1. Taste the language and learn the artistic skills of appreciating prose.
2. Learn to appreciate lyric prose by grasping the emotional context of this article.
Teaching emphases and difficulties:
1. Let the students walk into the emotional world of the work and feel the author's uneasy mood.
2. Learn the author's language skills.
Teaching methods:
Listen to the tape and read silently. Let the students read the text and do as the Romans do.
Taste the language of the work through repeated reading and comprehension.
Ask questions, think and discuss, and understand the author's feelings.
Instructional design: two class hours
Teaching process:
First, introduce the new lesson and explain the problems.
1.？ In a questionnaire survey of "Top Ten Favorite Texts for Middle School Students", Moonlight on the Lotus Pond topped the list.
2.？ The lotus pond refers to the lotus pond in Tsinghua University Tsinghua Campus where Mr. Zhu Ziqing taught at that time, which is the specific place to be described in this paper. Moonlight, and then point out the time, is a night with the moon.
Second, the author, a brief introduction to the work
submitter
Zhu Ziqing, formerly known as Huazi, was born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang. Because three generations all settled in Yangzhou, graduated from Jiangsu No.8 Middle School in Yangzhou at that time and worked as teachers in Yangzhou, they called themselves "Yangzhou people". He is a famous writer and scholar in modern times. Including poetry, prose, literary criticism, academic research and so on. Although Zhu Ziqing began to write new poems after the May 4th Movement, his collection of essays "Back" published in 1928 made Zhu Ziqing a famous prose writer at that time.
(b) projection background
Moonlight on the Lotus Pond was written in July 1927. The Great Revolution failed and China was in darkness. Prior to this, Zhu Ziqing, as a pawn of the great era, had been shouting and fighting, but after the April 12th coup, he moved from the "cross street" of struggle to the "ivory tower" of classical literature. But the author can't join the army and take up a gun to go to the revolution, but he can't quell his dissatisfaction and hatred of social reality. The author is confused and contradictory about life, depressed inside, and can't be calm all the time. Through the description of the scenery of the lotus pond on a lonely moonlit night, this paper reveals the author's complex mood of pursuing peace but not getting peace, and dreaming beyond reality but not getting rid of peace, which is a reflection of that era in the author's mind.
Third, self-reading comprehension.
1. Ask students to read the text by themselves, perceive the whole text as a whole, understand the basic content of the work, and initially grasp the basic structural framework of the work and the author's feelings.
First, read the text by yourself, dredge the sentences, and find out the pronunciation and meaning of the following words with the help of notes and dictionaries:
Withdrawn, lush, charming, elegant, graceful, blue, mottled and gloomy.
Understanding lotus picking fu with the help of notes and dictionaries.
2. Secondly, number the eight short paragraphs of the article, find out the main scenic paragraphs and lyric paragraphs of the article, and find out the lyric sentences of the article.
Clear:
The main paragraphs of the article are the fourth, fifth and sixth paragraphs.
The main lyric paragraph of the article is the third paragraph.
The lyric sentences in the article mainly include:
The first paragraph: I feel quite uneasy these days.
The second paragraph: On a moonless night, the road is gloomy and a little scary. It's fine tonight, although the moonlight is still very weak.
The third paragraph: beyond my usual self, I am like myself. I like liveliness ... I will enjoy the boundless moonlight and the fragrance of lotus flowers.
Paragraph 6: But the excitement is theirs, and I have nothing.
Paragraph 7: This is really interesting, but unfortunately we are not happy now.
Paragraph 8: This makes me really miss Jiangnan.
3.？ Question: What is your biggest feeling?
Clear: mainly in three aspects: beautiful scenery; Sincere feelings; The language is fresh and natural.
(1) Write about scenery. What is the main scene? (moonlight on the lotus pond)
(2) Landscape prose and lyric prose.
Clear:
Emotionally, the author walked out of peace-longing for peace-a moment of peace from considerable restlessness. Form and meaning are organically combined. This circular structure shows that the author can't get rid of depression and sadness anyway;
From the perspective of space, the author came out from home, went to the lotus pond through the path, and finally returned home. This circular structure shows that the author can't get rid of depression and sadness anyway.
Therefore, what are the sentences in this article?
Hint: Yan Wen is the most vivid sentence that can reveal the theme and the author's feelings. For example, a person can't see the colorful world without eyes; Conversely, others can read your inner world by reading your eyes.
Four. abstract
The moonlight in the lotus pond is full of faint sadness and faint joy. We should pay attention to our taste in the next class.
Verb (short for verb) homework
Recite paragraphs 4, 5 and 6 of the text.
Second teaching time
First, check the recitation.
Second, appreciate the text.
1, now it's time for the students to talk about it. Students, can you tell me about this article, which is the most touching in your own words? You don't need to give a reason, just look at the relevant language once.
Understand the thoughts and feelings of the article? Why do you like this paragraph?
"This is a lively season and a romantic season." The descriptions of lotus pickers in Lotus Picking Fu are all very happy. Described a very free and happy life.
This paragraph was deleted from the old high school textbooks. Why was it deleted? Should I delete it? Isn't this paragraph quite consistent with the full-text center?
The author's thoughts and feelings change in the text. Never quiet, seek quiet, get quiet to be quiet, sometimes worry and sometimes happy, and finally can't get rid of the first worry.
Where can we see that he didn't get rid of his troubles at last?
"But the excitement is theirs, and I have nothing."
"This makes me really miss Jiangnan."
Quoting "Lotus Picking Fu" to describe the lively life when picking lotus shows his yearning for freedom and happiness because of inner depression. Because the author said, "It's a pity that we are not happy now."
It can be seen that the author's description of the lotus picking scene cannot be deleted, because it just reflects the author's disappointment in real life.
Some people sum up the thoughts and feelings expressed in this article as "faint joy, faint sadness", which is very appropriate, but the author's emotional background is "restless"
2. Why is the author's mood "restless"?
Some people think that resentment against Jie Jiang's *4. 12 counter-revolutionary coup is related to Zhu Ziqing's ideological background at that time and the writing time of this article, which cannot be said to be unreasonable; Others believe that it stems from the author's anguish and hesitation at the crossroads of life as a petty-bourgeois intellectual; In my opinion, there is no need to provide an authoritative and unique answer to this question, and different people should see each other. It is precisely because of this that Moonlight on the Lotus Pond will become a misty poem that can endure reading. This is the pleasure of reading famous works!
3. "I like liveliness and calmness; Love to live in groups and love to be alone. " Is it a bit contradictory?
Here, the author actually emphasizes "calmness" and "solitude", using the usual excitement to compare the current calmness, and using the usual group to compare the current solitude. Because there is a saying behind "this is the beauty of being alone."
Conclusion: Try to make it clear that language should be relevant to the context.
4. "The breeze blows, with a faint fragrance, as if it were a faint song on a distant building." The author is writing about the fragrance of lotus. Why did he suddenly write and sing?
This is a special metaphor, which Mr. Qian Zhongshu called "synaesthesia". Please refer to Exercise 2 at the back of the text.
In fact, synaesthesia often appears in everyday language. For example, a classmate has a thick voice. Does his voice have a diameter? Now every classmate has a sweet smile on his face. However, you must not think that I am saying that your smiling faces are full of sugar!
5. What does "this" mean?
Running water. As mentioned earlier, "it is impossible to see only the shadow of running water."
Why do you think of running water again? It comes from "Lotus seeds are as clear as water" in the Western Zhou Qu.
This is a love song. "Lotus seeds are as clear as water" is the homonym of "Reiko Kobayakawa is as affectionate as water".
The emotional expression in China's classical poems is artistic, subtle and beautiful. For example, Liu Yuxi's "Rise in the East and Fall in the West, the road is clear and affectionate."
6. The fourth paragraph of the text says: "At this time, the leaves and flowers also trembled slightly, like lightning, passing through the lotus pond in an instant." Since there is only a trace, why is it "like lightning"?
The "trace" here refers to both the light degree and the fast speed. When I was not careful, I flashed by. So, "like lightning".
7. "Leaves are high above the water, like an elegant dancer's skirt." Why does the author use skirts to compare leaves?
Lotus leaf and dancer's skirt are very soft. There is the word pavilion in this sentence. The dancer's skirt has a stretching and rotating action, which is very beautiful. The lotus leaf was originally static, but the author imagined that it was moving, a dancer's skirt. This is based on virtual realism and dynamic writing.
8. Continue to ponder: the words "graceful", "shy", "pearl" and "star" that describe lotus flowers, and "moonlight, like running water, pours quietly on this leaf and flower. Beautiful words such as "The Lotus Pond Gone with the Wind in blue mist" and the use of reduplicated words in the works.
3. Summary: If you continue to taste, scrutinize and study, you will have more feelings, more discoveries and more problems. This is to find out. In our Chinese class, it should be students and teachers. Writers talk on an equal footing. Of course, teachers should also participate in the communication, but my opinion is just a family statement.
Fourth, homework
Write a short literary review according to a certain feature of this article.