Please write an article on the topic of "waiting" (optional style, except poetry), no less than 600 words.
Thinking refers to body fluids.
Nobel Prize in Literature-winning playwright Beckett believes that "only art without plot and action can be regarded as real art". "Art without plot and action" is an art that oppresses people and tortures the soul. The proposition of the composition "Waiting" lies in that it is not only a test of writing ability, but also a guide for students to face their inner questions. Capture, description and perspective are the process of entering the heart and writing.
1, carefully choose the waiting object-make the psychology easy to sue.
It is suggested that junior high school students choose narrative first. Novels, narrative essays, dramas, fables and fairy tales all belong to narrative articles. The * * similarity of narrative is mainly expressed by narrative, which is the * * similarity of speaking, borrowing and thinking with images. Even if it is an argumentative essay, its title is won by image. If you want to express your life sentiment and philosophy in the process of waiting, you also need to express it with vivid things and concrete and vivid processes. This paper states the inner melody with vivid things and events, which is convenient for readers to accept, and it is easier to climb the peak of rational thinking than directly expressing one's own thoughts and reasoning directly.
2. Manage the waiting process with your heart-let your mind change.
No matter how you supplement the title and conceive the article, you will always find that "what to wait for" is not the most important thing. What matters is the process of waiting, not the infinite richness of the inner world of the waiting person. Then carefully manage the psychological change process of waiting, so that waiting becomes an unknown process, an exploration process and an adventure process. Waiting is an unknown number.
3. Describe the waiting scene carefully-make the mind visible.
No matter how you write the composition title of Waiting, you can't avoid the rich and delicate activities in your inner world. The structural unit of narrative is "scene". If pen and ink focus on the inner psychological description, and only the statements from ideas to ideas are general, you will have an air-to-air ideological consumption war with readers. If we can consider transforming the internal psychological scene into an externally visible external scene, we can skillfully convey our deep feelings through image description.
Waiting for the sunset
I heard that the sunset on the sea in Sanya is beautiful. When we come to Sanya, we naturally want to see this rare spectacle. After four o'clock in the afternoon, we sat on the beach waiting for this moment.
The waves of the sea beat the golden beach slowly, heavily and clearly, with endless sea blue edges and small bubbles rising and falling. The bright sunshine broadens my horizons and makes my heart as wide and peaceful as the sea. In this beautiful environment, I just want to wait for the sunset quietly.
On the beach, several children are carving their works of art with sand. They use local materials, dig handfuls of sand from the beach, moisten them with seawater, and then wipe and rub them with their hands to shape them into their favorite appearance. A little dissatisfied, they shoveled up the sand next to them and sprinkled it on their works, carefully modifying their works. Many "small buildings" stand on the beach. Of course, there are still bumpy beaches. However, the beach doesn't care. After a big wave, the bunkers turned into smooth and natural depressions. With her broad tolerance and unique artistic creativity, seawater has turned the original defects into works of art. Looking at this beach, my heart is as clean as being washed.
I looked up at the sun, but it didn't seem to mean to set. Some people around me went swimming at the seaside. They rushed to the sea, and the waves came at them as a reaction. Finally, they bumped into each other and gave a loud slap and laughter. Some people stumbled back a few steps by the impact of the waves, others still stood there, enjoying the joy of victory, but they all rushed to the sea again without hesitation.
I don't know how long it took, but suddenly it was dark. Looking up, I saw that the sun had been covered by thick clouds, but she still stubbornly radiated dazzling light and seemed to smile apologetically at us. It's getting dark and the sun is disappearing, and everyone's face is a little disappointed. But I didn't. Although I didn't see the beautiful sunset, I enjoyed the beautiful scenery while waiting. In waiting, I gained inner enrichment. For me, this kind of waiting not only didn't make me depressed, but filled my heart with beauty and love for life.
People are the most beautiful scenery in the world. In the gradual change of the scene waiting for the sunset, what changes is the beach and people's mood; It is not only the beautiful sky that has changed, but also the thinking from scenery to emotion, which is based on emotion. In Shi Tianyi's works, there are no large golden beaches, blue waters and charming sunsets, only quiet and energetic activities by the sea. It is natural and appropriate that the emotion of "beauty and love for life" occurs and sublimates in the process of "waiting for the sunset".
When middle school students write tourist scenes, it is easy to fall into the mode of spreading scenery in a large area and pretending to dig deep into cultural details. In the process of waiting for the sunset, the young author expressed the emotional experience process of "magnificent seascape makes people calm", "broad sea soul makes people thorough" and "powerful waves make people erupt" with delicate brushstrokes, which made the article ups and downs and the content concrete and attractive. The author can grasp the subtle activities of the characters.
You can refer to this to write a general semi-propositional composition, which is such an idea.