose on the border in autumn.
The dew turns to frost tonight, and the moonlight at home is bright!
Brothers are scattered, and no one can ask about life and death.
However, if something goes wrong with peacetime letters, the situation has not stopped.
Brothers are scattered, and no one can ask about life and death.
From the title of a poem to memorizing words, from straightforward to revealing the moon to remembering brothers. "Oh, my brothers, lost and scattered, what does life mean to me without you? "This couplet uses Fu Bi (that is, stating the situation) to directly express the affection for the brothers, and it is also a concrete answer to the reason of" remembering the younger brother ".The brothers parted ways, not for an outing, not for seeking an official position, but for taking refuge and expressing their hatred for the war: although there are brothers,
But they are scattered in the war and have no place to live.
Where to inquire about their life and death? The word "you" is in sharp contrast with the word "nothing", which not only reflects the pain of the separation of poets and brothers, but also generally reflects the painful life of displacement brought to the broad masses of people by the Anshi Rebellion. The poet connected the two couplets with "the white dew and the bright moon"
Instead, I turned to recall my brothers, scattered them in four directions, and expanded the scope to describe them.
Fourth, the transfer method to the first floor
As far as the original intention of the topic is concerned, I want by going up one flight of stairs, but it still has something to do with the beginning to avoid sudden illness. Going one step further means that such a technology is called step by step. For example, Du Fu's Delighting in Rain on a Spring Night.
Good rain knows the season, when spring comes.
Sneak into the night with the wind, moisten things silently.
The wild path is dark, and the river is bright.
Look at the red and wet place, the flowers in Jinguancheng are heavy.
In other words, I saw a lot of rain.
I can't help but imagine the beauty of the city in spring after dawn. How vivid his infinite joy is!
Transfer of legal status of verb (abbreviation of verb)
The local transfer method is to transfer the place where the place is written.
Scenes are different from places and scenes written by Qi and Cheng.
Such as Yang Jiong's "Join the Army"
The flames of bonfires in Kyoto, Chang 'an City, crude gas oil.
Leaving the palace, the general will assume the command; Surrounding the enemy and attacking the city, the elite cavalry are extremely brave.
The snow is black, the flag is painted and the wind is noisy.
I'd rather be a junior officer to fight for my country than a white-faced scholar who only engraved his chapter.
Leaving the palace, the general will assume the command; Surrounding the enemy and attacking the city, the elite cavalry are extremely brave.
The army was ordered to go out to the solemn, grand and magnificent scene. Describe it with the idea of "painting flags with dark snow" "The wind is jittery and the drums are loud." This paper attempts to describe the pictures of soldiers' blood spilled on the battlefield from the perspective of audio and video. This is not the same as the expedition scene written by the mandibular association. A situation like this is the local transfer method. Third, describe the battle scene positively.
Different from the previous couplets, this couplet is realistic and sees emptiness in reality.
The above two couplet, the antithesis is neat, the word is refined,
I only wrote heroic and tragic battle scenes. Another example is Wang Wei's hunting.
In the wind, the horn sounded and the general was hunting outside the borehole.
The grass is yellow in autumn, and the eagle eye is sharper; When the ice and snow melt, the horseshoe is extraordinarily brisk.
It has passed Xinfeng City in a blink of an eye and soon returned to sunny Liu Ying.
Looking back at the eagle wilderness, thousands of twilight clouds spread to the horizon.
Everything is so relaxed and happy when writing hunting scenes, which is in sharp contrast with the tense atmosphere of hunting. This association further depicts the climax of hunting activities, and at the same time shows that the troops are well-trained and handy with pens.
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Six, freehand brushwork transfer method: refers to the transfer in meaning or contrary to inheritance, there is a turning point in the expression of meaning. For example, Du Fu's "Expressing My Mind at Night"
The breeze rippled on the grassy coast, through the night, and blew to my still mast.
The endless plains are dotted with drooping stars. The moon runs with the river.
I hope my art can bring me fame and liberate my sick old age from the office! !
Flying around, flying around, what am I like, just a sandpiper in the vast world! !
This association further depicts the climax of hunting activities, and at the same time shows that the troops are well-trained and handy with pens.
The fifth and sixth sentences are a bit famous. Where is it because my article is good? An official should retire because he is old and ill. This is irony, and this idea is implicit. The poet Shu has great political ambitions, but he has been suppressed for a long time and cannot display them. So he became famous because of his articles, which is really not what he wanted. This shows the injustice in the poet's mind and reveals that political frustration is the fundamental reason for his wandering loneliness.
Seven, lyrical transformation: it is characterized by the thoughts and feelings inspired on the basis of inheritance. This feature is that you can directly express your chest and express your feelings through scenery.
Such as: Li Bai's "Jingmen Ferry Farewell to Friends";
Sail from Jingmen Ferry, and soon you will be with southerners.
At the end of the mountain range and the beginning of the plain, the river winds through the wilderness.
The moon rises like a mirror, and the sea clouds twinkle like palaces.
The water brings you the feeling of home and makes your boat travel 300 miles.
After reading it, you will imagine a vast landscape of Chu. The mountains overlap, the Ye Ping is boundless, the rivers run into the wasteland, and the clouds change, just like a dreamland. After browsing such magnificent scenery, the most wonderful thing is the phrase "water in my hometown" written by William. Only when the hometown is full of water can you go boating in Wan Li. The poet mainly writes about landscapes, and he has integrated himself into them. It should be noted that the first two couplets in the Five Laws are basically pure scenery descriptions. From the entrance, the chin is expanded, and the third link (neckline),
Although it is mainly based on the description of scenery,
In fact, it is not a hierarchical description.
Not the size of the scenery, the distance,
It reveals "people" and "heart".
How to write a better sentence, the conversion sentence is the first clause, which is the watershed between the previous chapter and the next chapter. When we write, the second couplet must be taken naturally, and writing scenery or fortune must go with the flow. The triple needs ups and downs, otherwise it is difficult to combine the tail. In tonight's analysis, we know that the difference between the two is that necklaces can be freehand brushwork, scenery, things, things and quotations. Avoid the meaning of the previous link accordingly and change it. That is to say:
First, if the couplet is a landscape, it is best to keep the necklace away from the landscape, otherwise it will stop in the same place, which will not give readers more information and waste pen and ink.
Second, if you must continue to write landscapes, you should arrange them in good order, such as writing couplets far away and necklaces near.
Write couplets now, and write couplets in the past.
Couplets are empty, necklaces are real.
Parallel couplets are vast and rough, and neck couplets are concrete and meticulous.
If the couplets are faces, the necklaces can be accurate to the point.
Couplets are written about real scenery, necklaces are written about associations or psychological experiences generated by the immediate scenery, and so on.
The bend is connected up and down without breaking, which requires everyone not to patronize the bend, regardless of the connection.
The biggest difficulty in sentence transformation
There are usually two difficulties in the transition:
First, the rotation is broken.
The second is the weakness of the combination.
Form turn rather than meaning turn, and the turn here is only a metaphysical turn, not a meaning turn. Not from one topic to another. When you really don't know how to turn, you can just turn around. Of course, this is a stupid way to take it when it is really needed. Writing poetry has a context.
If you make up your mind to write the article well, you will have a very clear context.
As long as it is arranged in strict accordance with this vein, it will not break when turning.