If I love you-/I will never learn to climb the Campbell flower,/I will show off myself on your high branch;
/If I love you-/Never learn from spoony birds,/Repeat monotonous songs for the shade;
/It's not just like a fountain/It brings cool comfort all year round; /Not just like a dangerous mountain peak,
/increase your height,/set off your dignity. /even sunshine/even spring rain
No, these are not enough. I must be a kapok beside you.
/Stand with you as the image of a tree. /root, clenched in the ground;
/Leaves, lingering in the clouds. Every time a gust of wind blows, we greet each other.
But no one understands us. You have your copper branches and iron stems.
/Like a knife, like a sword, like a halberd; /I have my red flowers,/like a heavy sigh,
/Like a heroic torch/We share the cold wave and lightning;
/We * * * enjoy the misty rainbow; /seemingly separated forever, but they are dependent for life.
/This is great love,/Loyalty is here/Love/Not only your stalwart body,
/I also love your stand,/the land under your feet.
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Shu Ting's poems are novel in conception and full of lyrical colors. Exquisite language and distinctive personal style. To the Oak Tree is a beautiful and profound lyric poem of hers. The love it expresses is not only pure and hot, but also noble and great. It is like an old and fresh song, which touches people's heartstrings.
The fog wetted my wings.
But the wind won't make me hesitate any more.
Coast, dear coast
I just said goodbye to you yesterday.
You came again today.
Tomorrow we will be at
Meet at another latitude
This is a storm, a lamp.
Connect us together.
This is a storm, another lamp.
Let's divide things up again.
Not afraid of the ends of the earth
Is it morning or evening?
You are on my voyage.
I'm in your sight.
A beautiful poem is often a fusion of scenes. This is especially true of Shu Ting's brig. It seems that Shu Ting likes this little poem very much, and her first collection of poems is named after Mast Boat.
Mast Boat is a masterpiece in which the poet uses vague poems, symbols and images to express people's subjective feelings, thus developing human nature. The whole poem shows the poet's dual mentality and complex emotions. On the one hand, it is the "lamp" of ideal pursuit, on the other hand, it is the "shore" of love yearning. In the process of persistent pursuit of ideals, we sometimes meet with the other side, and sometimes we leave the other side, which is harmonious and contradictory. At the same time, in the process of pursuing ideals, poets sometimes feel the difficulty and heaviness of progress, and sometimes they feel a sense of urgency of the times without letting themselves stop. "The fog has wet my wings/but the wind won't make me hesitate." The emotion and mentality expressed in poetry are not only the poet's own and individual things, but also the things that young people in that particular era generally feel and cannot describe. The poet expressed it perfectly with her delicate heart and symbolic skills, making it a well-known masterpiece.
An important artistic feature of this poem is symbolism. In misty poetry, symbols mostly replace people's subjective feelings and social attitudes with concrete things and images that people can directly feel. In short, it is to express abstraction with concreteness. The poem entitled "Mast Ship" is a symbol. The purpose of the whole poem is not to describe an objective schooner, but to express the poet himself and his dual mentality and complex emotions through the concrete image of schooner. In other words, the poet thinks I'm like a schooner. The "double mast" in a brig has some profound meaning. The coexistence of two masts means that love and career in the poet's heart coexist but are different. In addition, "shore", "wind", "storm" and "lamp" in the poem all have obvious symbolic significance. "Shore" symbolizes the love destination of women, "wind" means that the urgency of the times gives the poet strength, "storm" implies the unusual times experienced by the poet and his contemporaries, and "lamp" carries bright faith.
The use of images is another important artistic feature of this poem. The so-called image is to express the poet's subjective mentality through external scenery. It is different from the "artistic conception" in traditional poetry. Artistic conception is generally touching the scene and expressing emotions through the scene, so as to achieve the artistic purpose of expressing emotions through the scene. In misty poetry, poets mostly take subjective feelings and people's various mentalities as the objects of expression, and imagine and construct some concrete pictures and scenery from subjective feelings, so as to visualize abstract emotions and achieve the effect of artistic expression. What the poet wants to express in "Double Mast Ship" is a state of mind, an emotion and an emotional process. On the other hand, it is the concrete images such as "ship", "shore", "storm" and "lamp" that fall on the language, and these concrete images are combined to form a complete picture of the dynamic process. Under the picture, the author's heart and true feelings are implied, beating. The poetic image is fresh and natural, which enables the poet to express his strong feelings freely.
What a sincere and delicate feeling. Sometimes I cry, sometimes I shake hands. Care for each other, remember each other and never forget. The whole poem gives people a crystal clear and bright feeling from every sentence. But on the whole, it is unpredictable, leaving readers with infinite room for aftertaste.
Because feelings hit the most appropriate attachment, every sentence of the poem can be said to be a pun. This is one of the most obvious artistic features of this poem.
In addition, the language of this poem is natural and fluent, and the feelings contained in the poem are dignified and delicate, with deep personal sighs and open feelings of the times. The last four poems: "Don't be afraid of the ends of the earth/seize the day/you are on my voyage/I am in your sight" are widely circulated and quoted as aphorisms.